Template talk:Did you know/Approved
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Section | # of Hooks | # Verified |
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July 5 | 1 | |
July 7 | 2 | 1 |
July 13 | 1 | 1 |
July 15 | 1 | |
July 16 | 1 | 1 |
July 17 | 2 | 2 |
July 18 | 3 | 1 |
July 19 | 4 | 1 |
July 21 | 1 | 1 |
July 22 | 1 | 1 |
July 23 | 2 | 1 |
July 24 | 4 | 2 |
July 25 | 6 | 4 |
July 26 | 6 | 3 |
July 27 | 5 | 4 |
July 28 | 13 | 8 |
July 29 | 6 | 4 |
July 30 | 4 | 1 |
July 31 | 2 | |
August 1 | 5 | 2 |
August 2 | 4 | 3 |
August 3 | 5 | 3 |
August 4 | 4 | 3 |
August 5 | 11 | 4 |
August 6 | 7 | 3 |
August 7 | 4 | 2 |
August 8 | 7 | 4 |
August 9 | 4 | 3 |
August 10 | 10 | 4 |
August 11 | 6 | 3 |
August 12 | 5 | 3 |
August 13 | 3 | 3 |
August 14 | 10 | 7 |
August 15 | 6 | 3 |
August 16 | 8 | 4 |
August 17 | 8 | 3 |
August 18 | 9 | 6 |
August 19 | 9 | 3 |
August 20 | 6 | 3 |
August 21 | 3 | 1 |
August 22 | 7 | 4 |
August 23 | 10 | 2 |
August 24 | 7 | 1 |
August 25 | 15 | 7 |
August 26 | 5 | |
August 27 | 9 | 5 |
August 28 | 11 | |
August 29 | 7 | |
August 30 | 10 | |
August 31 | 5 | |
September 1 | 1 | |
Total | 286 | 125 |
Last updated 07:52, 1 September 2024 UTC Current time is 08:46, 1 September 2024 UTC [refresh] |
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Nominations
Special occasion holding area
- Do not nominate articles in this section—nominate all articles in the nominations section on the regular nominations page, under the date on which the article was created or moved to mainspace, or the expansion began, or it was listed as a Good Article; be sure to indicate in the nomination any request for a specially timed appearance on the main page.
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- April Fools' Day hooks are exempted from the timeline limit; see Wikipedia:April Fool's Main Page/Did You Know.
- Note for promoters: please be sure to add an "invisible" comment after a hook when you've placed it in prep, noting that it's a special occasion hook and including the date it is supposed to run. This should keep the hook from being moved after promotion, as sometimes happens to hooks when a queue needs a slot filled or a prep set needs to be made more balanced by swapping hooks between preps.
Approved nominations
Articles created/expanded on July 7
Motibai Kapadia
- ... that Motibai Kapadia is credited as the first Indian female physician in Western medicine to have trained alongside men in India?
- ALT1: ... that the Indian female physician Motibai Kapadia was in charge of the Victoria Jubilee Hospital in Ahmedabad for 36 years from 1889? Source: "after returning from Britain, Kapadia was appointed in charge of the Victoria Jubilee Hospital for women, and remained there for 36 years."[5].
- Reviewed: ABC Cinema, Brighton
Whispyhistory (talk) 17:10, 11 July 2024 (UTC).
- @Whispyhistory:, "Scope-Journal.com" seems to be a hijacked journal. 48JCL 20:04, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thankyou... Whispyhistory (talk) 07:52, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
Article new enough (July 7), long enough (2300 B), sourced. ALT0 verified in source; can't access the source for ALT1, so assuming good faith. I think ALT0 is more interesting than ALT1. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 21:49, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
- I asked for insight on the DYK talk page because of the recent incorrect "first" hooks that have run. SL93 (talk) 21:40, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
- The problem with "the first Indian female physician in Western medicine to have trained alongside men in India" is that's an open-ended set. Nowhere do we have an authoritative list of every physician who ever trained in India. I'd be less concerned about something based on "Grant Medical College's first female graduate" because at least there, somebody could enumerate every person who has graduated from that school and look at each one. I assume that's what Kavitha Rao did, or at least she based her statement on somebody who did. RoySmith (talk) 13:02, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- Whispyhistory
A new hook is needed. SL93 (talk) 00:24, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that in 1884 Motibai Kapadia's father allowed her to study alongside men in India? "father allowed her to study medicine along with other male students" [6]
- Thank you all above. I took Rao's claim out as I found other women graduated from Grant before Kapadia and Rao doesn't state Indian. Kapadia may have been the only Indian female doctor in the whole of Gujarat for many years, but I can't find a reliable source. Other suggestions welcome. Whispyhistory (talk) 09:48, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
A new review is needed for ALT2. There is one week to go until WP:DYKTIMEOUT applies, so a prompt review before September 7th would be very much appreciated. Courtesy ping to Vigilantcosmicpenguin. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:47, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
ALT2 short enough, AGF cited, and interesting. Let's roll.--Launchballer 07:22, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Mary Jane Patterson
- ... that Mary Jane Patterson, descendant of previously enslaved mother, was the first African American woman to gain a BA degree, having taken a 'gentleman's course'?
- Sources: 1. Bishir, Catherine (2018). "Patterson, Henry J. (1805-1886) and John E. (1804-1880)" North Carolina Architects and Builders: A Bibliographical Dictionary and
- ALT1: ... that Mary Jane Patterson was the first Black principal of a famous high school in Washington DC? Source: Stewart, A (2013) First Class: The legacy of Dunbar, America's first Black Public School. Chicago. Ill: Lawrence Hill Books p 32
- Reviewed:
Balance person (talk) 11:52, 8 July 2024 (UTC).
Article was promoted to Good Article within the last couple of days, is easily long enough, well written and copiously referenced. In my opinion the original hook, about being the first to get a BA degree, is best - very interesting indeed. The fact is cited immediately after it, in the lead introduction, to a page hosted on the university website. If I was being picky I'd say the info about achieving a BA degree should be included in the main body of the article too, because the lead intro is normally a summary of the main article. But the GA reviewers didn't have an issue with this, so I'm happy to say good to go to the next stage. Sionk (talk) 17:59, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
- Balance person
"First person to do X" hooks are tricky, because we've found quite a few end up at WP:ERRORS with someone saying "well actually this person did it before". Is any other hook viable? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 10:59, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT0a: ... that Mary Jane Patterson, African American descendant of previously enslaved mother, gained a BA degree in 1862, having taken a 'gentleman's course'? proposed in this diff
- Balance person
- @Balance person and Sionk: Does the ALT0a hook work for you? Z1720 (talk) 00:54, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT0a hook is fine by me Balance person
I'm afraid I find ALT0a extremely clunky @Balance person:, and this would need to be rewritten. I also don't see how this passed WP:GA given that it fails MOS:PARA (I literally cannot read the first paragraph of Early life and education, and single-sentence paragraphs should be avoided).--Launchballer 12:47, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
- The article has been passed for GA status. If others do not feel ALTOa is right, perhaps we could go with ALT1. Or someone, perhaps you, could suggest an alternative wording for the clunky one? I actually don't know if I am supposed to be the only editor who should write the hooks or if others can help too, User:Launchballer Balance person (talk) 13:15, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
ALT0a looks fine to me. I can understand Airshipjungleman's concerns about the factual accuracy, considering it seems to be a claim from the college ("claimed to be" would not go amiss in the first paragraph). The date is a good addition. Unless someone challenges the GA status I would assume the article is legible enough for DYK. Good to go at last. Sionk (talk) 13:53, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
Lauchballer is right in saying the prose quality of the first paragraph has been substantially degraded since the GA review, and is now difficult to parse. ALT0a is also just ... weird: the phrase "descendant of ... mother", the missing definite articles, etc. Would suggest instead ALT0b: that Mary Jane Patterson, whose mother was an African American slave, gained a BA degree in 1862 having taken a "gentleman's course"? The issues with the article's prose still need to be resolved before the hook can run. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:51, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- I agree that ALT0b is better. I have substantially edited the first paragraph which had been altered to include new info and think it reads fine now. Open to more comments of course, as ever. Balance person (talk) 08:23, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- The article has been passed for GA status. If others do not feel ALTOa is right, perhaps we could go with ALT1. Or someone, perhaps you, could suggest an alternative wording for the clunky one? I actually don't know if I am supposed to be the only editor who should write the hooks or if others can help too, User:Launchballer Balance person (talk) 13:15, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer, AirshipJungleman29, and Balance person: This nomination is just over a week from timing out, are there still issues that need to be addressed or are they resolved? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:30, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- All fine with me. Balance person (talk) 07:03, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- This is just becoming frustrating. Let's get this fascinating DYK published in some form before we lose it. Sionk (talk) 09:46, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT0b is a rewording of ALT0a with no new information and should be approvable if you already have. I've taken out some stuff that wasn't really relevant, but it's a bit better now. @AirshipJungleman29:, your thoughts?--Launchballer 10:35, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
- I am keen to get this done so will say okay to the things you have taken out although actually I think they were relevant. No matter. Let's go? Balance person (talk) 16:30, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT0b is a rewording of ALT0a with no new information and should be approvable if you already have. I've taken out some stuff that wasn't really relevant, but it's a bit better now. @AirshipJungleman29:, your thoughts?--Launchballer 10:35, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
- This is just becoming frustrating. Let's get this fascinating DYK published in some form before we lose it. Sionk (talk) 09:46, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
- All fine with me. Balance person (talk) 07:03, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 13
Margaret Coe
- ... that seven paintings by impressionist painter Margaret Coe belong to the Oregon Legislative Assembly, including Crater Lake #2 (pictured) on display at the Oregon State Capitol?
- Source: Oregon Legislature, Public Art Archive
- ALT1: ... that Crater Lake #2 (pictured), on display at the Oregon State Capitol, was painted by Margaret Coe, the 8th great granddaughter of colonist Robert Coe? Source: Oregon Legislature, Robert Coe, Puritan, Olmstead, Henry King (2021). Olmsted genealogy, third-fourth supplement, 1923-28. Hassell Street Press. ISBN 1013458974., "Curtis Claire Coe". Statesman Journal. October 29, 1996.
- Reviewed: NA
- Comment: I'm partial to Alt1. I'm a historian, so I imagine Alt0 is more interesting to a general audience.
AnotherColonialHistorian (talk) 21:26, 13 July 2024 (UTC).
- Not a review, but are we sure that the impressionist painting by Coe is released under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International license? The source is offline, so it's difficult to check. I'm not sure if the Oregon Legislature and Coe would need to agree to jointly release the work in order for the license to be valid. Bremps... 19:04, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Updating with what I could find online. Ownership was transferred to the State of Oregon, per [7]. AnotherColonialHistorian (talk) 14:50, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Image eligibility:
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- Non-free file copyrighted by the artist.
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Overall: As an art student, I concur with the nominator that ALT1 is more interesting to that field, though agree that ALT0 is a hook more interesting to a general audience. I would suggest deciding to retain only 2 of the images in this article given its short length, and would propose between the 3 currently in use to forgo the Our Lives in Paint image as it does not seem particularly helpful for the reader's understanding of her work in a way that the paintings already cover. Trailblazer101 (talk) 23:22, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- The image cannot be used per Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Image in Prep 3. SL93 (talk) 18:10, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- Ah, I did not catch that. @AnotherColonialHistorian: You could crop an image of the subject from this YouTube video and upload it on Commons, as YouTube clips are allowed on the site. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Trailblazer101 (talk • contribs) 23:04, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 16
Sammy Virji
... that by May 2024, Sammy Virji had "scored a bit of a reputation as 'that DJ who's always smiling'"?Source: https://planetwoo.itv.com/posts/36-questions-sammy-virji-profileALT1: ... that Sammy Virji pranked Salute after making "Peach" with them?Source: https://djmag.com/features/sammy-virji-global-garage-phenomenon-interviewALT1a: ... how Sammy Virji pranked Salute after making "Peach" with them?(seeing as last month's most successful hook was a non-'that' hook)- ALT2: ... that Sammy Virji's father played trombone on "one of the most critically and commercially successful albums in both neo soul and popular music"? Source: per ALT1
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Voluntary war
Launchballer 15:34, 16 July 2024 (UTC).
- I shall review this. Storye book (talk) 08:57, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Thank you for this enjoyable article. I am impressed with the tables, all fully cited, and easy to understand.
- I have given the article a minor copyedit, which does not affect this DYK nom.
This nomination is good to go. All the hooks are fine and cited inline in the article. ALT1a preferred, because it is fun. Storye book (talk) 09:11, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- Which hooks are you approving @Storye book:?--Launchballer 18:07, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the prompt for that. I have added that info to the review above. Good luck and well done. Storye book (talk) 19:04, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
ALTS 1/1a have been removed from the article following my comment at WT:DYK. ALT0 is a bit promotionally-phrased considering the "always smiling" quote came from Virji himself, and ALT2 focuses on a different person. Any other ideas Launchballer? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:01, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Not yet refamiliarised myself with the article, but DJ Mag mentions him having a "signature smile" and a "thousand-lumen smile". One of those would work. (Possibly showing my ignorance of grammar, but where in that Planet Woo source does it say that's a quote from him?)--Launchballer 12:09, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that record producer Sammy Virji studied biology at Newcastle University and became involved in bassline at that time? (Sources: [8] and [9]) Someone else other than me will need to review this hook. Storye book (talk) 13:24, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Just noting that I have struck ALT0 as I am not arguing with a tag.--Launchballer 17:12, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT4: that the DJ Sammy Virji went viral on TikTok after cueing in a track with a rubber fish?--Launchballer 18:33, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- Just noting that I have struck ALT0 as I am not arguing with a tag.--Launchballer 17:12, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that record producer Sammy Virji studied biology at Newcastle University and became involved in bassline at that time? (Sources: [8] and [9]) Someone else other than me will need to review this hook. Storye book (talk) 13:24, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Not yet refamiliarised myself with the article, but DJ Mag mentions him having a "signature smile" and a "thousand-lumen smile". One of those would work. (Possibly showing my ignorance of grammar, but where in that Planet Woo source does it say that's a quote from him?)--Launchballer 12:09, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Tick for ALT4, which is fun and is cited next to the fact in the article. Storye book (talk) 07:12, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 17
The Eternaut
- ... that Héctor Germán Oesterheld (pictured) repurposed his initial plans for a sequel of the comic The Eternaut as a novel?
- Source: García, Fernando; Ostuni, Hernán (September 2002). "Historieta & Sociedad: El Eternauta" [Comic books & Society: The Eternaut] (PDF). Revista latinoamericana de estudios sobre la historieta (in Spanish). La Habana, Cuba: Pablo de la Torriente Editorial. Archived (PDF) from the original on 23 June 2023. Retrieved 22 June 2023.
Cambalachero (talk) 13:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC).
Article is long enough, promoted to GA on 17 July 2024, is well-referenced and presentable. I participated in the GA review though I was not the main reviewer and the work done there was thorough. I confirmed the hook used is cited properly, but maybe indicate the page number (131). The image is freely licensed (public-domain under Argentina photo copyright law). QPQ is also done. This looks like a good nomination. My only other thoughts are that there are plenty of alternate hooks that could be used based on the history of the work, but it might stray into being more about Oesterheld or Segunda parte than the work itself. (This is my first review - my bad if I missed anything obvious.) Reconrabbit 14:07, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, there are DYK nominations for the Eternaut 1969 (the one with Breccia) and the second part elsewhere. It would be repetitive to propose hooks based on them. Cambalachero (talk) 17:15, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- That makes sense. Then this hook works well for this work specifically. Reconrabbit 17:46, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, there are DYK nominations for the Eternaut 1969 (the one with Breccia) and the second part elsewhere. It would be repetitive to propose hooks based on them. Cambalachero (talk) 17:15, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Killing of Mohammad Bhar
- ... that Mohammad Bhar, a Palestinian man with Down syndrome and autism, was killed after a dog attack in the Gaza Strip during the Israel–Hamas war?
- ALT1 ... that a Palestinian man with Down syndrome and autism was killed after a dog attack in the Gaza Strip during the Israel–Hamas war?
Makeandtoss (talk) 10:16, 21 July 2024 (UTC).
not a full review, but I'm concerned that the article does not clearly separate what is known to be true and what is filled in by the family's story. It seems that actually verifiable information here is minimal. Also, I have WP:NEVENT concerns here. theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 04:18, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- All statements are attributed and the article fulfills the notability guideline of having received significant coverage in a diversity of RS. Makeandtoss (talk) 08:50, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
- Makeandtoss as I have never edited the article, can I go ahead and review this nomination? I'm involved in the ARBPIA area but I don't think that's a concern here, right? VR (Please ping on reply) 14:40, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
@Vice regent: there should be no issues. Makeandtoss (talk) 15:39, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: VR (Please ping on reply) 21:04, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
Might want to replace Israel–Hamas war with Israeli invasion of the Gaza Strip in the hook. I want to note that Earwig gave me violation possible. The pages with >10% possibility were: [10][11][12]. Nevertheless, can you replace the following phrases in the article with something equivalent:
- " being mauled by an Israeli military dog"
- "left Bhar in the house alone because there were soldiers injured in a rocket attack"
- "had to evacuate 15 times"
VR (Please ping on reply) 21:04, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Makeandtoss: use the "ping" template when replying and don't hesitate to post on my talk page. DYK's are time sensitive.VR (Please ping on reply) 21:05, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
@Vice regent: Rephrased as recommended. I would keep the Israel-Hamas war in the hook. Makeandtoss (talk) 09:46, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
- Ok, it looks good.
VR (Please ping on reply) 12:50, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
- Makeandtoss, surely "died after a dog attack", to match the article and RS, would be better? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 01:07, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: @Vice regent: = > ALT2 "... that Mohammad Bhar, a Palestinian man with Down syndrome and autism, died following a dog attack in the Gaza Strip during the Israel–Hamas war?" Makeandtoss (talk) 10:40, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- I support ALT2. I also added the tourniquet back to the lead for WP:NPOV, WP:BALASP and completeness. I would only support the nomination if the tourniquet or first aid is mentioned in the lead. Wafflefrites (talk) 13:30, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- Rather an odd place to make your stand on, but sure; it's not like it matters in the slightest. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:06, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- Neutrality is one of the DYK guidelines so if there are any concerns on neutrality, of course they should be brought up here. Wafflefrites (talk) 22:17, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Vice regent: Please check ALT2. Makeandtoss (talk) 08:49, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- Neutrality is one of the DYK guidelines so if there are any concerns on neutrality, of course they should be brought up here. Wafflefrites (talk) 22:17, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- Rather an odd place to make your stand on, but sure; it's not like it matters in the slightest. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:06, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- I support ALT2. I also added the tourniquet back to the lead for WP:NPOV, WP:BALASP and completeness. I would only support the nomination if the tourniquet or first aid is mentioned in the lead. Wafflefrites (talk) 13:30, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: @Vice regent: = > ALT2 "... that Mohammad Bhar, a Palestinian man with Down syndrome and autism, died following a dog attack in the Gaza Strip during the Israel–Hamas war?" Makeandtoss (talk) 10:40, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- If he assume his death was accidental then both Alt1 and Alt2 are neutral and fine, as it is common in American English to write both "died in a car accident"[13] and "killed in a car accident"[14].
VR (Please ping on reply) 11:03, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
- I also support “killed by a dog attack”. “killed after a dog attack” is not what happened. @Makeandtoss: in ALT1 and the original blurb, can you please change “after” to “by”? Wafflefrites (talk) 13:19, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Wafflefrites: @Vice regent: Done.: Alt final: that Mohammad Bhar, a Palestinian man with Down syndrome and autism, was killed by a dog attack in the Gaza Strip during the Israel–Hamas war? Makeandtoss (talk) 13:42, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- This looks good to me 👍. Both “killed by a dog attack” and “died after a dog attack” are accurate blurbs. Wafflefrites (talk) 13:55, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Wafflefrites: @Vice regent: Done.: Alt final: that Mohammad Bhar, a Palestinian man with Down syndrome and autism, was killed by a dog attack in the Gaza Strip during the Israel–Hamas war? Makeandtoss (talk) 13:42, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- I also support “killed by a dog attack”. “killed after a dog attack” is not what happened. @Makeandtoss: in ALT1 and the original blurb, can you please change “after” to “by”? Wafflefrites (talk) 13:19, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 18
Masada myth
- ... that although Israel honored 27 ancient Masada skeletons with a state funeral in 1969, the story of "freedom fighters' patriotic last stand" is now known to be a myth?
- Source: Ben-Yehuda, Nachman (1996). Masada Myth: Collective Memory and Mythmaking in Israel. University of Wisconsin Press. ISBN 978-0-299-14833-1, p. xxi: "The bones of twenty-seven humans found on Masada are brought to burial in an official state ceremony."; pages 241-243: "The affair began in October 1963… Immediately, there were newspaper reports to the effect that the remains were probably of the fighters of Masada, and a state burial ceremony was called for. This issue was raised in March 1967, once again, by the same Shlomo Lorentz of the ultra-Orthodox party Agudat Israel. In a blazing speech in the Knesset he demanded that the remains of the skeletons found on Masada should be given a Jewish burial. Mr. Aharon Yadlin, then the minister of culture and education, pointed out that the Jewish identity of the skeletons had not been established and suggested passing the whole issue on to one of the Knesset’s committees. His suggestion was accepted. In fact, the Knesset’s Committee on Culture and Education held a discussion with Yadin on this particular issue in February and March of 1968… On March 12, 1969, Yigael Yadin told Haaretz that he was opposed to a public burial ceremony. He stated that the evidence of the identity of the skeletons was not conclusive enough. He also stated that he believed that the bones were those of the people of Masada but that he lacked definitive proof. In response to this, the spokesman for the Ministry of Religious Affairs stated the next day, also in Haaretz, that “the heroes of Masada came there from Jerusalem and fought the war of the holy city; therefore, it is only natural that their bones would find their final resting place on the Mount of Olives, which was a Jewish cemetery during the days of the Second Temple…. on July 7, 1969, the skeletons that had been uncovered by Yadin’s excavations about five years earlier were brought to burial in a full and formal military ceremony near Masada, at a place called “the hill of the defenders… An impressive array of dignitaries (including Menachem Begin, Yigael Yadin, and Rabbi Shlomo Goren) were present at the burial ceremonies."
Onceinawhile (talk) 05:24, 18 July 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: 2603:7000:2101:AA00:A91E:FA5D:EAB2:D6B0 (talk) 09:26, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
I don't think this is that bad to deserve a cross, but you'll definitely want to add a cite to the first paragraph of Yadin's executions at minimum, and that's before interrogating any of the sources.--Launchballer 14:45, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @Launchballer: I have added a cross-ref (it had been referenced at the end of the paragraph, but the paragraph was then split in to two). Re the IP's comments, the citation quote gives all the info about the funeral, and the rest of his book is about the myth. I guess the IP is referring to the latter question. I can bring some more quotes if helpful.
- For context, all the sources in the article say essentially the same thing – there is only one known original source for this event, Josephus. The Israeli national myth version differs from that story in a number of significant ways. We can add some nuance to the words "is now known to be a myth" if that is helpful, but the underlying point is beyond doubt.
- Onceinawhile (talk) 16:28, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
- It's not a question of "nuance." There is no consensus - as incorrectly and blatantly stated - in RS refs that it "is now known to be a myth." That's simply fake news. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:A91E:FA5D:EAB2:D6B0 (talk) 21:10, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
- The wording that it "is now known to be a myth" is simply not supported by the source provided. Perhaps "believed by some to be a myth" or even better "described by one scholar as a myth" could be supported by the citation, but "is now known to be a myth" embellishes the source far beyond any justifiable limit. Alansohn (talk) 01:43, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
- What is the “it” you are referring to? Onceinawhile (talk) 06:36, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Alansohn: regarding your comment from a few weeks ago, a new section (Masada_myth#Decline) has now been added to the article as suggested by User:Uppagus. It includes a list of the notable scholars which published on this topic between 1975 and Nachman Ben-Yehuda's book in 1996, as given by Ben-Yehuda.
- I have read widely on this topic, including the most recent work by Jodi Magness, and can firmly confirm that there is no scholarly debate as to whether this specific narrative is a myth. Not a single dissenting voice. Onceinawhile (talk) 21:18, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
- What is the “it” you are referring to? Onceinawhile (talk) 06:36, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
- Once -- the statement is simply not supported by any of the refs. It's really that simple. Actually, this brings the entire article into question now that I consider it. Plus, it doesn't seem to warrant a standalone article at all. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:6043:6D87:AEA7:B5C8 (talk) 06:26, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- Belatedly noting that the article is at a (particularly bad-tempered) AfD, and this should go on hold until this is kept.--Launchballer 12:06, 30 July 2024 (UTC)
- Closed as no consensus. This does still sport a {{neutrality}} tag @Onceinawhile:, and I suggest this is actioned.--Launchballer 11:16, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Launchballer. The tag was added without explanation, and the editor who added it was asked to share their concerns on the talk page 10 days ago. I have pinged them again at Talk:Masada_myth#Ensuring_balance, so hopefully we should have clarity soon. Onceinawhile (talk) 17:39, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: it looks like there was no objection to removing the tag, as the pinged editors declined to comment. My sense is that enough people have now read the article and sources, and have come to understand the topic and its context. Onceinawhile (talk) 22:53, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
- There are POV issues with the article as it currently stands. I wrote a detailed, and yet partial explanation on the article's talk page.
- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uppagus (talk • contribs) 07:17, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Uppagus. I have responded on the talk page with proposed solutions. Onceinawhile (talk) 08:27, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
- What is the status of this nomination @Onceinawhile:?--Launchballer 07:27, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- Hi @Launchballer: it would be great to have a new reviewer look at this now. There was an initial aversion to the article by some editors - hence the AfD and subsequent talk page discussions. But these challenges have petered out as concerned editors found the time to read the underlying sourcing in detail, and it seems now to be clear to all that this is a well-covered subject with many decades of academic work underpinning it. The article has benefited from the additional scrutiny, which has made it even stronger. There is more work to do to continue to improve the article, but nothing that should impede us proceeding with the DYK review. Onceinawhile (talk) 16:33, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- What is the status of this nomination @Onceinawhile:?--Launchballer 07:27, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Uppagus. I have responded on the talk page with proposed solutions. Onceinawhile (talk) 08:27, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: it looks like there was no objection to removing the tag, as the pinged editors declined to comment. My sense is that enough people have now read the article and sources, and have come to understand the topic and its context. Onceinawhile (talk) 22:53, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks Launchballer. The tag was added without explanation, and the editor who added it was asked to share their concerns on the talk page 10 days ago. I have pinged them again at Talk:Masada_myth#Ensuring_balance, so hopefully we should have clarity soon. Onceinawhile (talk) 17:39, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- Closed as no consensus. This does still sport a {{neutrality}} tag @Onceinawhile:, and I suggest this is actioned.--Launchballer 11:16, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- Belatedly noting that the article is at a (particularly bad-tempered) AfD, and this should go on hold until this is kept.--Launchballer 12:06, 30 July 2024 (UTC)
- Once -- the statement is simply not supported by any of the refs. It's really that simple. Actually, this brings the entire article into question now that I consider it. Plus, it doesn't seem to warrant a standalone article at all. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:6043:6D87:AEA7:B5C8 (talk) 06:26, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
You have my sympathy, I had similar snorts when I brought Matty Healy here. (They even nixed my P05 article.) I'm looking at this now for the first time; it's certainly strongly worded but all its claims are backed up, so this should be fine. However, you do need an end-of-sentence citation for the hook.--Launchballer 10:32, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Onceinawhile: Should probably ping.--Launchballer 12:52, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @Launchballer: I enjoyed reading those articles you linked to. I am genuinely amazed that an article that has had almost 5 million views since you recreated it last year had all those delete votes.
- I have done some more work to the article,[15] including adding a further source which works neatly as an end-of-sentence citation for the hook (Sheldon 1998, p. 448: "The belief system he refers to is a myth created around the story of Masada and the Jewish fighters who committed suicide there at the end of the Great Jewish War against Rome in A.D. 73. The story, as Josephus tells it, is not one of heroism. The sicarii on Masada were simply an extremist group of terrorists who had never participated in the Jewish Revolt to begin with and had spent more time killing other Jews than fighting the Romans. Modern twentieth-century Zionists, however, took the original story, eliminated the more embarrassing parts (like the massacre of Jews at Ein Gedi by the sicarii), then used the remaining core to construct a "mythical narrative" of heroism, sacrifice, and national pride for modern Israelis." Every one of the 38 citations in the article contains a version of this statement, but this is a particularly direct one. Onceinawhile (talk) 01:38, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
(It's because it used to look like this and the 1975 Reddit didn't like it very much.) Hook now checks out - let's roll.--Launchballer 07:37, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Onceinawhile: Should probably ping.--Launchballer 12:52, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 19
Justiniano Borgoño
- ... that after being held as a prisoner of war for three months, Justiniano Borgoño's (pictured) release was brokered by an enemy general?
- Source: Grandes Forjadores del Perú (in Spanish) pp. 80–81.
- ALT1: ... that a bust of former President of Peru Justiniano Borgoño (pictured) was stolen from its pedestal by thieves? Source: https://rpp.pe/peru/la-libertad/trujillo-alameda-de-los-heroes-luce-deteriorada-y-sucia-noticia-1045116
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/M/T Petar Hektorović
Kimikel (talk) 02:54, 19 July 2024 (UTC).
- The page had 649 B of readable prose prior to expansion, and currently has 8755, so it has been successfully expanded over 5 times. WP:EARWIG says "Violation Unlikely". QPQ is done. Hooks are interesting. However, there is a problem with this nomination. The first hook is cited to a Google Doc that I cannot access. I don't know what the document is or if it's even reliable. With a better source this should be good to go.
Di (they-them) (talk) 18:33, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
- [16] I'm not sure why it didn't work the link didn't work the first time; it's not working for me either. This link is just the only available online upload, it is a real book with ISBN 9789972625503 (just so you know it's not just a random google file) Kimikel (talk) 22:08, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
Thank you, good to go! Di (they-them) (talk) 00:16, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 21
Walter Kirchhoff
- ... that operatic tenor Walter Kirchhoff (pictured) was also a military officer in the cavalry division of the Imperial German Army?
- Source: Kutsch, K. J.; Riemens, Leo (2003). "Kirchhoff, Walter". In Rost, Hansjörg (ed.). Grosses Sängerlexikon. K. G. Saur Verlag. p. 2387.
- ALT1: ... that operatic tenor Walter Kirchhoff (pictured) was also a German military officer who served as an adjutant to Wilhelm, German Crown Prince during World War I? Source: Kutsch, K. J.; Riemens, Leo (2003). "Kirchhoff, Walter". In Rost, Hansjörg (ed.). Grosses Sängerlexikon. K. G. Saur Verlag. p. 2387.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Matthew Wright (triathlete)
- Comment: Moved to main space on July 21. There is also a pic of Walter Kirchhoff in military uniform in the article that could be used if preferred. I have provided it here as well.
4meter4 (talk) 16:33, 21 July 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:42, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. AGF on the offline source. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:45, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 22
State Publishing House of Ukraine
- ... that 1920s belles-lettres books published by the State Publishing House of Ukraine (symbol depicted) would sell out much faster than similar books elsewhere in the Soviet Union in spite of the higher average price?
- Source: Bohdan Krawchenko. Social Change and National Consciousness in Twentieth Century Ukraine. Springer, 1987. pp. 95-96
Soman (talk) 12:17, 22 July 2024 (UTC).
- I'm reviewing this. BorgQueen (talk) 09:42, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Soman: I can't see the linked Google Books page. Can you quote the relevant passage here? BorgQueen (talk) 10:55, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Hi BorgQueen. The quote is "... Ukrainian publishers also meant that Ukrainian books on the average cost 10 per cent more than Russian publications ... [...] ... DVU's production , it is not difficult to see why the wider public's demand for Ukrainian books was never satisfied . 301 Taking belles lettres as an example , these books normally took one to one and a half years to sell out in the USSR . Most Ukrainian novels , however , sold their press runs in half that time.30" --Soman (talk) 23:35, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Soman: Thanks. I'd like to suggest
in spite of the higher average price
, which is I believe a more precise wording. Are you OK with the change? BorgQueen (talk) 01:52, 24 August 2024 (UTC)- Hi BorgQueen, sure, I'm ok with the change. Thanks, --Soman (talk) 11:06, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Soman: One more thing. The quote says
Ukrainian publishers also meant that Ukrainian books on the average cost 10 per cent more than Russian publications
so I believe the hook needs to say... would sell out much faster than similar Russian books in the Soviet Union ...
instead. BorgQueen (talk) 19:59, 24 August 2024 (UTC) - @Soman: pinging. BorgQueen (talk) 22:47, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, there is a little bit more material in the source. For example "The high cost of Ukrainian books was a constant theme of readers' complaints during that decade". Now, the source talks about 'Ukrainian' and 'Russian' books, but that isn't necessarily Ukrainian-language vs. Russian-language books. I think better to stick to the original wording. --Soman (talk) 00:06, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Very well. Approving the original hook, just having reworded it to
in spite of the higher average price
, as agreed. BorgQueen (talk) 00:44, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, there is a little bit more material in the source. For example "The high cost of Ukrainian books was a constant theme of readers' complaints during that decade". Now, the source talks about 'Ukrainian' and 'Russian' books, but that isn't necessarily Ukrainian-language vs. Russian-language books. I think better to stick to the original wording. --Soman (talk) 00:06, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Soman: One more thing. The quote says
- Hi BorgQueen, sure, I'm ok with the change. Thanks, --Soman (talk) 11:06, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Soman: Thanks. I'd like to suggest
- Hi BorgQueen. The quote is "... Ukrainian publishers also meant that Ukrainian books on the average cost 10 per cent more than Russian publications ... [...] ... DVU's production , it is not difficult to see why the wider public's demand for Ukrainian books was never satisfied . 301 Taking belles lettres as an example , these books normally took one to one and a half years to sell out in the USSR . Most Ukrainian novels , however , sold their press runs in half that time.30" --Soman (talk) 23:35, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 23
Vadym Sukharevsky
- ... that Badger is the first commander of Unmanned Systems Forces?
- Source: "Freshly installed as the head of Ukraine’s Unmanned Systems Forces, the first position of its kind in the world, Colonel Sukharevsky is shaping history once again." Vadym Sukharevsky, the man in charge of Ukraine’s drones
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The Daleks' Master Plan
- Comment: I have asked on the Ukrainian article for a better cite for the family info. As a native English speaker I cleaned up this translation from the Ukrainian article but please let me know if anything else is needed.
Chidgk1 (talk) 13:17, 23 July 2024 (UTC).
- I don't think this counts as a full review, but this nomination will not pass. The article is full of WP:PROSELINE, which is highly discouraged. The information about his family is inherently unverifiable to anyone who isn't you. How would readers check sources? I want to see this nomination go through, but that won't be possible without restructuring the article to remove the proseline and the family information. Bremps... 04:50, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Chidgk1: Please address the above.--Launchballer 18:18, 2 August 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry for slow reply - have been up in hills for a week and just got back a couple of hours ago. Have asked on talk page of Ukrainian article if they can find a better cite for the family details than the long video which is there now. Will fix proseline. Chidgk1 (talk) 18:37, 2 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Chidgk1: Please address the above.--Launchballer 18:18, 2 August 2024 (UTC)
Have made some changes - hope someone can now review this. Chidgk1 (talk) 08:10, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
It won't be me for a while as I review oldest first. I would suggest taking the ref out of the infobox and expanding/moving the Family single-sentence WP:PARAGRAPH, although these aren't DYK issues. Full review needed.--Launchballer 09:06, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for quick reply but I don’t understand why it is wrong to have a ref in an infobox. Re expanding I will leave it for a little while in the hope someone else might expand, but feel free to press me if they have not done so in a reasonable time. Chidgk1 (talk) 09:10, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- The relevant policy is MOS:INFOBOXREF, which I'm surprised to find says that they're acceptable in some cases. I would argue that both of the facts should be included in the main body.--Launchballer 09:36, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- OK thanks done Chidgk1 (talk) 15:11, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
Full review needed. (You can reinstate his birthdate when you have a source for it.)--Launchballer 19:29, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- OK thanks done Chidgk1 (talk) 15:11, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- The relevant policy is MOS:INFOBOXREF, which I'm surprised to find says that they're acceptable in some cases. I would argue that both of the facts should be included in the main body.--Launchballer 09:36, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for quick reply but I don’t understand why it is wrong to have a ref in an infobox. Re expanding I will leave it for a little while in the hope someone else might expand, but feel free to press me if they have not done so in a reasonable time. Chidgk1 (talk) 09:10, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: The Unmanned Systems Forces seems to be a Ukranian unit, so the "in the world" is largely unneeded (but not a DYK issue). And I can't promote it because it not nominated, but File:Вадим Сухаревський cropped.jpg would seem to be a valid photo; it's used, with a free license and clear at small size Cambalachero (talk) 19:59, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 24
Wolfman's Got Nards
- ... that the documentary Wolfman's Got Nards takes its title from a memorable line in the 1987 film The Monster Squad?
- Reviewed:
C F A 💬 22:48, 30 July 2024 (UTC).
CFA The article is long enough, new enough, and neutral with no copyright violations. A QPQ is not needed. There are a few problems. Ain't It Cool News and In The Seats don't appear to be reliable sources, and the Ain't It Cool News article was written under a username. For "although they were notably primarily from genre film outlets rather than mainstream media.", there would have to be a source that says such a statement. SL93 (talk) 23:31, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93: Ain't It Cool News is considered reliable per WP:NPPSG, though I agree that the username is suspicious. I don't see why In The Seats wouldn't be considered reliable, as they appear to have an editorial team. Regardless, the Alamo Drafthouse claim is also verifiable in the Entertainment Weekly article. I removed the mainstream media claim as unverifiable. Can't find where it came from. C F A 💬 00:12, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- CFA I didn't know that page existed. Does Ain't It Cool News contributors often use usernames that link to Twitter? As for In The Seats, it looks fine with the editors. SL93 (talk) 00:46, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
I looked through the website, and it's common. I am passing this. SL93 (talk) 00:48, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- CFA I didn't know that page existed. Does Ain't It Cool News contributors often use usernames that link to Twitter? As for In The Seats, it looks fine with the editors. SL93 (talk) 00:46, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- @SL93: Ain't It Cool News is considered reliable per WP:NPPSG, though I agree that the username is suspicious. I don't see why In The Seats wouldn't be considered reliable, as they appear to have an editorial team. Regardless, the Alamo Drafthouse claim is also verifiable in the Entertainment Weekly article. I removed the mainstream media claim as unverifiable. Can't find where it came from. C F A 💬 00:12, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Galena Schoolhouse
- ... that Galena Schoolhouse in South Dakota was once leased to a historical society for $1 annually?
- Source: "Galena School lease approved". Lead Daily Call. June 15, 1983. p. 1. Retrieved July 24, 2024 – via Newspapers.com.
SL93 (talk) 22:20, 24 July 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: @TCMemoire and SL93: Nice work. Optionally, I would include an inflation figure in the article, since $1 in 1983 is worth about $3.21 today (which is still a very good bargain though). However, that inflation figure isn't required for this nomination to be approved. Epicgenius (talk) 16:04, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: Thanks for the suggestion. I was today years old when I learned we have inflation templates, so I've added one per your suggestion. Thanks for the extremely quick turnaround and to @SL93: for seeing the value of this hook when I didn't give it a thought! – TCMemoire 20:24, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- I was also today years old when I found out about the inflation templates. SL93 (talk) 21:51, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 25
Malacchi Esdale
- ... that rugby sevens player Malacchi Esdale said the conditioning it took for him to play in the Olympics was "borderline crazy"?
- Source: The News Journal ("'The conditioning that you have to do to prepare yourself for this game is like, it's borderline crazy,' Esdale said.")
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Henry Charles Swan
- Comment: Realized I'm a bit late in nominating this; requesting a one-day extension as allowed by Wikipedia:Did you know/Guidelines.
BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:45, 2 August 2024 (UTC).
- BeanieFan11, since we are so behind in reviews that the Nominations page isn't fully transcluding, noting that your QPQ should be done by 9 August, seven days after nomination, with a stretch date to 12 August, seven days from now. Please be sure to get it done by then. Thanks! BlueMoonset (talk) 21:48, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
Full review needed now that QPQ has been submitted. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:31, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- General eligibility:
- New enough:
- A bit over seven days, but extension requested as per WP:DYKNEW.
- Long enough:
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Overall: A bit over seven days, but extension requested as per WP:DYKNEW. Looks good to me otherwise, but I've neither nominated nor reviewed before, so requesting that someone else check this over please. Perfect4th (talk) 04:29, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Perfect4th: The one-day lateness gap here is small but not too big, so it looks acceptable to me. ミラP@Miraclepine 16:15, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: If there are no remaining issues, would this be good to go and be ready for a tick? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:47, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Yes, nothing in the article has changed since the review and the only issue has been dealt with, so
ALT0. ミラP@Miraclepine 14:46, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Yes, nothing in the article has changed since the review and the only issue has been dealt with, so
- @Miraclepine: If there are no remaining issues, would this be good to go and be ready for a tick? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:47, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Bikers for Trump
... that despite raising over $427,000 in donations from 2021 to 2022, Bikers for Trump was $81,000 in debt by 2023?
- ALT1: ... that Chris Cox, the founder of Bikers for Trump, estimated that 70% of its members are former military? Source: https://www.cnn.com/2016/07/18/politics/bikers-for-trump-cleveland-protests-republican-convention/index.html
- Reviewed:
C F A 💬 20:43, 29 July 2024 (UTC).
- Starting review now. RoySmith (talk) 14:48, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- Article is new enough (mainspace on July 25, Nominated July 29) and long enough (2312 characters readable prose).
- The two images appear to be appropriately licensed.
- Earwig uncovers no copyright issues.
- QPQ exempt.
- This is not strictly about a candidate, but it's probably close enough that WP:DYKELECT should apply if this doesn't get published soon enough.
- Raw Story is listed as "generally unreliable". Other than that, the sourcing looks fine. Unfortunately, that's one of the two sources used to support the ALT0 hook fact. The other source is a FEC filing, and I'm honestly unsure if that's acceptable or not; somebody who is better versed on WP:RS and who knows how to read these FEC filings should take a look. ALT1 looks to be properly souced and interesting, so let's go with that.
- I know this wasn't submitted with an image, but File:BikersForTrump1.RollingThunder.WDC.29May2016 (27672036472).jpg would be great on the main page, so I suggest we use that.
ALT1 only approved. RoySmith (talk) 15:13, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
Józef Ignacy Kraszewski
- ... that 19th-century Polish writer Józef Ignacy Kraszewski (pictured) authored several hundred works, including over 200 novels, making him one of the most prolific writers in the world? Source: see https://books.google.com/books?id=R-MkT9vavwIC&q=The+History+of+Polish+Literature (p. 256, book available through Internet Archive as well) "the most prolific of Polish novelists left a work encompassing some seven hundren volumes - which must be reckoned among the highest outputs ever on the world scale" or https://books.google.com/books?id=9Tbed6iMNLEC&dq=%22J%C3%B3zef+Ignacy+Kraszewski%22+biography&pg=PA17 (page 17) "In the hands of [JIK], the historical novel assumed the proportions of a mass industry. In a liftetime of unpararelled productivity, Kraszewski wrote over five hundred works..." For the count of "over 200 novels", see sources cited in the first sentence and paragraph of section "Reception", where figure 223 is cited (I think we don't need a precise figure for the lead/hook)
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:42, 26 July 2024 (UTC).
Interesting quality biography, on fine sources, offline and foreign sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I approve the hook but am not happy with saying only something about quantity. I am open to something less repetitive (200 novels seem impressive enough) which might include "historic" novels, or a title, or that he also illustrated, or that he wrote series in collaboration, or some biographical aspect. Your choice. In the article, I'd appreciate less sandwiching of text between images. His first name is used The image of him is licensed (and if taken we could drop 19th-century as given by how it looks) but it is rather pale. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:22, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Could you suggest hooks directly? As ALT1, 2, etc.? I like your ideas but I am not sure I fully grasp it. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:53, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
- I could but not today, and then you'd need another reviewer. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:06, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Could you suggest hooks directly? As ALT1, 2, etc.? I like your ideas but I am not sure I fully grasp it. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:53, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
Morgan Library & Museum
- ... that during the Panic of 1907, the presidents of New York City's banks and trust companies were locked in the Pierpont Morgan Library? Source: Roth, Leland (1983). McKim, Mead & White, Architects. Harper & Row. p. 410.
- ALT1: ... that during some years, J. P. Morgan spent half his income on the Pierpont Morgan Library's collection? Source: Irwin, Will (April 10, 1927). "Morgan Island: On the Crest of Murray Hill Stands the One Perfect Great Thing on Manhattan Island-- The Morgan Library-- Whose Marble Walls Inclose Treasure More Valuable Than the Vault Contents of Most New York Banks". New York Herald Tribune. p. SM14.
- ALT2: ... that until 1991, the Morgan Library & Museum was so small that parts of its permanent collection had to be hidden every time it hosted a temporary exhibit? Source: Forgey, Benjamin (October 13, 1991). "At Home With J.P. Morgan; Expansion Allows More Art to Go on Public View". The Washington Post. p. G01
- ALT3: ... that until 1991, the Morgan Library & Museum's entire exhibition space consisted of two rooms and a corridor? Source: Lipson, Karin (October 1, 1991). "Expanded Facility Debuts Today a Bigger and Better Morgan Library". Newsday. p. 55.
- ALT4: ... that the stone contractor for the Morgan Library & Museum nearly went out of business because the library's builders would not use stones with cracks? Source: Conklin, Emily (October 10, 2019). "AN Gets up Close with McKim, Mead & White at the Morgan Library Restoration". The Architect's Newspaper.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Galena Schoolhouse
- Comment: I might come up with more hooks later.
Epicgenius (talk) 15:11, 25 July 2024 (UTC).
Substantial exquisite article about an exquisite place, on 360 (!) sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. A GA on its way to FA, I assume. Of the present hooks, I prefer ALT1, but none is impossible. I'd just quote "I want a gem." ;) - The image is licensed and shows a gem, - please let's have it, and the hook doesn't matter. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:29, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 26
Fede Vigevani
- ... that Fede Vigevani (pictured) is the most-subscribed Spanish-speaking YouTuber and has the 48th biggest YouTube channel in the world with over 54 million subscribers?
Sahaib (talk) 13:49, 27 July 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The nomination says "Created", but it was actually moved to mainspace the day before (after being moved early and then returned). Still valid as a new nomination. Cambalachero (talk) 20:00, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Grant Nel
- ... that when he was nine, Grant Nel (pictured) switched from gymnastics to diving as a result of breaking both of his hands?
- ALT1: ... that at the 2014 Commonwealth Games, Grant Nel (pictured) scored zero points on a dive where he slipped?
- Reviewed: [[]]
-1ctinus📝🗨 19:37, 26 July 2024 (UTC).
Great expansion! Article is long enough to run. Earwig gives no copyright other than the names of events themselves so that's good. I like ALT0, which is confirmed by the source. ALT1 might be seen as too "negative" for a BLP by some, so I'd rather have ALT0 promoted. QPQ not needed. Styyx (talk) 08:57, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
Zhong Jingwen
- ... that Zhong Jingwen co-founded China's first folklore society in 1927, and then another in 1983?
- Source: Liu, Xiaochan (2022). "A Centennial Overview of Folklore Studies at Sun Yat-sen University". Western Folklore. 81 (2/3): 163–176. https://www.jstor.org/stable/27152280. p. 164.
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:13, 26 July 2024 (UTC).
- QPQ is done, article is new enough and long enough, earwig returns a 0.0% chance of copying, and the hook is interesting. I don't have access to JSTOR right now so I will assume good faith on the sources. Seems good to me!
Di (they-them) (talk) 02:29, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 27
Kevin Mejía
- ... that Kevin Mejía was the sole Honduran medalist at both the 2015 and 2023 Pan American Games?
- Source: La Prensa (2015) and La Prensa (2023); also the only medalist listed at Honduras at the 2015 Pan American Games and Honduras at the 2023 Pan American Games
BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:25, 3 August 2024 (UTC).
Article is new. At 1671 characters it just passes the 1500 minimum, although I'm unsure full start class is warranted. The sources will need access-dates.I am unsure about the first couple of sentences, the source does not explicitly say the childhood was spent in Triunfo de la Cruz, and at any rate it does say he left to Tegucigalpa at 13 so he did some growing up there too. "hermanos" also does not mean only brothers, it is used for the group of both genders. Not a DYKcrit, but the fourth sentence should really spell out COH, and there is a disconnect between the lead sentence and the body regarding flag bearer or co-flag bearer. Regarding "bronze medal at the cadet world championships in Hungary", the source says he was in the cadet category, not that cadet was the name of the tournament (after a bit of research, probably the World Junior Wrestling Championships already mentioned in the next paragraph, in the 15-17 category).Haven't checked the other paragraphs, but moving onto the hook, I can't verify the 2015 portion from the source, may be missing it although it appears correct. That said it's not the most interesting hook, is there anything other than an athlete winning medals in the sources? QPQ needed. CMD (talk) 11:08, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: Please address the above and supply a QPQ. Z1720 (talk) 04:05, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
Closing, not ready for DYK. CMD (talk) 12:57, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
- Please give me until the end of the day. BeanieFan11 (talk) 13:53, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
Unclosing. CMD (talk) 15:42, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Chipmunkdavis: Apologies for the delay. QPQ is done. I made some changes ([17]), including clarifying COH, changing 'brothers' to 'one of five children', re-wording Triunfo de la Cruz, addressing the 'co' flagbearer, etc. Looking at the source again, I realize that it mentions, through Google Translate, "It is worth remembering that Mejía won the only silver medal in Honduras in the last XVII Pan American Games of Toronto 2015" – which is odd because from what I can find, they only had one medalist that year. Let me know if you'd like me to dig further to find one mentioning him as the 'sole' medalist. I did find that hook kind of interesting, but I can try to find another if you'd like. Thoughts? BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:40, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
- Hmm, more curiously, either you and I both missed this or it's been updated, but his year of birth is currently 1995. Confirmed here by his age, which also notes he was the only Honduran to enter the 2024 Olympics by qualifying, and the specific entry into the 97kg category could be mentioned. Also he has a son, and this source confirms a childhood in Triunfo de la Cruz and has a nice anecdote about selling spinning tops.Regarding the hook, the sources seem to put a lot of emphasis of him being the only qualifying Honduran. That's not too catchy either, but I understand the sports angle, perhaps one or two sports alts and a promoter may pick one. CMD (talk) 07:04, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- Corrected the age, will work on the other things tomorrow. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:46, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Chipmunkdavis: Sorry for taking so long. I added a bit to the article (spinning tops, son, qualifying, etc.). In addition to the original hook, I thought of these other potential ALTs:
- ALT1 ... that Kevin Mejía was the only Honduran to directly qualify for the 2024 Olympics?
- ALT2 ... that Kevin Mejía was the sole Honduran medalist at the 2015 and 2023 Pan American Games and the country's first-ever gold medalist at the Pan American Wrestling Championships? ([18])
- ALT3 ... that as a child, future Olympian Kevin Mejía sold spinning tops? BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:58, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- I think I like the spinning top aspect best. Think any of these work? BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:58, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
I think those work. I prefer ALT1 and ALT3, but ALT2 also checks out and is in the article. Up to the promoter. CMD (talk) 08:33, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Neary's
- ... that the Archbishop of New York, Cardinal Timothy M. Dolan, presided over the funeral of the owner of Neary's, an Irish pub where he was a regular?
- Source: Habeeb, Lee; Group, Vice President of Content at Salem Media; Stories", host of "Our American (September 19, 2022). "NYPD Shut Down City, Bridge for His Funeral and Named a Street After Him". Newsweek. Archived from the original on July 23, 2024. Retrieved July 27, 2024.
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has generic name (help) Vadukul, Alex (October 12, 2021). "Jimmy Neary, Whose Irish Pub Became a Power Brokers' Hub, Dies at 91". The New York Times. Archived from the original on July 22, 2024. Retrieved July 27, 2024.
- ALT1: ... that the New York City Police Department shut down highway and bridge traffic for the funeral of the owner of Neary's, an Irish pub? Source: Habeeb, Lee; Group, Vice President of Content at Salem Media; Stories", host of "Our American (September 19, 2022). "NYPD Shut Down City, Bridge for His Funeral and Named a Street After Him". Newsweek. Archived from the original on July 23, 2024. Retrieved July 27, 2024.
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has generic name (help) - Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mercer Art Gallery
voorts (talk/contributions) 23:26, 28 July 2024 (UTC).
New enough (July 27), long enough (2700 B), well-sourced, neutral. Hooks are verified in source and are interesting as they show how important the pub was. Approving both hooks. Also proposing an alt hook:
- ALT2: ... that customers at the Irish pub Neary's called its owner their "favorite leprechaun"? Source: [19]
— Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 17:11, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
Ai Uta
- ALT1: ... that Ai Uta ranked first on "heart-throbbing love songs that are perfect for autumn and will liven up your romance" survey conducted by Oricon? Source: https://www.oricon.co.jp/news/48377/full/
- Reviewed:
Warm Regards, Miminity (talk) (contribs) 05:18, 28 July 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Wow! "Ai Uta" is such a classic hit, so it's nice seeing an article for it. Article was nominated for DYK within the first 7 days of creation. It has over 1,500 words in prose. Citations are properly sourced. Earig picked up an unlikely copyright violation of 2.9%. Nominator has less than 5 nominations, so a QPQ is not needed at this time. Some suggestions outside of DYK nomination is to follow MOS:JAPAN#Titles of media, as I see some stylized capitalization (such as Greeeen's name). The ALT looks like it can be worked into something interesting, but the way it's currently worded feels a bit promotional. How about:
- ALT0a: ... that, in a 2007 survey done by Oricon, Japanese girls found the song "Ai Uta" by the band Greeeen to be a perfect love song for the autumn?"
- ALT2: ... that the record label for the Japanese band Greeeen specifically marketed the song "Ai Uta" to teenagers? lullabying (talk) 09:29, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Miminity: Hey there, I noticed you edited the nomination page, but we need a reply to verify whether the above issues have been addressed. lullabying (talk) 05:49, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Lullabying: Oh I reply to your message on my talk page. I thought as it was easy there but, Yes! I address the issue above, and change the Greeeeen's name to match MOS and use your suggested hook as I think they are better the mine. Warm Regards, Miminity (talk) (contribs) 05:53, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you!
Good to go. It's OK if you reply on your talk page, but in the future please make sure to reply to the nomination instead, as the message on the talk page was meant as a notification! lullabying (talk) 05:57, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you!
- @Lullabying: Oh I reply to your message on my talk page. I thought as it was easy there but, Yes! I address the issue above, and change the Greeeeen's name to match MOS and use your suggested hook as I think they are better the mine. Warm Regards, Miminity (talk) (contribs) 05:53, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Miminity: Hey there, I noticed you edited the nomination page, but we need a reply to verify whether the above issues have been addressed. lullabying (talk) 05:49, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
Durkee Fire
![A Bureau of Land Management vehicle at the Durkee Fire on July 21](http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/e/e1/BLM_at_the_Durkee_Fire_on_July_21.jpg/172px-BLM_at_the_Durkee_Fire_on_July_21.jpg)
- ... that the Durkee Fire (pictured) was started by a lightning strike in Baker County, Oregon? Source: "Durkee Fire". InciWeb. United States Forest Service. Retrieved 2024-07-26.
- ALT1: ... that the Durkee Fire (pictured) is classified as a megafire? Source: "Durkee Fire". InciWeb. United States Forest Service. Retrieved 2024-07-26.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Joan Ruth
- Comment: Thanks for the review!
Bsoyka (t • c • g) 04:23, 27 July 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: I googled how common fires caused by lightning strikes are and according to this source, they are responsible for 10% of global forest fires which makes it a bit less interesting. Sahaib (talk) 14:02, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 28
Roy Applequist
- ... that Roy Applequist worked in his father's farm equipment business before founding his own? Source: "Roy Applequist". Kansas Business Hall of Fame. 2010. Retrieved 2024-07-28.
ALT1: ... that Roy Applequist is in the Kansas Business Hall of Fame?Source: "Roy Applequist". Kansas Business Hall of Fame. 2010. Retrieved 2024-07-28.- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ecco2K
- Comment: Thanks for the review!
Bsoyka (t • c • g) 16:56, 28 July 2024 (UTC).
- alt1 is rejected for being unintersting (a lot of people on the list, and someone who doesn't know about it would not care). original hook is
. ltbdl☃ (talk) 06:05, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- ltbdl, Could you explain how the original hook is interesting per WP:DYKINT? I would have assumed that a person starting a farm equipment business would have prior experience in the farm equipment industry. (The lack of such a experience would be a interesting hook) Sohom (talk) 03:09, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- ok, i'm starting to have my doubts. maybe an alt about how he founded two farm equipment companies? ltbdl☃ (talk) 14:53, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe something like:
- ALT 2: ... that Roy Applequist received the No-Till Innovator Award for working on a new kind of seed drill?
- per [20] -- Sohom (talk) 04:23, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- ok, i'm starting to have my doubts. maybe an alt about how he founded two farm equipment companies? ltbdl☃ (talk) 14:53, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- ltbdl, Could you explain how the original hook is interesting per WP:DYKINT? I would have assumed that a person starting a farm equipment business would have prior experience in the farm equipment industry. (The lack of such a experience would be a interesting hook) Sohom (talk) 03:09, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Blair Colony
- ... that while recruiting for the Blair Colony, Betty Blair reportedly convinced potential settlers there were no flies in South Dakota?
- Source: Hascall, Randy (June 1, 2003). "The Last Descendant". Argus Leader. Rural Pierre. p. 4A. Retrieved July 29, 2024 – via Newspapers.com.
- ALT1: ... that Blair Colony was once one of the highest concentrations of African Americans in South Dakota? Source: Hascall, Randy (June 1, 2003). "The Last Descendant". Argus Leader. Rural Pierre. p. 4A. Retrieved July 29, 2024 – via Newspapers.com.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Diamond Lake, Illinois
- Comment: ALT0 is also supported by two other sources, Andrews 2014 and Koehler 2023 (timestamp 6:45).
– TCMemoire 18:13, 29 July 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:16, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. Prefer ALT0. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:30, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
Nicole Chang-Leng
- ... that "daughter" of the Seychelles Nicole Chang-Leng commanded an all-woman crew?
- Source: Joubert-Lawen, Rita (2022-11-04). Bonnelame, Betymie (ed.). "Seychelles' first female international flight captain passes away". Seychelles News Agency. Retrieved 2024-06-24.
"The country will remember her as a true daughter of our soil. May her family be given courage as they go through this difficult period. May her soul rest in peace," said Ramkalawan...Chang-Leng became the first woman to command an all-female flight crew as commander on a Seychelles-Mauritius flight on August 23, 2007
- "Passengers hail first all-female crew flight". Seychelles Nation. 2007-07-24. Retrieved 2024-07-30.
- ALT1: ... that Nicole Chang-Leng, described as "daughter" of the Seychelles by Wavel Ramkalawan, commanded an all-woman crew?
- ALT2: ... that Nicole Chang-Leng, described as "daughter" of the Seychelles by its president, commanded an all-woman crew?
- Reviewed: [[]]
- Comment: I provided in-text attribution for the "daughter of our soil" part within the article; I'm not sure if I need to provide it within the hook as well. I provided two alternative hooks just in case, but Seychellois presidents describing Chang-Leng as important is hardly controversial.
GreenLipstickLesbian (talk) 04:25, 31 July 2024 (UTC).
- Not a review, but "commanded an all-woman crew" makes limited sense without context, and I'd be inclined to truncate the hook at "Seychelles", e.g. ALT3: ... that Nicole Chang-Leng has been described as "daughter" of the Seychelles?.--Launchballer 21:03, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:23, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. I think Launchballer's suggestion is best given his mentioned concern, though if you prefer that the hook mention the all-woman crew, let me know. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:44, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
- (Guess who was offline when she got the watchlist notifications for this haha) But anyway, thank you @Launchballer: for the alternate hook and @BeanieFan11: for the review! I definitely tunnel-visioned a bit the sourcing for her being "first" wasn't as strong as I'd have liked it to be for a main-page hook, and while I'd obviously liked to have include the all-woman thing, I'm not sure it's going to work out. But, before this gets finalized, is there any objection to possibly changing the hook to "pilot Nicole Chang-Leng"? I think it might attract aviation enthusiasts, but I don't want to bog the hook down with excessive details. GreenLipstickLesbian (talk) 09:19, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- Let's see a hook.--Launchballer 09:26, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: ALT4: ... that airline pilot Nicole Chang-Leng has been described as "daughter" of the Seychelles? But then again, the entire point of Alt3 is that it makes the reader question why Chang-Leng has been described in this way. And I don't want to provide the answer within the hook, and while I can say that I'd, personally, be more inclined to read further if I knew she was a pilot, that's a pretty subjective opinion. GreenLipstickLesbian (talk) 09:32, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Yeah, I can tick that off. (How confident are we that the image is in fact Creative Commons, given that it appears in [21]? And if we are, would you like to submit it?)--Launchballer 09:43, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Brilliant, thanks! And concerning the image: I'm confident that Seychelles News Agency has permission to license certain Seychelles Nation images under various Creative Commons Licenses. The Seychelles News Agency regularly publishes (not reprints- actually originally publishes) Seychelles Nation photographs under a CC license; with other third party photos (social media photos, photos taken from other news agencies/government bodies), they're very scrupulous about marking them as all rights reserved. (see [22], [23], and [24] for examples of how they normally do it). I mean, it is theoretically possible that the Seychelles News Agency is just being incredibly callous about giving away images from one very particular news agency, but I'm going to say that I'm sure they have an agreement of some kind; there's no alternative that makes sense to me. I think we can assume good faith on their licensing, as much as we can assume good faith on any website with a solid record of providing attribution and correctly providing the license of so many images.
- And I would love to submit the picture- but I am afraid I have to say that I don't know how. Is there a guide I can read somewhere? GreenLipstickLesbian (talk) 10:17, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- Good for them. Perhaps The Sunday Times would like to follow their example. (I plan on 5xing Piri & Tommy in the near future and this is an excellent image.) I've added the image; my usual advice is 'find another nom that does it successfully and adapt it. (And you don't have to keep pinging me - I do watchlist noms!)--Launchballer 10:33, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: ALT4: ... that airline pilot Nicole Chang-Leng has been described as "daughter" of the Seychelles? But then again, the entire point of Alt3 is that it makes the reader question why Chang-Leng has been described in this way. And I don't want to provide the answer within the hook, and while I can say that I'd, personally, be more inclined to read further if I knew she was a pilot, that's a pretty subjective opinion. GreenLipstickLesbian (talk) 09:32, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
2024 Tel Aviv drone attack
- ... that the drone attack by Yemeni Houthis hit the target in Tel Aviv while no air raid siren sounded?
- Source: Al Jazeera, CNN
Mhhossein talk 06:59, 28 July 2024 (UTC).
- ALT1: ... that a drone attack by the Houthi military hit a target in Tel Aviv, but no sirens were activated? Al Jazeera
- Not reviewing, but proposing ALT1 above with different wording. Bsoyka (t • c • g) 17:38, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Aren't we supposed to have upbeat hooks? 2603:7000:2101:AA00:54B:36AA:A773:7A69 (talk) 21:43, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- Not necessarily, just interesting hooks. Even so, I'm not sure how one could make an "upbeat" hook out of a military drone attack. Bsoyka (t • c • g) 21:52, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- My point exactly. But I recall editors telling me we could not have hooks that are like this at DYK, because they were downbeat. The same reason we don't see hooks of interesting murders.2603:7000:2101:AA00:54B:36AA:A773:7A69 (talk) 22:00, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- I don't see that in our guidelines — take a look at WP:DYKINT. I've personally written about a murder and it was added to DYK. Perhaps you're thinking of our rule that hooks must use a neutral point of view? In this case, the hook may seem "downbeat" but it's very neutral, stating simple facts. On the other hand, "... that a terrible drone attack terrorized Tel Aviv?" would be unacceptable for its lack of neutrality. Bsoyka (t • c • g) 22:09, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- No -- I'm not thinking about NPOV. Perhaps one of the wise sages at DYK knows what I am referring to. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:54B:36AA:A773:7A69 (talk) 23:55, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- I don't see that in our guidelines — take a look at WP:DYKINT. I've personally written about a murder and it was added to DYK. Perhaps you're thinking of our rule that hooks must use a neutral point of view? In this case, the hook may seem "downbeat" but it's very neutral, stating simple facts. On the other hand, "... that a terrible drone attack terrorized Tel Aviv?" would be unacceptable for its lack of neutrality. Bsoyka (t • c • g) 22:09, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- My point exactly. But I recall editors telling me we could not have hooks that are like this at DYK, because they were downbeat. The same reason we don't see hooks of interesting murders.2603:7000:2101:AA00:54B:36AA:A773:7A69 (talk) 22:00, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- Not necessarily, just interesting hooks. Even so, I'm not sure how one could make an "upbeat" hook out of a military drone attack. Bsoyka (t • c • g) 21:52, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Aren't we supposed to have upbeat hooks? 2603:7000:2101:AA00:54B:36AA:A773:7A69 (talk) 21:43, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Earwig gives " Violation Unlikely, 15.3%". No major problems that I can see. Mhhossein has not yet completed QPQ. VR (Please ping on reply) 01:01, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review VR. QPQ is done now. --Mhhossein talk 13:04, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Vice regent: Is this approved? If not, what else needs to be done? Z1720 (talk) 04:16, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720: I didn't get Mhhossein's ping. Yes, it is approved now.VR (Please ping on reply) 04:23, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Vice regent: usually there should be a green tick mark by using {{subst:DYKyes}}, showing the final approval. You did not notice my previous ping due to improper ping by me, sorry. --Mhhossein talk 13:58, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720: I didn't get Mhhossein's ping. Yes, it is approved now.VR (Please ping on reply) 04:23, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Vice regent: Is this approved? If not, what else needs to be done? Z1720 (talk) 04:16, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
.VR (Please ping on reply) 14:16, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
Three Girls Revitalizing Asia
- ... that the fascist Empire of Japan created a girl group as propaganda?
- ALT1: ... that some of Japanese idol culture can be traced back to a girl group used to create fascist propaganda? Source: https://muse.jhu.edu/pub/23/article/910021
- Reviewed:
- Comment: Discovered this recently, the article is a bit short but fully cited
Microplastic Consumer (talk) 23:58, 28 July 2024 (UTC).
- I'll gladly take this nomination as I am interested in idol culture. lullabying (talk) 05:35, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Article was nominated within 7 days of creation. Unfortunately, it currently sits at 1,354 characters in prose and seems to be a stub, with all information crammed into the lead, so therefore it is too short to qualify for DYK. Earwig picked up an unlikely copyright violation of 1%. Nominator has less than 5 nominations so a QPQ is not required at this time. Should this pass, for a different variation of ALT1, I suggest, ALT2: "... that Three Girls Revitalizing Asia is credited with assigning a girl group member a representative role seen in modern Japanese idol culture?" lullabying (talk) 05:47, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Lullabying: I just checked the article with DYKcheck and it comes in at 1630 characters.--Launchballer 19:10, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you! I will change this to maybe.
The article still seems like a stub. Is it possible it can be formatted so it can properly have a lead and a body? lullabying (talk) 20:31, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you! I will change this to maybe.
It 100% can, I just don't have the time to do that at the moment, so please bare with me. Microplastic Consumer (talk) 22:10, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
- Sure thing. Ping me once you are done. lullabying (talk) 01:30, 30 July 2024 (UTC)
@lullabying It's done! Microplastic Consumer (talk) 03:33, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
- Looks good! Just to make it more consistent with a lot of idol group articles, I think it would be nice if "Koa sannin musume" was renamed "Career" and the members list was moved below it. Also, Saiko Okuyama's name needs to be in Western order per MOS:JAPAN as she was born after the Meiji Restoration. lullabying (talk) 01:33, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
I've taken your suggestions and it should look better, after deciding what blurb to use it should be ready. Microplastic Consumer (talk) 02:20, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
Good to go! lullabying (talk) 21:03, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
Christopher Columbus (Zador)
- ... that the opera Christopher Columbus was written by its Jewish composer in 1939 while he was sailing across the Atlantic Ocean to flee persecution from Nazi Germany?
- Source: Crawford, Dorothy Lamb (2009). A Windfall of Musicians: Hitler's Émigrés and Exiles in Southern California. Yale University Press. p. 19. ISBN 9780300155488.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Reggie Brown (wide receiver, born 1970)
- Comment: Special occasion holding area request: It would be cool to have this run on either October 8, 2024 (the 85th anniversary of the opera premiere) or on Columbus Day on October 14, 2024.
4meter4 (talk) 15:59, 28 July 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: @4meter4: I would support the special occasion request, but per WP:DYKSO those generally can't be made more than 6 weeks out without an exception at WT:DYK. Otherwise, all looks good to me (AGF on the book source). Bsoyka (t • c • g) 17:13, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
Maximiliane Brentano
- ... that Goethe used his unrequited love to Maximiliane Brentano (both pictured) as inspiration for his novel The Sorrows of Young Werther? Source: [25]: "verliebte sich Goethe sofort in ihre Tochter", "In den „Leiden des jungen Werthers“ verschmolz er Maximiliane mit einer anderen frühen Geliebten zur dunkeläugigen, kinderlieben und charakterschönen „Lotte“."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/1971 Swiss women's suffrage referendum
- Comment: Other hook ideas welcome. As mother of Clemens Brentano and Bettina von Arnim, Maximiliane is "the mother of German Romanticism" but I don't want a hook focussing only on her children.
—Kusma (talk) 10:36, 28 July 2024 (UTC).
- Page is long enough, was moved to mainspace recently enough, and QPQ is done. WP:EARWIG says "Violation Unlikely". Hook is interesting. I cannot read German, so I will assume good faith on the source. Overall, seems good to me!
Di (they-them) (talk) 12:23, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 29
Homer House
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that artist Winslow Homer, who made Homer House (pictured) historic, never lived in it?
- Source: https://www.harvardmagazine.com/2016/06/winslow-homers-early-days "The 1853 Homer House, an Italianate mansion that dominates a hill just above Belmont town center, is open for tours. ... Guided tours highlight the largely untouched original interior architecture, along with the life and early work of the couple’s nephew, Winslow Homer. ... He and his family lived nearby, but in a modest farmhouse (still standing and privately owned)..."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/DI MA-1 Mk. III
- Comment: Open to synonyms for "historic": "consequential"? "significant"? Our tried and true "notable"? Each would work, but have slightly different alternative meanings.
GRuban (talk) 13:26, 30 July 2024 (UTC).
- Alt1 ...that the cupola of Homer House (pictured) is part of a 19th-century cooling system?
- Sources: https://eu.wickedlocal.com/story/belmont-citizen-herald/2015/10/01/this-old-house-renovates/33376213007/ "Richard Trethewey gets a tour of the home’s original plumbing and cupola-- which acted as the cooling system of the 1853 mansion", https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZWzSei7_sJ0 (YouTube clip from This Old House programme)
TSventon (talk) 14:39, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
On the article talk page, User:TSventon points out that the article doesn't explicitly back the hook, by which I believe they mean that it doesn't explicitly say "Winslow Homer made Homer House historic". That is true, the sources mostly talk about the house by talking about it in the context of the life of the artist, which I think is the same thing, but if the reviewer disagrees, we can say:
- ALT2 ...
that artist Winslow Homer never lived in Homer House (pictured)?
--GRuban (talk) 14:10, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
- Just a comment on ALT2: he also never lived in my house either. Perhaps the hook could use some clarification of why it should be automatically connected to Winslow, despite his never having lived in it. Dahn (talk) 18:47, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- Your house isn't named "Homer House". But OK:
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that artist Winslow Homer drew Homer House (pictured) but never lived in it?
- ALT3 ...
- --GRuban (talk) 16:42, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewing... Flibirigit (talk) 21:12, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Article was moved to mainspace on July 29, and nominated on July 30. Length and sourcing are adequate. No plagiarism issues detected, and the article is neutral in tone. All images used in the article have a public domain license on the Commons. The nominated image is used in the article, clear at a low resolution, and enhances the hook. QPQ requirement is complete. I have struck ALT0 since it is not explicity mentioned in the article, and I cannot locate any source which says that Winslow Homer made the house famous. I have struck ALT2 and ALT3 for being not interesting to a broad audience. Something an artist did not do, is not going to generate interest in clicking on article about this house. ALT1 approved as the best hook proposed. It is interesting to a broad audience, it is about the house itself, properly mentioned and cited in the article, and verified by the source. I remain open to revisiting the nomination if other hooks are proposed. Best wishes! Flibirigit (talk) 00:50, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Canadian Premier League inaugural match
- ... that the Canadian Premier League inaugural match led to the suspension of both team captains?
- Source: Jacques, John (May 7, 2019). "Kyle Bekker Suspended By Canada Soccer For Di Chiara Incident". Northern Tribune. Archived from the original on July 11, 2024. Retrieved August 2, 2024. Bedakian, Armen (April 27, 2019). "Y9's Brennan consoles Aparicio after historic 1st CPL red card". Canadian Premier League. Archived from the original on July 13, 2024. Retrieved August 2, 2024.
- Reviewed:
I am wordsmyth (talk) 20:24, 2 August 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:28, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
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York9 finished sixth in the CPL's spring season and third in the fall season, ending the year third in the overall table.
BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:36, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
- @I am wordsmyth: Please address the above. Z1720 (talk) 19:42, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: Thank you for reviewing. I've now added a citation for that statement. I am wordsmyth (talk) 01:13, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
Premna microphylla
![leaves and flowers of Premna microphylla](http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/a/a0/Premna_microphylla.jpg/115px-Premna_microphylla.jpg)
- ... that tofu grows on trees (pictured)?
- Source: LI, Gang-feng; YAN, Hong-bo; KANG, Ming; WANG, Huan; HE, Zhi-jun; ZHOU, Qiang-ying; ZHANG, Hua-min (19 February 2017). "豆腐柴叶豆腐的加工工艺优化" [Optimization of Processing Technology of Premna microphylla Turcz Leaf Tofu]. 食品研究与开发 (in Chinese). 38 (14): 68–74. doi:10.3969/j.issn.1005-6521.2017.14.015. ISSN 1005-6521. Archived from the original on 6 July 2024. Retrieved 3 July 2024.
- ALT1: ... that a Premna microphylla plant (pictured) was an autonomous bonsai for an art installation?
- Source: Roth, Christopher; Malik, Suhail; Seidler, Paul; Rafferty, Penny; Noorizadeh, Bahar; Raesaar, Kristel (25 May 2022). REALTY Beyond the Traditional Blueprints of Art & Gentrification. Hatje Cantz Verlag GmbH. pp. 151–152. ISBN 9783775753432. OCLC 1372166991. Archived from the original on 21 May 2023. Retrieved 3 July 2024.
- terra0 (16 November 2018). "Premna Daemon — An Introduction via a History of Autonomy in the Cryptosphere". Medium. Archived from the original on 23 February 2024. Retrieved 3 July 2024.
- "terra0". github. Archived from the original on 6 July 2024. Retrieved 3 July 2024.
- "Premna Daemon – An Introduction via a History of Autonomy in the Cryptosphere". Info Institute. 9 November 2023. Archived from the original on 5 July 2024. Retrieved 3 July 2024.
- ALT2: ... that the leaves of Premna microphylla (pictured) are used to make a green jelly called Guanyin tofu? Source: LI, Mei-qing; WANG, Yuan-li; DONG, Ming; HE, Jin-ling (2011). "豆腐柴的研究与应用综述" [Summarization of research and application of Premna microphylla Turcz]. Science and Technology of Food Industry (in Chinese) (3): 462–464. doi:10.13386/j.issn1002-0306.2011.03.029. ISSN 1002-0306. Archived from the original on 3 July 2024. Retrieved 3 July 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Congenital anosmia
awkwafaba (📥) 20:54, 2 August 2024 (UTC).
- Starting review. On initial glance I feel the names section needs clean up. Inclusion of non-English vernacular names is a touchy subject with proponents both ways, so I won't outright say the section should be trimmed down. However, each name should not be an individual paragraph, as that's very close to shouting, especially with the bolding. Combining the single sentences into a paragraph will clean up the section and make it more legible.--Kevmin § 00:01, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- I debolded the alternative languages and combined the paragraphs. awkwafaba (📥) 17:22, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
Article expansion new enough and long enough. Article is well sourced and citations are neutrally presented where verifiable, some chinese and Japanese sources not accessible for me. All hooks are cited and sourced, with Alt2 taken agf. I would have suggested alt2 as the most unique but I cannot access the source. Alt1 is my recommendation, and it could be very interesting if the connection to Etherium blockchaining was added.--Kevmin § 18:13, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
- I debolded the alternative languages and combined the paragraphs. awkwafaba (📥) 17:22, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
Hyakuman-kai no "I Love You"
- ... that Hyakuman-kai no "I Love You" is a popular confession song in Japan?
- ALT1: ... that Hyakuman-kai no "I Love You" was used by people as encouragement after the 2011 Tōhoku earthquake and tsunami? Source: https://web.archive.org/web/20141120081237/http://mfound.jp/interview/mb/rake-futarihitotsu2.html
- Reviewed:
- Comment: For my ALT1, I use the archived link as the original link is dead.
Warm Regards, Miminity (talk) (contribs) 05:10, 29 July 2024 (UTC).
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Needs copyediting. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
23:43, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
- @TheNuggeteer: I'm done copy-editing, Just tell parts where it still there is still a problem and I'll fix it.
- Regarding your contributions, I will accept the article.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
09:11, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- Regarding your contributions, I will accept the article.
Articles created/expanded on July 30
Military-First Girls
- ... that the Military-First Girls are a Japanese girl group that performs North Korean pop songs?
- Source: 日本の北朝鮮ファンクラブ、「先軍女子」がダンス披露 [Japanese North Korea fan club 'Military First Girls' performs dances]. Reuters (in Japanese). 6 November 2017.
- ALT1: ... that fans of the Military-First Girls, a Japanese girl group that performs North Korean pop songs, are known as tongmu, meaning 'comrade'? Source: Mao, Yi (4 November 2017). 日本正妹哈北韓 先軍女孩爆紅 [Pretty Japanese girls, North Korea: Military-First Girls become famous]. Liberty Times (in Chinese (Taiwan)).
- ALT2: ... that the Japanese girl group Military-First Girls have compared their interest in North Korean music to other Japanese women's interest in K-pop and Taylor Swift? Source: ALT0 source and Osaki, Tomohiro (16 August 2017). "Drawn to North Korea's culture, Japanese internet star looks beyond the saber-rattling". The Japan Times. Archived from the original on 16 August 2017.
Yue🌙 00:45, 30 July 2024 (UTC).
This is a neat fact, I'll jump on this. Article is new and long enough, and QPQ is met. Reuters is a reliable source and the primary proposed hook is obviously uncontroversial. The first hook is definitely the most direct and interesting, though personally I'd word it in a more attention-grabbing way such as "...that there is a Japanese girl group that performs North Korean pop songs?", stating it less as a fact and more as an anecdote. Not a dealbreaker if you prefer it as is though, the hook is perfectly acceptable. My main concern is with the article itself. While it's mostly presentable, seems copyright free, and has adequate sourcing, I'm concerned about the accuracy of its framing of the topic. It calls them a girl group and states they do musical performances of Korean pop. However, most sources (both utilized and other general google results) appear to call them a fan club, and I can only find any reference to them doing dance, not singing. The Reuters sources cited for them performing music has a lot of photos where they appear to be dancing without any apparent microphones, and again calls them a fan club who are dancing. This also seems more consistent with their undefined scope of membership. If they are not in fact a musical act, this is a major flaw in the article and the hook, which directly touches on them as a pop act. Do you have any sources that confirm they do any singing and are considered to be a girl group? LittleLazyLass (Talk | Contributions) 05:16, 30 July 2024 (UTC)
- @LittleLazyLass: The Liberty Times article describes them as a "girl group" (女子團體), but it literally means "girl group" and does not refer to a singing act, specifically. I've also come to realise that my understanding of the term "girl group" differs from the definition given on Wikipedia and in most English-language dictionaries. If a girl group was defined by their performances of or to music as I had understood it, then all the sources given would imply this descriptor. However, since that is not the definition of a girl group, I will adjust the article and propose new hooks tomorrow to remedy the issues you have highlighted. Thank you for your help thus far. Yue🌙 07:04, 30 July 2024 (UTC)
- @LittleLazyLass: These adjustments should remedy the framing issues. As for the hook, here's a new one:
- ALT3: ... that the Military-First Girls have compared their interest in North Korean music to other women's interest in K-pop and Taylor Swift? Sources:
- 日本の北朝鮮ファンクラブ、「先軍女子」がダンス披露 [Japanese North Korea fan club 'Military First Girls' performs dances]. Reuters (in Japanese). 6 November 2017.
- Osaki, Tomohiro (16 August 2017). "Drawn to North Korea's culture, Japanese internet star looks beyond the saber-rattling". The Japan Times. Archived from the original on 16 August 2017.
- Let me know what you think. Yue🌙 23:30, 30 July 2024 (UTC)
- Much improved! I wouldn't say I see anything wrong with the hook or the article at this point, but I do think the new hook should still include reference to the fact they're Japanese as this is a significant contributor to the fact of them liking North Korean culture being striking. LittleLazyLass (Talk | Contributions) 06:40, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
- @LittleLazyLass: Thanks again for doing this review. Here's an adjusted hook:
- ALT4: ... that the Military-First Girls, a Japanese all-women fan club of the Moranbong Band, have compared their interest in North Korean music to other women's interest in K-pop and Taylor Swift?
- If you like it, please indicate your approval with a checkmark. Cheers! Yue🌙 06:49, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
- @LittleLazyLass: Thanks again for doing this review. Here's an adjusted hook:
- Much improved! I wouldn't say I see anything wrong with the hook or the article at this point, but I do think the new hook should still include reference to the fact they're Japanese as this is a significant contributor to the fact of them liking North Korean culture being striking. LittleLazyLass (Talk | Contributions) 06:40, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that the Military-First Girls have compared their interest in North Korean music to other women's interest in K-pop and Taylor Swift?
- @LittleLazyLass: These adjustments should remedy the framing issues. As for the hook, here's a new one:
- @LittleLazyLass: The Liberty Times article describes them as a "girl group" (女子團體), but it literally means "girl group" and does not refer to a singing act, specifically. I've also come to realise that my understanding of the term "girl group" differs from the definition given on Wikipedia and in most English-language dictionaries. If a girl group was defined by their performances of or to music as I had understood it, then all the sources given would imply this descriptor. However, since that is not the definition of a girl group, I will adjust the article and propose new hooks tomorrow to remedy the issues you have highlighted. Thank you for your help thus far. Yue🌙 07:04, 30 July 2024 (UTC)
- @LittleLazyLass: Is this approved? If not, what else needs to be done? Z1720 (talk) 00:28, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
Apologies! I thought I remembered closing this. Looks good now. LittleLazyLass (Talk | Contributions) 01:49, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
- @LittleLazyLass: Is this approved? If not, what else needs to be done? Z1720 (talk) 00:28, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 1
Yellow River Delta National Nature Reserve
- ... that the management zoning of the Yellow River Delta National Nature Reserve was partially designed around the needs of the Shengli Oil Field? Source: This condition may reflect the fact that the functional zoning map of the YRDNR represents a trade-off between wetland habitat protection and oil field development
CMD (talk) 14:43, 1 August 2024 (UTC). Note: Edited into a multi-nom, 2 QPQs included. CMD (talk) 11:23, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
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- I'm a little confused about the hook. Do you mean to say that the borders were laid out to minimize overlap between the reserve and the oil field? If so, then yeah, that is interesting.
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Overall: @Chipmunkdavis: Nice work on both articles. I had one question about the hook, though. Epicgenius (talk) 00:40, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius:, thanks for the review. You are essentially correct about the hook meaning, although it applies to both the overall border and the "core area" border. See Fig 1 here for the park map, and how if you take crane nests as an environmental proxy, there's a mismatch between park and environment. Oil operations also continued in the park, of the remaining overlap of oil wells, there are 94 in the core area, 35 in the buffer zone and 396 in the experimental zone. Is there a rewording that would help clarify the hook? CMD (talk) 07:32, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the response. I'd personally suggest something like "the borders of the Yellow River Delta National Nature Reserve were intended to minimize overlap with the Shengli Oil Field". Epicgenius (talk) 12:55, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the borders of the Yellow River Delta National Nature Reserve were drawn to minimize impact on the Shengli Oil Field?
- Sounds reasonable, borders can be internal. See ALT1. I'm looking for something stronger than "intended", as that may read as the intention not succeeding. CMD (talk) 13:20, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
ALT1 looks good to me. Epicgenius (talk) 14:01, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the response. I'd personally suggest something like "the borders of the Yellow River Delta National Nature Reserve were intended to minimize overlap with the Shengli Oil Field". Epicgenius (talk) 12:55, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Fantasy (Las Vegas show)
- ... that Fantasy is the topless production in Las Vegas with the longest duration at a single venue?
- Source: Kachelriess, Rob (2016-11-08). "The Best Topless Shows in Vegas". Thrillist. Archived from the original on 2024-08-01. Retrieved 2024-08-01.
The article notes: "In its 17th year, Fantasy is the longest-running topless show in Vegas to remain in one location."
Cunard (talk) 11:56, 1 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The hook problem is also a problem within the text of the article. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:C90F:5F27:BE03:9B87 (talk) 18:16, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
- The 8 November 2016 source says: "Fantasy: Luxor. In its 17th year, Fantasy is the longest-running topless show in Vegas to remain in one location." This 6 March 2023 article says, "Currently the longest-running female revue production on the Las Vegas Strip, the show has been rolling through performances at the Luxor for more than 23 years". This 1 July 2024 article verifies that Fantasy is still performed at the Luxor. Cunard (talk) 21:34, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks - the second ref, added to the first, does it for me.2603:7000:2101:AA00:C90F:5F27:BE03:9B87 (talk) 22:54, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 2
Kimi wa Bara yori Utsukushī
- ... that cosmetic companies Kanebo and Shiseido engaged in a "Rose War" concerning respective advertising campaigns based around the song "You're More Beautiful Than a Rose" and the film the Rose of Versailles?
- Source: Hamaguchi, Hideki (January 17, 2019). 40年前の本日1月17日、布施明「君は薔薇より美しい」が発売~79年の資生堂VSカネボウの“バラ戦争”を制す. Nippon Broadcasting News
IanTEB (talk) 21:22, 5 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Some suspicions of NPOV, but no subtle evidence. The source is Japanese, so the source is AGF. 04:29, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
Mark Robert Harrison
- ... that painter Mark Robert Harrison left Canada to run an unsuccessful steamboat service with his brother in Wisconsin?
- ALT1: ... that in 1846, the brother of painter Mark Robert Harrison died in a fire that broke out at one of Harrison's own exhibitions? Source: [28]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Talbot H. Green
Kimikel (talk) 00:56, 2 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Hook cited and interesting, so good to go. Alt1 is interesting but a bit morbid. Sahaib (talk) 08:23, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
Helen Hornbeck Tanner
- ... that Helen Hornbeck Tanner was part of a major case supporting the Ojibwe in front of the Supreme Court of the United States while in her 80s?
- Source: Brenda Child (September 1, 2011). "Helen Hornbeck Tanner (1916–2011)". American Historical Association. Retrieved August 2, 2024.
SL93 (talk) 22:35, 3 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: While earwig indicates 31.0% similarity, a review of the similar language indicates it is largely names and the like. Proposing editor may wish to consider proposing the photo for consideration. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:34AF:AC34:37AD:2505 (talk) 10:35, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- The image is used under fair use so that isn't possible. The main page can only feature free use images. SL93 (talk) 16:07, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 3
Republic Drug Store
- ... that the Republic Drug Store (building pictured) was formed from the consolidation of an estate and its competition?
- Source: (REF 2) Washington State Dept. of Archaeology & Historic Preservation "Slagle house" article 4th & 5th Paragraphs. "In 1904 he was sent to Republic ... to liquidate a drugstore that made up part of an estate"
- ALT1: ... that the Republic Drug Store (building pictured) was thought to be Washington state's oldest continually family run drugstore in 2003? Source: Source: Craig, J. (June 24, 2003). "Forecast calls for keen observer". The Spokesman-Review. Vol. 121, no. 14. p. B6. "...its believed to be the oldest drugstore in continuous family ownership in Washington..."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Scybalium fungiforme
- Comment: While the "Slagle house" article is in wordpress, it was published by an official part of the Washington State government, the Department of Archaeology & Historic Preservation and thus fulfils notability criteria. The information is also found in the Washington SP Slagle, Jesse W. & Elizabeth, House article of the National Register of Historic Places; Sect 8 page 3
Kevmin § 23:38, 3 August 2024 (UTC).
Reviewing... Flibirigit (talk) 20:35, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: The article was moved to the mainspace on August 3, and nominated on the same day. Length and sourcing are adequate. No plagiarism was detected. All images used in the article have a free license on the Commons. The nominated image is used in the article, is clear at a low resolution and enhances the hook. QPQ requirement is complete. The hooks are interesting, mentioned and cited in the article, and verified by the sources. My only concern is the extensive in-depth coverage of the Department of justice investigation. Could this be simplified or further paraphrased? The article appears to give a lot of weight to the investigation, making the article imbalanced due to WP:RECENTISM. Otherise I noted no concerns, and this is a welcome addition to Wikipedia. Flibirigit (talk) 21:00, 28 August 2024 (UTC) Flibirigit (talk) 21:00, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Flibirigit: I have gone through and trimmed down the amount of prose in the investigation section for clarity and brevity. The section is now under 1/3 of the total article prose.--Kevmin § 14:51, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Aprroving nomination with the trimmed prose for the investigation. Nomination adheres to all other DYK review as per my review above. Flibirigit (talk) 17:23, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
A. I. Namm & Son Department Store
- ... that an annex to the A. I. Namm & Son Department Store included artifacts from a church? Source: "Namm Store Opens Golden Jubilee Year Tomorrow". The Standard Union. January 29, 1926. p. 2.
- ALT1: ... that the A. I. Namm & Son Department Store was once described as one of the United States' largest cash-only department stores? Source: A. I. Namm & Son Department Store (PDF) (Report). New York City Landmarks Preservation Commission. March 15, 2005. p. 3
- ALT2: ... that although the A. I. Namm & Son Department Store was Brooklyn's third-largest department store in the 1950s, it was closed by the end of the decade? Source: "Namm's Marks 75th Year; Brooklyn Store Continues a Family Tradition". The New York Times. January 10, 1951; Eichelbaum, Fred (March 4, 1957). "Namm Loeser's Sale Total Put At $1½ Million: Bargain Hunters Lured". Women's Wear Daily. Vol. 94, no. 43. p. 3.
- ALT3: ... that it took five weeks to construct the frame of an annex to the A. I. Namm & Son Department Store? Source: "Namm's New Building Making Great Progress". The Standard Union.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/McLaren MCL60
- Comment: Any hook suggestions are much appreciated.
Epicgenius (talk) 20:35, 3 August 2024 (UTC).
New enough (August 1), long enough (22,000 B), well-sourced. All hooks cited inline. ALT0 and ALT1 verified in sources, ALT2 accepted in good faith. ALT3 not quite verified—the source says it took less than five weeks, so the phrasing in the article is okay but not the DYK hook. Approving ALT0, ALT1, ALT2. Preference for ALT0, which is the only one I really find interesting. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 22:46, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Sitting Bull and Buffalo Bill
- ... that one of the last photographs ever taken of Sitting Bull shows him side by side with Buffalo Bill?
- Source: Journal de Montréal (Évelyne Ferron, 19 May 2024) : « D’ailleurs, une de ses photographies les plus célèbres a été prise dans le grand studio montréalais William Notman & Son. Ces photographies sont d’autant plus importantes puisqu’elles sont parmi les dernières prises du grand chef sioux. » (French) = "In fact, one of the most famous photographs [of Sitting Bull] was taken in the great Montreal studio William Notman & Son. These photographs are especially important because they are some of the last ever taken of the great Sioux leader." (English)
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WikiFouf (talk) 22:58, 4 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Picture kind of blurry but accepted for historical reasons. The source is accepted in good faith because the source is French.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
11:22, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 4
East Timorese civil war
- ... that upon winning a civil war in Portuguese Timor, the Fretilin party repeatedly requested that Portuguese authorities return? Source: page 46: Fretilin continued to recognise Portuguese sovereignty over Timor-Leste, and repeatedly called on the Portuguese administration to return from Ataúro
- ALT1: ... that the UDT and Fretilin political parties of Portuguese Timor fought a civil war in the same year they had earlier formed a unified political coalition? Source: see year 1975
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Kevin Mejía
- Comment: Additional hook ideas welcome!
CMD (talk) 14:00, 4 August 2024 (UTC).
- Submitted a bit close to 11 August, but 11 September might be another notable date to run it, or 28 November if this languishes here awhile. Best, CMD (talk) 00:51, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:41, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: A very well done article. The only issue is that the statement for the hook –
The interim Fretilin administration repeatedly requested Portuguese authorities return to Dili from Atauro, and left the Governor's office vacant.
– needs a direct citation per Wikipedia:Did you know: the facts of the hook need to appear in the article with a citation no later than at the end of the sentences in which they appear.
Otherwise looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:02, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- Source duplicated. Best, CMD (talk) 01:09, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Jacob von Eggers
- ... that around the age of four, Jacob von Eggers (pictured) was deported to Arkhangelsk in Russia together with the entire German-speaking population of Tartu? Source: In Hohrath, 1999 (in German): "Als im Frühjar 1708 die deutschsprachige Bürgerschaft Dorpats deportiert wurde, gelangte der Dreijåhrige mit seiner Mutter nach Archangelsk". Note that other sources claim he was four, or around four, so I've written "around four".
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Healie
- Comment: Open to suggestion for ALT hooks, his biography is quite colourful.
Yakikaki (talk) 20:35, 4 August 2024 (UTC).
Article is new, and long enough. No copyvio issues in English language. The hook is interesting, and cited in a reliable source. The author has recently completed a QPQ review. Nice job! Chaiten1 (talk) 21:04, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
Owha
- ... that to avoid COVID-19 rule breaches, officials had to discourage people from posting a leopard seal's location online?
―Panamitsu (talk) 07:38, 5 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Everything looks good, but a little bothered by a Facebook source in the article.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
09:19, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 5
Rico Krieger
- ... that German national Rico Krieger was likely forced by the Belarusian KGB to lie in a state-televised plea titled "Confession of a German terrorist"? (Source)
- ALT1: ... that despite being the first foreigner to be charged as a mercenary in Belarus, Rico Krieger was likely never a member of the Kastuś Kalinoŭski Regiment? (Source 1 and Source 2)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sacred Heart Cathedral, Kaifeng
Johnson524 05:31, 10 August 2024 (UTC).
New enough and long enough. QPQ present. I think ALT0 needs to be changed to read "Belarusian KGB" (as people will see that and think Russia) and maybe "plea" instead of "plead". The hook facts check out. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:55, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Allison Reese
- ... that Allison Reese has been called "better at Kamala than Kamala is"? Source: Holtermann, Callie (2024-07-22). "A Kamala Harris Impersonator Is Ready for Her Moment". The New York Times. ISSN 0362-4331. Retrieved 2024-08-04.
"You're better at Kamala than Kamala is," a commenter wrote on one of her videos.
- ALT1: ... that comedian Allison Reese came out to her parents through a group text message? Source: Rodriguez, Alexander (2023-11-19). "Allison Reese is a Comedic Star on the Rise". Metrosource. ISSN 1529-935X. Retrieved 2024-08-04.
So, I just sent a group text. I was just like, "Hey, think I'm gay. That cool?" Several minutes went by and I was like, oh God. And my dad finally responded, "Yep, you're good." And that's truly it. And my mom called and was like, "Hey, I know you're doing comedy. Is that like a joke?" I was like, no, it's real. And she's like, "Okay!"
- ALT2: ... that Allison Reese has received millions of views on social media for her impressions of Kamala Harris? Source: Burnett, Erin (2024-08-03). "Meet comedian who went viral for her impression of Kamala Harris". Erin Burnett OutFront (Television production). CNN. 0:22. Retrieved 2024-08-04.
Her impressions of Harris have lit up social media, a few getting millions of views.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Alex Thach
- Comment: Thanks for reviewing! Definitely open to more hooks here, but I think ALT0 is the most intriguing one I can make.
- ALT1: ... that comedian Allison Reese came out to her parents through a group text message? Source: Rodriguez, Alexander (2023-11-19). "Allison Reese is a Comedic Star on the Rise". Metrosource. ISSN 1529-935X. Retrieved 2024-08-04.
Bsoyka (t • c • g) 03:23, 5 August 2024 (UTC).
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- If ALT1 is approved, then reference [1] needs to be repeated directly after the sentence "Soon after this, at the age of 22, she came out as a lesbian through a group text message to her parents, who were both supportive of her sexuality." This is necessary per WP:DYKHFC, which says "The facts of the hook in the article should be cited no later than the end of the sentence in which they appear."
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Overall: Bsoyka Nice work on this article. I think ALT0 is the most interesting as well, but ALT1 might also work. I'm not sure about ALT2, since many influencers get millions of views for whatever it is that they're known for. Epicgenius (talk) 19:11, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
One Room Angel
... that One Room Angel was a remake of Tomarigi, a short story Harada had drawn earlier in their career?
ALT1: ... that Shouta Aoi, who had played the angel in the audio drama of One Room Angel, also performed the theme song to its live-action television drama adaptation?Source: https://natalie.mu/comic/news/543743ALT2: ... that Avu-chan, a close friend of Harada's, composed the theme song for the live-action television drama adaptation of Harada's manga, One Room Angel?Source: https://natalie.mu/comic/news/543743- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Leak 04-13 (Bait Ones)
lullabying (talk) 05:49, 9 August 2024 (UTC).
Full review is to follow, but before doing so, I would suggest dropping ALT1 and ALT2 because both of them are rather specialist hooks that may require knowledge of Japanese media. The first hook is probably the only suitable option among the three as currently written, but it needs to be rephrased since it isn't clear that "Harada" is in fact the mangaka (after all, Harada is a common Japanese surname). My suggestion would be to change "Harada" to "its artist" since DYK hooks generally should avoid mentioning names of people without articles by name unless necessary. I'd also like to see other additional hook suggestions as while ALT0 is okayish, it's not the best out there and doesn't really scream "hooky". Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:49, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT0a: ... that One Room Angel was a remake of Tomarigi, a short story that the original creator had drawn earlier in their career?
ALT1a: ... that Shouta Aoi, who had portrayed a character in the audio drama of One Room Angel, also performed the theme song to its live-action television drama adaptation?ALT2a: ... that Queen Bee vocalist Avu-chan, a close friend of the creator of One Room Angel, wrote the theme song for its live-action drama adaptation?- Here are other suggestions! lullabying (talk) 01:48, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
- By new suggestions, I was thinking more of different facts altogether, as ALT1/ALT2 and their revisions probably are too specialist as written to meet DYKINT. I've struck the others, so for now only ALT0a is under consideration. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:52, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT4: ... that the angel's wings in the live-action television drama adaptation of One Room Angel took about a month to construct? (Source: https://thetv.jp/news/detail/1167425/)
- lullabying (talk) 03:32, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- By new suggestions, I was thinking more of different facts altogether, as ALT1/ALT2 and their revisions probably are too specialist as written to meet DYKINT. I've struck the others, so for now only ALT0a is under consideration. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:52, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
Article was nominated within seven days of creation. It meets the length requirements as well. I did not detect any close paraphrasing. A QPQ has been done. As the sources are largely in Japanese I will assume good faith on their reliability. Among the hooks, ALT4 is probably the best and appeals to the broadest audience. The source is in Japanese; however, a Google Translate TL confirms the information. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:10, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Parker Short
- ... that Parker Short (pictured) grew popular on social media for singing and dancing to Kendrick Lamar's "Not Like Us" as a rally for Kamala Harris? Source: Cohen, Danielle (2024-07-31). "This Guy Had the Time of His Life at the Kamala Rally". The Cut. Retrieved 2024-08-05.
Bsoyka (t • c • g) 20:24, 5 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Article is new enough, well sourced, hook is interesting and QPQ is completed. I don't see anything that would hold this back from DYK, so I approve. TheBritinator (talk) 16:22, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- While I personally don't see it actually going anywhere, I'm noting that there is now an AfD discussion regarding this article. Probably need to hold on promoting until this runs its course. Bsoyka (t • c • g) 23:46, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- And I'm noting that the AfD was withdrawn, so this should now be ready to roll per TheBritinator's review. (I have not checked it myself.)--Launchballer 19:30, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 6
Alexina Kublu
- ... that scholar, translator, Languages Commissioner, and first justice of the peace in Nunavut Alexina Kublu is her grandmother's father and her daughter's son?
- Source: First Justice of the Peace Source: [https://transreads.org/wp-content/uploads/2021/07/2021-07-23_60fa0ef1b4064_InuitStoriesofBeingandRebirthGenderShamanismandtheThirdSexbyDAnglureBernardSaladinz-lib.org_.pdf "Gifted with a striking personality, Kublu was
appointed the first justice of the peace in Nunavut."] Saladin d'Anglure, Bernard; Frost, Peter; Lévi-Strauss, Claude (2018). Inuit stories of being and rebirth: gender, shamanism, and the third sex (PDF). Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada: University of Manitoba Press. ISBN 978-0-88755-830-6. Retrieved 7 August 2024. Page 324.
Kinship source: "Kublu started life as an old man because she is her own great grandfather’. She explains: I am my paniq’s atatukulu. My paniq’s my grandmother . . . My grandmother is my paniq, which is daughter. I’m her atatukulu because I’m named after her stepfather. Her biological father was lost out at sea when she was a baby . . . The only father she knew was Kublu and so to her . . . he was her father. My younger daughter calls me inni (son), and I in turn, call her atatta (father). But first of all, I was always going to be Kublu because my atiq died before I was born . . . . My mother’s midwife . . . the first person who held me . . . told my mother that she wanted her son (Kublu) to live with her . . . my mother by name (told) my mother by birth that she wanted . . . to have her son living with her. So that’s how I became Kublu. (Alia 2005: 252) That tangled constellation of identities is virtually impossible for an outsider to comprehend." Alia, Valerie; Bull, Simone (2005). Media and Ethnic Minorities. Edinburgh University Press. pp. 100–101. ISBN 978-0-7486-2068-5. Retrieved 10 August 2024.- Reviewed: Jeffrey Veregge
- Comment: This is a complicated one, and a meaty article at that. I thank any reviewer well for their time and patience. This DYK is tied in with the concept of atiq or atiapik, this article by the Inuit Art Foundation explains the concept quite well.
To explain, as in the article, Inuit namesakes traditionally become the person they are named after. Kublu is named after her grandmother's stepfather and thus became the elder Kublu. Her daughter is named after her father, and thus Kublu's daughter is her father.
Ornithoptera (talk) 02:48, 10 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Wow, this is a very enticing hook! I think this could pull a lot of people in and teach them about this fascinating part of the Inuit kinship system. I've found no problems with the article; it is fully sourced, neutral and earwig only flags the long names of institutions.[29] Sources check out, so this is a very easy pass from me! Excellent work on this article, I enjoyed reading it. Grnrchst (talk) 11:49, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
National Hospital Service Reserve
- ... that in 1949 the UK's National Hospital Service Reserve (recruiting poster pictured) began recruiting volunteers to form a reserve of medically-trained personnel in case of war?
- Source: "Recruiting for the Corps, the Auxiliary Fire Service and the National Hospital Reserve Service started in late 1949" from: >"Greatcoat, one of the items of men's uniform items worn by a member of the National Hospital Service Reserve Wales in Cardiff". Peoples Collection Wales. Retrieved 26 July 2024. and as per ALT1.
- ALT1: ... that the British National Hospital Service Reserve (recruiting poster pictured) trained volunteers to carry out first aid in the aftermath of a nuclear or chemical attack? Source: "NHSR members attended training sessions and exercises with scenarios and casualty simulations, practising their first aid skills for a potential war which might involve nuclear or chemical weapons." from: "National Hospital Service Reserve helmet". British Red Cross collection online. Retrieved 26 July 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Henrik Johan Nauckhoff
Dumelow (talk) 14:14, 6 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: a) There is a "newness" problem, but perhaps you can explain it. b) I prefer Alt 1. c) as to the image, note that: "You must give appropriate credit, provide a link to the license, and indicate if changes were made. You may do so in any reasonable manner, but not in any way that suggests the licensor endorses you or your use." 2603:7000:2101:AA00:5DFC:4931:AA8F:8FB5 (talk) 22:52, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- Hi IP, thanks for the review. Sorry, this got mistakenly listed as "created" on 6 August. It should actually be "moved to mainspace" on that date. It was previously worked on in my userspace and was moved to mainspace on 6 August in this edit. This scenario is covered at Wikipedia:Did_you_know/Guidelines#Newness "For DYK purposes, an article is considered new if, within the last seven days the article has been ... moved from userspace or draftspace into mainspace". As to the image the license, origin and changes is available on the image page, this is reachable by clicking on it which has always been considered "reasonable" on Wikipedia. Thanks - Dumelow (talk) 06:10, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for your thoughtful and calm explanation. This sounds good to me - I'll just ask the promoter to double check me on it (since I'm not expert in this area), but I'll approve it. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:F1DD:10BF:ED62:6A15 (talk) 05:15, 8 August 2024 (UTC)
Slim Pickins
- ... that due to a lack of good men, Sabrina Carpenter settles for someone who does not know the difference between "their", "there", and "they are" in her song "Slim Pickins"?
- Source: Capital
- ALT1: ... that according to her "Slim Pickins" lyrics, Sabrina Carpenter intends to keep "moanin' and bitchin'" in the kitchen? Source: Capital
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Windy Zhan
NØ 17:56, 6 August 2024 (UTC).
- Hey there:
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Overall: — PerfectSoundWhatever (t; c) 18:52, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
- How does the source verify either of the hooks? The "lack of good men" part checks out, but the "their"/"there" etc. part is just referencing the lyrics. This is drawing a conclusion that the article doesn't state. Songs are often works of fiction, so I'm not comfortable with making these statements without a proper source. What's in the hook comes off as somewhere between synthesis and original research. I honestly have no idea what ALT1 means and its certainly not referenced in the article. The article only has the line "moanin' and bitchin'" and doesn't infer that Carpenter serves it in the kitchen: the lyrics do.
- I dislike the links. It's unclear to most readers except a few pop-culture stans that "a lack of good men" and "moanin' and bitchin'" will link to a Carpenter song. (MOS:EASTEREGG)
- Furthermore, I have doubts about the reliability of Capital. More than anything, it seems like a radio station, not a publication. The article comes off as somewhat sensationalist and low-quality. I can't find much on the author's credibility. Can you make a case for this source?
- The article looks fine otherwise. — PerfectSoundWhatever (t; c) 18:53, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
- PerfectSoundWhatever I have seen a lot of SZA songs, like this one for example, run with the article linked to the lyrics' text. The author of the Capital article did music journalism for MTV UK ([30], [31], [32], [33]) which is generally considered a high quality source. In any case, the hooks just pertain to lyrics which can be heard in videos shared in more reliable sources like NME and The Line of Best Fit. Here's
- ALT2: ... that Sabrina Carpenter randomly decided to sing the song "Slim Pickins" at the Grammy Museum several weeks before its release?--NØ 19:56, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
Changed hooks and ALT2 need a new review.--NØ 21:57, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, the wording/linking is much less ambiguous. The "in her song" of ALT0 fixes the issues I had with original research. Will check this.
— PerfectSoundWhatever (t; c) 23:41, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 7
Josh Katz
- ... that Australian Olympic judoka Josh Katz competed in the 2024 Paris Olympics six months after completely rupturing an ACL?
- Reviewed: Submarine Mining Service
- Comment: Nominated on behalf of an IP editor who will (as usual) provide the QPQ
- The QPQ has now been provided.2603:7000:2101:AA00:D997:A770:F85:5F4D (talk) 05:17, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
Schwede66 00:33, 9 August 2024 (UTC).
- Priority issue for the IP editor to fix (not reviewing yet): citation needed tag on birthdate. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:40, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
- User:Sammi Brie. Addressed. Thanks. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:D997:A770:F85:5F4D (talk) 04:39, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
Apologies for the 20-day delay in seeing this, as there was no valid ping. New enough and long enough. Hook fact checks out. (Encouragement: use citation templates next time!) QPQ is present as well. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:57, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- User:Sammi Brie. Addressed. Thanks. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:D997:A770:F85:5F4D (talk) 04:39, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
Dani Sanchez-Lopez
- ... that Spanish cinematographer Dani SaLo drew inspiration from Andrei Tarkovsky and Emmanuel Lubezki for his work on Virata Parvam and prefers shooting in real locations over studio environments? Source: https://www.newindianexpress.com/entertainment/telugu/2022/Jul/06/the-earthiness-of-virata-parvamcinematographer-dani-sanchez-lopez-discusses-unique-visual-choices-2473277.html
- ALT1: ... that Dani Sanchez-Lopez, who worked on the acclaimed film Mahanati, chose to shoot parts of the film on super 16mm film stock to authentically capture the essence of the 1980s South Indian cinema? Source: https://www.firstpost.com/entertainment/the-making-of-mahanati-cinematographer-dani-sanchez-lopez-talks-about-recreating-the-life-of-savitri-4466833.html
- ALT2: ... that Spanish cinematographer Dani Sanchez-Lopez, began his career in Asia due to limited opportunities in Los Angeles after graduating with his MFA degree from Dodge College of Film and Media Arts? Source: [34]
- Reviewed:
Jeraxmoira🐉 (talk) 20:44, 7 August 2024 (UTC).
New enough, (just) long enough, well cited, GTG. Maury Markowitz (talk) 11:28, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Jeraxmoira, the whole article confirms very closely with the prose-line anti-pattern. It would be nice to fix that issue before this hits the main page. (not particularly required for DYK) Sohom (talk) 03:38, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 8
Bergdorf Goodman Building
- ... that "New York's wealthiest janitor" lived atop the Bergdorf Goodman Building? Source: "Edwin Goodman, 76 Merchant, is Dead; Bergdorf Goodman Co-Founder Was Eminent in Fashions Became Partner at 24". The New York Times. August 20, 1953
- ALT1: ... that Bergdorf Goodman's president became a janitor so he could live atop the Bergdorf Goodman Building? Source: "Edwin Goodman, 76 Merchant, is Dead; Bergdorf Goodman Co-Founder Was Eminent in Fashions Became Partner at 24". The New York Times. August 20, 1953
- ALT2: ... that the Bergdorf Goodman Building's architecture was intended to evoke the design of the Cornelius Vanderbilt II House, which it replaced? Source: "Real Estate in City and Suburbs: $5,000,000 Vanderbilt Corner Lease Bergdorf & Goodman Co. Rents Building Planned for Fifth Ave. and 58th St. Part of Chateau Site". New York Herald Tribune. March 12, 1927. p. 24.
- ALT3: ... that Bergdorf Goodman originally did not want its store to become a New York City landmark because of concerns over tenants and mortgages? Source: Dash, Earl A. (March 25, 1971). "Broadway-Hale Buys Bergdorf's: Goodman Talked To Marcus,Liked Deal N-M Got: The Same Family". Women's Wear Daily. Vol. 122, no. 58. pp. 1, 11.
- ALT4: ... that the Bergdorf Goodman Building in New York City was designed to resemble "an elegant Parisian avenue"? Source: Bergdorf Goodman (PDF) (Report). New York City Landmarks Preservation Commission. December 13, 2016.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Drukqs
Epicgenius (talk) 14:26, 8 August 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:58, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Excellent work! Looks good. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:33, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
1917 Franco-Russian agreement
- ... that a 1917 agreement between France and Russia to support each others' post-war territorial ambitions was rendered void within days due to the February Revolution?
- Source: "one of the last acts of the Tsarist government was to agree with the French (11 March 1917) that, in return for recognising their claims to Alsace-Lorraine and the right to fix the eastern frontier, Russia received the right to determine her own western limits, that is, to include as much of Poland as she could reconquer, Fortunately this bargain did not survive the revolution of March 1917" from: Reddaway, W. F.; Penson, J. H.; Halecki, O.; Dyboski, R. (15 September 2016). The Cambridge History of Poland. Cambridge University Press. p. 485. ISBN 978-1-316-62003-8.
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... that in March 1917 France agreed to support Tsarist Russia's claim to as much of Poland as it could conquer?Source: as above - ALT2: ... that agreeing to a treaty with France on post-war territorial ambitions was one of the last acts of the government of Russian tsar Nicholas II? Source: as above
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Carl Ludvig Lithander
Dumelow (talk) 12:08, 8 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: I'm not sure I can support ALT1 because this seems like it could be a POV interpretation. The designation of territories as "Poland", "Russia", etc. was a key controversy in boundary disputes. I think the original hook is best. (t · c) buidhe 00:06, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
Henry Charles Swan
- ... that Henry Charles Swan, a law graduate at Oxford, spent more than 25 years living on a yacht in a stream in New Zealand?
- Reviewed:
Traumnovelle (talk) 06:56, 8 August 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:07, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:34, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
Submarine Mining Service
- ... that the uniform of the Hong Kong contingent of the Submarine Mining Service was designed by future British Army Lieutenant-General George Macdonogh (pictured)?
- Source: "George Macdonough, who designed the uniform for the unit in 1891, recalled that he based his design on 'that then worn by the Chinese Army" from: Kwong, Chi Man (2022). Hong Kongers in the British Armed Forces, 1860-1997. Oxford University Press. p. 40. ISBN 978-0-19-284574-0.
- ALT1: ... that in 1896 the Hong Kong Telegraph described the local detachment of the Submarine Mining Service as the only company of the British Army to wear a silk uniform? Source: "The Hong Kong Telegraph commented in 1896, 'Hongkongites have just reason to be proud of possessing the only company in the British Army clothed in silk, which distinction is enjoyed by the local Chinese Company of Sappers, their "full dress" being composed of that material ... . By emphasising the use of silk in the uniform of the Hong Kong submarine miners, the writer intentionally or unintentionally strengthened the hierarchy of races with the white men on top" from the same page as ALT0
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ri Jong-sik
- Comment: Using the first of two credits from the listed QPQ
Dumelow (talk) 21:00, 8 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: 1. I prefer ALT1. 2. DAB Chatham, and inline Portsmouth and Plymouth. 3. Not clear what a mortar boat is, but we have no wp article on it. 4. "in later life" is ambiguous in the image caption - later than what? 5. I think it's fine that the newspaper was likely incorrect, as this is a hook and accurate as to what was written by the paper. 6. I'm partial to the Oxford comma, but not everyone is, so I've not touched that, though I have made some copyedits. 7. I gatjer that the hook is likely supported by the ref following the sentence with the quote in the article, but perhaps it is good form to place the ref at the end of that particular sentence as well, given that it is the hook sentence. 8. I can't do a copyvio check, as the sources are not freely publicly available, so - promoter tell me if the rule is otherwise, - I assume i have to accept that there is no copyvio on good faith. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:D997:A770:F85:5F4D (talk) 04:54, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review and improvements to the article. I've made an edit to the article that I hope addresses all your comments, but let me know if any issues. I have linked gunboat for mortar boat, they would likely have been of the Arrow, Gleaner or Dapper class vessels but not sure which - Dumelow (talk) 07:57, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
- It all looks great. Best. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:24FC:2F14:7EA4:DEFB (talk) 10:00, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 9
El Eternauta: segunda parte
- ... that comic writer Héctor Germán Oesterheld was victim of an enforced disappearance while writing El Eternauta: segunda parte?
- Source: Alfredo Serra (July 22, 2019). "La trágica historia del hombre que creó El Eternauta: el más audaz e inolvidable de los cómics argentinos" [The tragic story of the man who created the Eternaut: the boldest and unforgettable Argentine comic] (in Spanish). Infobae. Retrieved August 9, 2024.
Cambalachero (talk) 17:49, 9 August 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:46, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
- Better wording: ALT1 ... while writing El Eternauta: segunda parte, Héctor Germán Oesterheld was murdered by the Argentine junta? (or disappeared instead of murdered? (t · c) buidhe 00:01, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Article looks good. My only concern is the hook states that it was
while writing
the story, whereas the article says he was a victim of an enforced disappearance shortly after ending the story.
Thoughts on this? BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:12, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
- Done. The problem was that I started writing "on the fly", and by logic, if the story is completed (the comic itself is) he must have been kidnapped after finishing it. And yet, it happened a year earlier. I then corrected the article when I realized that and sought sources with more detail, but I forgot to update the lead. As for the proposed ALT1, that doesn't seem like better wording to me. "Murdered" (a public figure by a national government) would suggest something more visible and/or public, like a firing squad execution, and just "disappeared" sounds like a magic trick. A hook should be understood on its own, without any other context at all. "enforced disappearance" is more precise and does not leave space for misunderstandings. Cambalachero (talk) 04:30, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
Earl de Grey, Kingston upon Hull
- ... that according to legend, after one of the Earl de Grey's parrots was killed, the other never spoke again?
- Source: Hull Daily Mail
- Reviewed:
-- D'n'B-t -- 19:49, 9 August 2024 (UTC).
Article was made on the 8th, so is new enough. At almost 1700 characters, it is long enough. The article properly uses in-line citations and the copyvio detector finds no issues from the sources used. The hook is interesting and properly cited in-line in the article. No QPQ is required. Looks good to go! SilverserenC 22:07, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
Donald MacKay (architect)
- ... that architect Donald MacKay designed a fire station which later burnt down in the Great Seattle Fire?
- Source: Rash, David A. (2014). "Donald MacKay". In Ochsner, Jeffery Karl (ed.). Shaping Seattle Architecture: A Historical Guide to the Architects (2nd ed.). University of Washington Press. pp. 40–45.
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 16:25, 10 August 2024 (UTC).
Hi Generalissima, review follows; article created 9 August and exceeds minimum length; article is well written; article is cited inline throughout to what look to be reliable sources for the subject matter; I didn't pick up any issues with close paraphrasing from the two online sources, AGF on the other two; hook fact is interesting and mentioned in the article, AGF on offline source; QPQ has been carried out. Looks fine to me - Dumelow (talk) 18:05, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 10
Lorena Peril
- ... that Lorena Peril, who once cleaned toilets at a nursing home, became the lead vocalist for the Las Vegas show Fantasy?
- Source:
- Katsilometes, John (2010-07-23). "In summoning a new star, did 'Fantasy' cross Bridges?". Las Vegas Sun. Archived from the original on 2024-08-10. Retrieved 2024-08-10.
The article notes: "Lorena Peril, long of Las Vegas stages and late of “Sin City Bad Girls” at the Las Vegas Hilton (the show closed this month), is joining “Fantasy” on Aug. 1 as the show’s primary singer, host and driving force."
- Fuentes, Zach (2024-02-09). "San Francisco native shares her journey from housekeeper to Las Vegas headliner". KGO-TV. Archived from the original on 2024-08-10. Retrieved 2024-08-10.
The article notes: "Before she became the star of the show, she was a housekeeper at a Bay Area nursing home. "I would just sing while pushing the cart, knocking on doors," she remembered. "Just sing while scrubbing the toilets. It was a lot of work.""
Cunard (talk) 11:16, 10 August 2024 (UTC).
In the past seven days the article was created, its readable prose was expanded at least fivefold, it was a previously unsourced biography of a living person (BLP) with its readable prose expanded at least twofold, or it was listed as a good article. It hasn't been featured on the Main Page's In the news section and hasn't previously appeared as a "qualifying article" in an earlier DYK. It contains at least 1,500 characters of readable prose and is not be a stub. The hook fact(s) is stated in the article, and is immediately followed by an inline citation to a reliable source. The article in general uses inline cited sources. Sources are properly labelled in a references section and the references do not have bare URLs. Any direct quotations have been marked as such and cited to a reliable source. The article contains no dispute templates. The article does not violate Wikipedia's policy on biographies of living people. The article does not contain plagiarism or close paraphrasing. The article deals with the subject in a neutral manner. The hook is properly formatted and is shorter than about 200 characters. The hook does not have neutrality problems or undue emphasis on a negative aspect of a living individual. There is no image. The hooky is probably just about hooky enough personally I would have gone with something about beating out 3,000 people to sing the national anthem but thats Cunard's choice.©Geni (talk) 02:55, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the in-depth review, Geni (talk · contribs)! Here is an alternative hook that incorporates your great hook suggestion:
- ALT1: ... that Lorena Peril, who once cleaned toilets at a nursing home, beat out over 3,000 people to sing the national anthem for the San Francisco 49ers?
- Cunard (talk) 00:12, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
supported by ref although technically it says over 3000.©Geni (talk) 00:42, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the in-depth review, Geni (talk · contribs)! Here is an alternative hook that incorporates your great hook suggestion:
Trust Issues
- ... that "Trust Issues" by Drake (pictured) was originally released in 2011 as a free download? Source: Ref: Drake slows down DJ Khaled’s “I’m on One” on “Trust Issues,” another new song released as a free download via his blog.
- Reviewed:
dxneo (talk) 16:40, 10 August 2024 (UTC).
hook not in article (t · c) buidhe 23:51, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
- buidhe, addressed
dxneo (talk) 02:40, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
- buidhe, addressed
GA promotion from yesterday. Articles about songs with free downloads might be a dime a dozen, but giving this a slight pass thanks to the eight-year stretch before its official re-release. --Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 05:22, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Dxneo and Slgrandson: if the eight year gap is what's interesting, might be worth including a reference to it in the hook? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:22, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29, will this do? There are plenty of sources on "Trust Issues" and Care Package and that eight year gap. dxneo (talk) 09:59, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- No, I meant referring to it in the hook. Apologies for the confusion. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 10:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you AirshipJungleman29, but unfortunately I don't know how I could squeeze in that "8 year gap" in the hook as I honestly don't see how anyone can miss it even if it's not literally mentioned. Any suggestions please? dxneo (talk) 01:07, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- No, I meant referring to it in the hook. Apologies for the confusion. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 10:03, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29, will this do? There are plenty of sources on "Trust Issues" and Care Package and that eight year gap. dxneo (talk) 09:59, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
La Nube
- ... that children's museum La Nube (pictured) includes a bus-washing exhibit?
- Source: Cortes Gonzalez, Maria (2024-04-16). "La Nube set to open Aug. 10: Sneak peek inside Downtown's latest museum". El Paso Times. Retrieved 2024-08-07.
Kids will be able to wash a bus, a nod to the original Greyhound bus washing station that existed years ago on the same property
- ALT1: ... that children's museum La Nube (pictured) caught on fire during its construction? Source: Golden, Lianna (2023-03-14). "Safety concerns surrounding cloud shape of La Nube children's museum arise after fire". KDBC. El Paso, Texas. Retrieved 2024-08-08.
Safety concerns surrounding the structure of the La Nube children's museum in downtown El Paso are surfacing after the building caught on fire Monday.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Abortion in Togo
- Comment: Thanks for reviewing!
Bsoyka (t • c • g) 13:00, 12 August 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:58, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:27, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
Kaylee Bryson
- ... that Kaylee Bryson was the first female driver to advance to the A-Main feature race at the Chili Bowl Nationals?
- Source: Racer
Bcschneider53 (talk) 02:21, 11 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: All looks good! Was very interesting reading about Bryson and I think the hook will grab people as well. DYK is often wary about publishing hooks about "firsts" but the cited source seems to be pretty clear about this. Grnrchst (talk) 11:39, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 11
Niall Ó Glacáin
- ... that in the 1620s, Irish physician Niall Ó Glacáin (pictured) worked as a travelling plague doctor in Southern France?
- Reviewed:
SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 06:02, 11 August 2024 (UTC).
Article became a GA on 11 August. It is long enough, well-sourced with inline citations, neutral, and without copyvio problems. The hook is good and sourced in the Spain and France section. Image is freely licensed and used in the article. No QPQ needed. - JuneGloom07 Talk 03:40, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Pioneer Fire
- ... that most residents in Stehekin, Washington, refused to evacuate from the approaching Pioneer Fire? Source: NBC News
- Reviewed: Flag of North Korea
SounderBruce 05:53, 11 August 2024 (UTC).
- Will claim this for review and hope to finish with it soon. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 06:56, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
Article was created on time and is free from close paraphrasing. The hook is cited inline in the article, meets DYKINT, and is verified in the source. The statement about structures being wrapped in protective foil is not stated by text in the source, but pictures are shown which do show foil, so that works for me. Several statements cited to the Wenatchee World article are not in the current version of the article, such as the mention of Team 13. In addition, the article says that the fire may have "originated from a human-caused structure fire", but The Seattle Times only mentioned that the fire was "human-caused" with no mention of structures; the sentence also uses the Wenatchee World as a source and that too does not mention a "structure". A QPQ has also yet to be provided.
- I also have to note that the Wildfire.gov link gives me a 403 Forbidden error, but I'm not sure if it's down or if it's inaccessible outside the US. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:33, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- @SounderBruce and Narutolovehinata5: Archived copy of that source. This should probably be added to the article.--Launchballer 10:09, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, that definitely has to be resolved in addition to the other sourcing issues. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 14:46, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: The confusion seems to be from my use of the Seattle Times reprint of the story, which I have added. The InciWeb profile works for me in the U.S., so it is probably blocked in certain countries. QPQ has also been added. SounderBruce 01:46, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
Thank you, I think that satisfies all my concerns. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:11, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- @SounderBruce and Narutolovehinata5: Archived copy of that source. This should probably be added to the article.--Launchballer 10:09, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
Storm Ulysses
- ... that in England, the 1903 Storm Ulysses overturned a train and badly damaged Morecambe's West End Pier (pictured)?
- Source: "A pier in Morecambe was damaged, and a train in Cumbria was blown over." from: "1903 Ulysses Storm among windiest ever in British Isles". BBC News. 24 April 2023. Retrieved 9 August 2024. The other source in the article details that the pier was broken in two places, which I think is enough for the qualifier "badly"
- ALT1: ... that the 1903 Storm Ulysses (damage pictured) was so named because its effects were described in James Joyce's novel of the same name? Source: "Storm Ulysses is so called because it inspired a passage in James Joyce's famous novel Ulysses." from same source as above
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ri Jong-sik
- Comment: QPQ is last of two from that linked
Dumelow (talk) 21:13, 11 August 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing. —Kusma (talk) 15:57, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- I think the image is by T. H. Stephenson, who is probably dead for over 70 years. (Compare the signature here). So it might be PD in the UK?
- New enough, long enough, not copyvio (Earwig just finds direct quotes which are OK). Sourced nicely and neutral, no other policy issues. Hooks are sourced and interesting. I personally prefer ALT0 because we don't seem to have information on who called it "Ulysses". The image is just about OK at the size, certainly PD in the US and probably PD in the UK. QPQ has been done.
—Kusma (talk) 16:05, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 12
National Hotel (Chișinău)
- ... that Chișinău's National Hotel was once a flagship property but is now effectively abandoned?
- Source: NYT
- ALT1: ... that The New York Times said that Chișinău's effectively abandoned National Hotel is "a study in the post-Soviet dysfunctions of one of Europe’s poorest countries"? Source: NYT
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Tattarisuo case
Ed [talk] [OMT] 02:57, 13 August 2024 (UTC).
Hook is interesting, assuming good faith on NYT sourcing because I do not have a subscription, QPQ is done, Earwig's is clean. ―Panamitsu (talk) 07:53, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Fan wiki
- ... that some editors left Wikipedia to form Wookieepedia, a Star Wars franchise fan wiki, because other editors complained that they were including too much information in Star Wars articles?
- Source: Jones, Henry (2021). "Wikis". In Baker, Mona; Blaagaard, Bolette B.; Jones, Henry; Pérez-González, Luis (eds.). The Routledge Encyclopedia of Citizen Media. Critical Perspectives in Citizen Media (ebook ed.). London: Routledge. ISBN 978-1-315-61981-1.
- ALT1: ... that some fan wikis document fan fiction? Source: Mittell, Jason (2013). "Wikis and Participatory Fandom". In Delwiche, Aaron; Henderson, Jennifer Jacobs (eds.). The Participatory Cultures Handbook (ebook ed.). New York: Routledge. pp. 40–41. ISBN 978-0-203-11792-7.
- ALT2: ... that the Star Trek Beyond writers Simon Pegg and Doug Jung consulted the Star Trek fan wiki Memory Alpha and its administrators during the film's production? Source: Comerford, Chris (November 2018). "Participatory Toolboxes: Franchise Fan Wikis as Tools of Textual Production" (PDF). Participations. 15 (2): 286–287.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Iktara (song)
voorts (talk/contributions) 21:28, 17 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Fun article that meets all of the necessary criteria; AGF on the book sources, as I can't quite seem to get ebook access. I prefer ALT1 and ALT0 slightly behind it; ALT0 might be navel-gazing, but works fine, while ALT2 is a bit too wordy and includes too many links that bury the actual article. SounderBruce 03:21, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I agree that ALT1 is probably the best; it's pithy and actually about the article topic writ large, instead of just an example. voorts (talk/contributions) 19:11, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Tattarisuo case
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- ... that the mutilated body parts found in the spring of Tattarisuo (pictured) in 1931 were used to practice black magic?
- Reviewed:
Juustila (talk) 08:37, 12 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Nice work on a neglected topic.
I don't speak Finnish but verified the source with DeepL Translator. Well done! BorgQueen (talk) 09:55, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
Actually, I got carried away. I was copyediting the article myself and then realized that I was getting too involved to be objective. I'd like another reviewer. BorgQueen (talk) 18:38, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
Looks mainly good. I also verified the source and added an explicit mention of black magic into the article body per that source. I don't like that the coven mention is confined only to the lead, where it is unreferenced, and I don't see that word used in the source. I might recommend removing it, or I'm open to hearing a counterargument. Ed [talk] [OMT] 02:54, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Juustila: pinging. BorgQueen (talk) 08:41, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Ed and BorgQueen: I changed that word "coven" to "small group". Of course, let me know if it doesn't sound better to you either. Juustila (talk) 10:41, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- @The ed17: pinging. BorgQueen (talk) 15:28, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Ed and BorgQueen: I changed that word "coven" to "small group". Of course, let me know if it doesn't sound better to you either. Juustila (talk) 10:41, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Juustila: pinging. BorgQueen (talk) 08:41, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 13
Xiphophorus signum
- ... that Xiphophorus signum (pictured) is the only swordtail to be particular about with which swordtail species it mates?
- Source: "With the possible exception of X. signum, all species of Xiphophorus can be hybridized with each other in the laboratory." [35]
Surtsicna (talk) 21:47, 13 August 2024 (UTC).
Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 18:50, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Nominated five days after creation and size is 1822 B. Figuring out if ref 4 supported the text and hook needed an extra minute of thought, but the article is overall in good shape. ミラP@Miraclepine 19:08, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, Miraclepine. Wording the article text and the hook to match what the source says took me more than a minute, I must say. Surtsicna (talk) 21:04, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
Cry Baby (Clean Bandit, Anne-Marie and David Guetta song)
- ... that €40,000 worth of equipment and cash was stolen during the filming of Clean Bandit's 2024 single "Cry Baby"? Source: https://mixmag.net/read/clean-bandit-robbed-40000-euros-music-equipment-ibiza-news
Launchballer 12:50, 13 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: References were spot-checked for verification; no issues arose. Yue🌙 07:38, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
- There are a bunch of hooks in this BBC piece published this morning. Not planning on taking on anything substantial until I've finished with Talk:Megan Barton-Hanson/GA1 and Template:Did you know nominations/Kayangan Lake, but will ping you if I find anything else.--Launchballer 08:13, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- On closer reading of that source, the Tuborg stuff would make a good hook for one of their albums, so no need.--Launchballer 13:32, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Syrian literature
... that illegal reprints of Syrian literature are a reason for the low number of books published?
- ALT1: ... that contemporary Syrian literature has been partly inspired by torture and civil war? Source: https://www.aljazeera.com/features/2013/9/8/a-new-poetry-emerges-from-syrias-civil-war
ALT2: ... that many women writers have contributed to the development of Syrian literature?Source: Firat, Alexa (2017). Syria. In: Waïl S. Hassan (ed.): The Oxford Handbook of Arab Novelistic Traditions (online edition) Oxford Academic, Oxford, pp. 439–454, https://doi.org/10.1093/oxfordhb/9780199349791.013.29- ALT3: ... that scholar Mohja Kahf stated that there is no Syrian literature? Source: Kahf, Mohja (2001). The Silences of Contemporary Syrian Literature. World Literature Today. 75(2), pp. 224–236. doi:10.2307/40156522; https://www.aljazeera.com/features/2013/9/8/a-new-poetry-emerges-from-syrias-civil-war
- Reviewed: Josep-Lluís Serrano Pentinat
- Comment: A recent GA providing an overview of the national literature of Syria.
Munfarid1 (talk) 16:36, 13 August 2024 (UTC).
- Comments: @Munfarid1: I'm reviewing this. But I think ALT1 should be avoided, as it's about a particular work, not the Syrian literature as a whole. BorgQueen (talk) 09:45, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for your interest and this comment. I have just deleted the earlier ALT1 and renumbered the others Munfarid1 (talk) 13:58, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- Comments: ALT0 isn't accurate. In the source article, Samar Haddad says (translated into English):
There's a trend towards making PDFs of books available as free downloads on websites. We publishers are directly affected because it's a lost opportunity to sell a book, but there's not much we can do about it. I once chatted with a young man who has a Facebook page, with a funny name in Arabic [Abu Abdo the Mule], that distributes free PDFs of books. (...) I know people who have stopped reading free copies after we've explained to them that they're harming us and the authors too. But such understanding people are rare. The thing that hurts the most about the subject is that people easily save money to buy stupid things, but not books.
She says nothing about the low number of books getting published because of that. BorgQueen (talk) 19:07, 14 August 2024 (UTC) - Comments: I've reworded ALT1. The Al Jazeera news article supports the war and torture part; while it mentions the threat of imprisonment the poets are facing, it doesn't explicitly say imprisonment is a source of inspiration. In addition, the source talks about contemporary Syrian poetry, which is only one aspect of the national literature, so I added "partly". BorgQueen (talk) 19:27, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- Comments: I've struck ALT2 as there's nothing unusual about many women contributing to literature. Perhaps you could argue that Syria is an extremely male-dominated society and that makes it unusual and interesting, but our readers won't get that cultural context from the hook. BorgQueen (talk) 20:08, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- Comments: I've reworded ALT3 as well. The rationale behind Mohja Kahf's declaration of Syrian literature not existing is rather complicated actually, involving several linguistic, historical and geopolitical factors. I don't think what is written in the 2013 news article can be used to prove that Mohja Kahf completely revoked the previous statement. BorgQueen (talk) 20:26, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Munfarid1: Are you OK with the changes? If so, I'll go ahead with the rest of the review. BorgQueen (talk) 20:31, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- @BorgQueen: Sure, I am OK. Thanks for reading these hooks so carefully. As you known, sometimes it is hard to find a good hook supported by the exact wording of a source. So ALT1 seems best to me. Munfarid1 (talk) 22:13, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Munfarid1: Are you OK with the changes? If so, I'll go ahead with the rest of the review. BorgQueen (talk) 20:31, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Approve ALT1 and ALT3 only. BorgQueen (talk) 22:42, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 14
ComicBook.com
- ... that Paramount Global sold the entertainment news website ComicBook.com to its former CEO Sam Savage as part of its plan to divest assets and achieve $500 million in cost savings?
- ALT1: ... that the entertainment news website ComicBook.com runs a podcast focused on Marvel Comics and the Marvel Cinematic Universe called Phase Zero? Source: https://comicbook.com/marvel/news/phase-zero-marvel-podcast-mcu-series/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Margaret Coe
Trailblazer101 (talk) 00:04, 20 August 2024 (UTC).
- I'd like to suggest an ALT2 for consideration:
... that ComicBook.com originally began as a website with sales links and press releases related to comic books before becoming an entertainment news site?
Source: https://bleedingcool.com/comics/paramount-sells-comicbook-com-popculture-com-to-savage-ventures/ - Favre1fan93 (talk) 00:31, 20 August 2024 (UTC) Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 15:53, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Expanded from redirect from 14 to 16 August and sized at 2003 B. Prefer ALT2 for hookiness. Note that Favre1fan93 is the only nom with >=5 DYKs, so assuming DYK rules count hook proposers as nominators the review is for him. While ALT0 ref doesn't say Sam Savage, ref 4 has it covered. @Favre1fan93 and Trailblazer101: there is only one problem needed to fix: there is very close paraphrasing with "holding page with some comic book related press releases and sales links on it", including in ALT2, but replacing it with "holding page containing sales links and press releases" should be fine with respect to WP:LIMITED. Another thought I had was adding the CBS or Paramount ownership to ALT2 given how important the companies are globally (especially the latter), but consider this optional. ミラP@Miraclepine 16:36, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: I've adjusted the close paraphrasing here (I still retained at the end that they were comic book-related but let me know if that's still too much) and adjusted it in ALT2 as well. We could add in at the very end of ALT2
, formerly for CBS and Paramount
if you think that would help. That would bring the hook character count up to 183. Let me know if you'd prefer that and if there's anything else. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 16:45, 28 August 2024 (UTC)- @Favre1fan93: I've had some time thinking about this, and on second thought, it's already hooky without having to be a little long, especially when combining the contrast between the narrower field the site's name suggests (comic books) and the broader field the site actually covers (general entertainment) with another large contrast (originally PRs and promo links, now news content), so ALT2 without the ending it is.
ALT0-2, prefer ALT2 ミラP@Miraclepine 16:56, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Favre1fan93: I've had some time thinking about this, and on second thought, it's already hooky without having to be a little long, especially when combining the contrast between the narrower field the site's name suggests (comic books) and the broader field the site actually covers (general entertainment) with another large contrast (originally PRs and promo links, now news content), so ALT2 without the ending it is.
Europapa
- ... that the song "Europapa" was the first in the history of the Eurovision Song Contest to be disqualified after the contest started?
ALT1: ... that Joost Klein wore an International Klein Blue outfit during his performance of "Europapa" at Eurovision?Source: https://thateurovisionsite.com/2024/04/30/joost-klein-the-netherlands-first-rehearsal/- Reviewed:
- Comment: My first nomination. Requesting further comments and reviews of the hooks.
Sekundenlang (talk) 07:58, 19 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Hi User:Sekundenlang, well done on getting this article to WP:GA status. It all looks good to me. I prefer your first hook, which will be intriguing to readers. I couldn’t see exactly where in the BBC link you provided where exactly it confirms the statement. It is possible that the article has changed since you posted it? Perhaps you could bring an excerpt quotation. Thank you. Onceinawhile (talk) 17:35, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Found a Guardian link:
https://www.theguardian.com/tv-and-radio/article/2024/may/14/eurovision-organisers-defend-decision-to-disqualify-joost-klein "It was the first time in Eurovision’s 68-year history that a contestant has been disqualified after the start of the five-day event."
Also, the alternate hook was a reference to the last name-color name connection (Klein).
- Sekundenlang (talk) 18:04, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- Excellent, thank you Sekundenlang. I have marked it as good to go.
- PS - thanks for pointing out the Klein-Klein point - I hadn’t realized, too subtle for me. I think the first hook works very well. Onceinawhile (talk) 19:52, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- Sekundenlang I can't find where this hook is cited in the article, can you help? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:14, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29 Added it. Used the link I posted here from The Guardian as source. - Sekundenlang (talk) 15:32, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- Sekundenlang I can't find where this hook is cited in the article, can you help? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:14, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Egyptian Labour Corps mutinies
- ... that twice in 1917 British soldiers in France opened fire on mutineers from the Egyptian Labour Corps, killing at least 27 of them?
- Source: Deaths were in two of the mutinies on 6 and 11 September: "the Egyptians tried to get out of their camp and were fired on by the garrison battalion, who killed twenty-three ... "reinforcements were called in. Again there was shooting, in which five were killed" from p255 of James, Lawrence (1987). Mutiny in the British and Commonwealth Forces, 1797-1956. London: Buchan & Enright. pp. 252–257. ISBN 0-907675-70-0. I have gone with 27 as >Grint, Keith (2021). Mutiny and Leadership. Oxford University Press. pp. 280–281. ISBN 978-0-19-289334-5. gives four killed on 11 September and the CWGC lists seven who died on that day.
If it can run on 6 September:
- ALT1: ... that 107 years ago today British soldiers in France opened fire on mutineers from the Egyptian Labour Corps, killing 23 men?
Dumelow (talk) 20:44, 14 August 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing
- Article is long enough and new enough
- Article is well written, neutral and supported by inline citations.
- Both hooks are short enough, correctly formatted and supported by inline citations.
- No copyvio detected on Earwig
- QPQ done
- I think the original hook is slightly ambiguous. It could be interpreted as meaning that at least 27 men were killed on each of the 2 occasions. If 'twice' was removed this would remove ambiguity and still be accurate.
So suggest ALT2 "... that in 1917 British soldiers in France opened fire on mutineers from the Egyptian Labour Corps, killing at least 27 of them?"
ALT1 approved for 6 September
- Altogether a very detailed, informative and interesting article
Papamac (talk) 17:54, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
Hi Papamac, thanks for your review. I am happy with your suggested ALT - Dumelow (talk) 10:49, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Papamac (talk) 11:04, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Charlotte Eyton
- ... that English amateur geologist Charlotte Eyton wrote a number of papers and pamphlets on the geology of the Wrekin, a part of Shropshire, between 1862 and 1870?
- Source: Charlotte Eyton, the daughter of Thomas Campbell Eyton, a well-known Shropshire naturalist, published six notes and papers (mainly concerning investigations of glacial formations) in the Geological Magazine between 1866 and 1870; she also wrote a monograph, Notes on the Geology of North Shropshire (1869). reference - Creese and Creese, 1994, p 10 https://www.jstor.org/stable/4027579?seq=10
Chaiten1 (talk) 10:34, 18 August 2024 (UTC).
There don't seem to be any major issues with this article, although I do wonder if the mere fact that an amateur geologist wrote geological papers is really all that interesting... KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 04:56, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
Thank you - fair point, but actually it was rare for women (and for amateurs) to publish papers in scientific journals, so this is the reason that it is interesting, or at least notable. Chaiten1 (talk) 07:31, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- Doesn't seem immediately obvious to the lay reader. And is that mentioned in the article/sources? Otherwise there may be a hint of OR in there. Cheers, KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 10:45, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- This wider context is in the cited reference (Creese and Creese,https://www.jstor.org/stable/4027579) which describes the British women who contributed to geological research in the 19th century, and highlights the contributions of independent/amateur women to the field in the mid-1800s. Chaiten1 (talk) 11:14, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
New and long enough, well-referenced, hook is interesting enough, QPQ done. AGF for the offline sources. KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 05:00, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- This wider context is in the cited reference (Creese and Creese,https://www.jstor.org/stable/4027579) which describes the British women who contributed to geological research in the 19th century, and highlights the contributions of independent/amateur women to the field in the mid-1800s. Chaiten1 (talk) 11:14, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
The Invincible Dragon
- ... that The Invincible Dragon was filmed at Macau police headquarters without permission, leading to the detention of director Fruit Chan and lead actor Kevin Cheng by the police?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/List of emperors of the Yuan dynasty
- Comment: The English Straits Times source is behind a paywall, so I included another Chinese source from Guang Ming Daily for cross-reference.
Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 15:31, 16 August 2024 (UTC).
@Prince of Erebor: I got an issue with the proposed DYK hook. Perhaps it can be rewritten since it sounds awkward (referring to "...shooting unauthorizedly at the police headquarters") Ominae (talk) 12:49, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Ominae: Hi Ominae! I was trying to emphasize the absurdity of the film's crew shooting right under the police's noses. Perhaps it could be rewritten as: ... that The Invincible Dragon was filmed at the Macau police headquarters without permission, leading to the detention of director Fruit Chan and lead actor Kevin Cheng by the police? —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 14:00, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Prince of Erebor:: Thanks for getting back. The hook is good. But I'd remove the in "... was filmed [at] Macau police." Ominae (talk) 15:01, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Ominae: I have updated the hook. Please take a look, and thanks for your feedback! —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 15:37, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Prince of Erebor::
Thanks. IMHO, didn't have to change the hook. Could've made another line. But that's fine with me. Should be ready to go. Both sources (English/non-English) provided to back up the hook.
- @Prince of Erebor::
- @Ominae: I have updated the hook. Please take a look, and thanks for your feedback! —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 15:37, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Lee, Jan (19 June 2019). "Hong Kong actor Kevin Cheng detained by police for questioning while filming Invincible Dragon". The Straits Times. Retrieved 16 August 2024.
Filming the movie Invincible Dragon gave Hong Kong actor Kevin Cheng one of the most memorable experiences of his life - getting detained by the police. For one of the scenes for the action movie shot on location in Macau, the production crew did not obtain permits for filming inside a government building.
- ^ "澳門取景遭警扣查 鄭嘉穎偷拍片段全報銷" [Detained by the police while filming in Macau, unauthorized footage of Kevin Cheng were all discarded.] (in Chinese). Guang Ming Daily. 14 January 2017. Retrieved 14 August 2024.
Kevin Cheng recently started shooting for the new film The Invincible Dragon, directed by Fruit Chan and produced by Raymond Wong. Filming took place around 9 a.m. in Macau, where the story follows Cheng, who portrays a Macau police officer, as he leaves the headquarters of the Public Security Forces Affairs Bureau of Macau, located on Calçada dos Quartéis, to investigate a case. However, the production crew did not apply for the necessary permits before filming, and the shooting location is in ties with the local public security forces. As a result, actors including Cheng, along with Fruit Chan and over ten crew members, were taken to the police station for questioning and detained until around 10 p.m. that night. Cheng then left Macau on the 2:30 a.m. ferry. (鄭嘉穎早前為導演陳果、黃百鳴投資的新片《九龍不敗》開工,於早上9時許在澳門拍攝外景。劇情講述飾演澳門司警的嘉穎,離開位於兵營斜巷的澳門保安部隊事務局,上車準備查案。不過劇組於拍攝前沒有申請批文,而且地點涉及澳門治安部門,所以嘉穎等演員、陳果及製片一行十多人,即場被澳門司警帶返警局調查,直至當晚10時許獲准離開警局,嘉穎並乘搭凌晨2時30分的船離開澳門。)
Benjamin F. McAdoo
- ... that Benjamin F. McAdoo was the first Black architect licensed in the state of Washington?
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 04:53, 16 August 2024 (UTC).
Article is new enough (moved to mainspace yesterday), long enough, hook is sourced, WP:EARWIG says "Violation Unlikely", and QPQ is done. Seems good to me! Di (they-them) (talk) 14:58, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
Jyocho
- ... that the music of math rock band Jyocho has been alternatively described as akin to "madness" or "contemplative and melancholy"?
- Source: "madness" "contemplative"
—TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 19:40, 14 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: LGTM! Sohom (talk) 09:09, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 15
Killing of Nyah Mway
- ... that Karen Americans protested the killing of Nyah Mway?
- ALT1: ... that nearly a thousand people marched in protest of the killing of Nyah Mway? Source: https://www.uticaod.com/story/news/local/2024/07/13/people-gather-in-utica-for-13-year-old-nyah-mway-demanding-justice/74393485007/
- ALT2: ... that Nyah Mway graduated from middle school the same week that he was killed? Source: https://www.nytimes.com/2024/06/29/nyregion/utica-police-teen-shooting.html
- ALT3: ... that Nyah Mway is believed to be the first Karen American killed by police? Source: https://www.nytimes.com/2024/06/30/nyregion/utica-police-teen-shooting.html
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Huang Wenxiu
- Comment: Given this subject matter, on one hand I don't want to trivialize this, on the other hand I don't want to be boring.
Apocheir (talk) 00:23, 18 August 2024 (UTC).
Doing... Beginning review now and I hope to complete it within 24 hours. Zingarese talk · contribs (please
mention me on reply; thanks!) 02:56, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Hello–I am very sorry for the delay. Article is new and long enough, well-sourced, copyvio free, QPQ done. I also think the article is fairly neutral and accurately presents the objective facts and timeline of events. I had to add two {{failed verification}} tags because I did not see those claims in any of the cited sources. If I overlooked something despite my best efforts, please let me know. Vis-a-vis the hooks: since ALT3 failed verification, we cannot use it until that is addressed. ALT1 is my preference, as it demonstrates the impact this had on the community. ALT2 I like too, more emotionally centered, but I wonder to others if it would be less interesting than the community response. Zingarese talk · contribs (please
mention me on reply; thanks!) 15:03, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Zingarese: It took me nearly five days to get back to this, so no need to apologize. The issues in the article have been fixed. I had referred to the wrong NYT article on the source for ALT3 in the article, but the source for ALT3 I gave in this nomination was correct. Thanks for your thoroughness. Apocheir (talk) 00:15, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for clarifying that about ALT3 (and sorry I overlooked that), and for fixing the verification issues in the article. I've checked the article again and deem it good to go. My preference would now be ALT3. Thank you for your fantastic work. Zingarese talk · contribs (please
mention me on reply; thanks!) 01:41, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Zingarese: It took me nearly five days to get back to this, so no need to apologize. The issues in the article have been fixed. I had referred to the wrong NYT article on the source for ALT3 in the article, but the source for ALT3 I gave in this nomination was correct. Thanks for your thoroughness. Apocheir (talk) 00:15, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
1988–89 Barcelona Atlétic femenino season
- ... that in 1989, the Barcelona women's second team was knocked out of the Catalan Cup in the same round as the Barcelona women's first team?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/O'Halloran and Francis v. United Kingdom
- Comment: Sources in article. Might be some other hooks to be written from interesting match facts mentioned in prose about the league. Taking suggestions on if "football" needs to be in the hook, and where it would go.
Kingsif (talk) 23:16, 15 August 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:50, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. AGF on the source which I can't read. Maybe the word 'football' could be added like follows? ... that in 1989, the Barcelona football women's second team was knocked out of the Catalan Cup in the same round as the Barcelona women's first team? Do you think that works? If not, I think the initial hook could probably work as well. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:04, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- Or maybe: ... that in 1989 football season, the Barcelona women's second team was knocked out of the Catalan Cup in the same round as the Barcelona women's first team? BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:14, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- I'll let a promoter pick which hook they think is best, license for tweaks anyway. Kingsif (talk) 03:33, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Gwent Broadcasting
- ... that Gwent Broadcasting, at the time the smallest Independent Local Radio station in Britain, lasted less than two years? Source: https://search.proquest.com/docview/186561823
- ALT1: ... that Gwent Broadcasting, whose franchise had been described as not a "licence to print money", lasted less than two years? Source: https://search.proquest.com/docview/186561823 + https://newspapers.com/article/south-wales-argus-new-independent-statio/153295019/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/S1/S2 (Amsterdam Metro)
- Comment: First UK radio article! And this one was held up by sticks and stones. It also had a major date error which had propagated to three timelines and a YouTube video title.
Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:00, 15 August 2024 (UTC).
Hi Sammi Brie, glad to see some interest in British local radio and good work sorting out the date error, especially as it had spread! Review: article more than 5x expanded from 15 August; article is well written and cited inline throughout to what looks to be reliable sources; I unfortunately don't have access to most of the sources but happy to AGF there is no overly close paraphrasing from them, Earwig check is clear and I didn't find any issues in a spotcheck on some I could access; hook facts are interesting enough to me. mentioned in the article and check out to sources cited therein; a QPQ has been carried out. Looks fine to me - Dumelow (talk) 12:53, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 16
Thomas Bertrand-Hudon
- ... that Thomas Bertrand-Hudon is the first professional football player to wear a Guardian Cap during a regular season game?
- Source: Sportsnet
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/William Aitken (architect) (3/4)
BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:15, 22 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Looks good to me. Hook is interesting, cited, and the article is well-written. Comes in just barely at 1592 characters and nominated 6 days after creation. QPQ done. C F A 💬 02:32, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Shoko Ikeda
- ... that Haruhi Suzumiya character designer Shoko Ikeda once admitted that the protagonist of the same name was "just like me"? Source: Ref 7
- ALT0.5: ... that Haruhi Suzumiya character designer Shoko Ikeda once said that the protagonist of the same name was "just like me"? Source: Ref 7
- ALT1: ... that when Kyoto Animation worked as a subcontractor for Inuyasha, Shoko Ikeda encouraged other employees to "make works of higher quality than any other company"? Source: 京アニは作画物を着色する仕上げの下請け時代を経て、... 実力を業界中に知らしめる大きなチャンス。池田さんは同僚たちに「どの会社よりも良質の作品を」とハッパを掛けた。/KyoAni had been a subcontractor for coloring artwork ... This was a great opportunity to show the industry what they could do. Ikeda urged his colleagues to "produce works of higher quality than any other company.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sun Chen (breakdancer)
- Comment: The ALT0 source I can't access because I imported it as part of the translation, so I'll AGF.
ミラP@Miraclepine 03:06, 17 August 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:19, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Mostly good. AGF on the hook sources (one offline, other is restricted by paywall). The only issue I see is that the sentence for ALT0 sounds a little confusing:
Director Yutaka Yamamoto later recalled that "Haruhi [Suzumiya] was perfectly equal to [Ikeda]," who also admitted said that she herself thought Haruhi was "just like me".
Could that be re-worded (the 'admitted said' part)? Looks good otherwise. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:54, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11:
Done I've also fixed the ALT0 and moved the original to be ALT0.5. ミラP@Miraclepine 02:55, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Aphrodite Rhithymnia
- ... that a Cretan man found a 1st-century statue of Aphrodite while trying to drill a well, and then re-buried it?
- Source: How the statue of Aphrodite was acquired Rethemnos news (in Greek). December 8, 2019. Retrieved August 17, 2024.
- Reviewed:
Deiadameian (talk) 22:37, 16 August 2024 (UTC).
article is fine. i don't understand greek and i'm using machine translation, but why is the source is written in the first person? ltbdl☃ (talk) 07:03, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- I believe it's because it's lifted from the book mentioned in the article (which is not available online). Deiadameian (talk) 12:15 18 August 2024 (UTC)
fair enough. approved. ltbdl☃ (talk) 13:16, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- I believe it's because it's lifted from the book mentioned in the article (which is not available online). Deiadameian (talk) 12:15 18 August 2024 (UTC)
Petitcrieu
- ... that a magical rainbow dog from medieval legend could instantly turn people happy?
- Source: Clason, Christopher R. (2015). "A "Courtly" Reading of Natural Metaphors: Animals and Performance in Gottfried's "Tristan"". Mediaevistik. 28: 141–159. ISSN 0934-7453.
ALT1: ... that a magical rainbow dog from medieval legend may have been a symbolic representation of love? Source: Grasmik, Kristina (2012). Das Wunderhündchen Petitcreiu. Semantische Unterbrechungen der Handlung in Gottfried von Straßburgs "Tristan" (in German). GRIN Verlag. ISBN 978-3668472556.- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Benjamin F. McAdoo
Di (they-them) (talk) 16:10, 16 August 2024 (UTC).
- @Di (they-them): I'm reviewing this. But first, I think your offline source needs a specific page number. BorgQueen (talk) 16:53, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Sure, the pages that mention it being a symbol of love are pages 5 and 6, in the section Semantische Unterbrechung im Tristan-Roman. Di (they-them) (talk) 17:08, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- The pages need to be specified in the article too. BorgQueen (talk) 17:10, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Got it, they've now been added. Di (they-them) (talk) 17:26, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, but I'm afraid—I just Googled it—GRIN Verlag is a German self-publishing company. We generally do not accept self-published sources as per WP:SPS. BorgQueen (talk) 17:34, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Ah, that's quite disappointing. Do you think the source and its paragraph should be removed from the article entirely, or can it be left because it's being used just to cite the author's analysis? Di (they-them) (talk) 17:47, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, the source and the paragraph will have to be removed altogether, unless you can somehow prove the author is an expert in their field so we can make an exception, or you can find a more reliable source to support the claim. BorgQueen (talk) 18:15, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Got it. Di (they-them) (talk) 18:31, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- As for ALT0, please see WP:DYKFICTION. Also, being multi-colored doesn't necessarily mean rainbow-colored. My suggestion is: ALT2 ... that a magical inanimate dog may have been a taxidermy dog, an automaton, or a metaphor? BorgQueen (talk) 19:50, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- This alt hook seems fine to me, I have no objections. Di (they-them) (talk) 20:04, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Great! I think the article is probably good to go, but the thing is that I can't approve my own hook.
I request another reviewer. BorgQueen (talk) 20:08, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Great! I think the article is probably good to go, but the thing is that I can't approve my own hook.
- This alt hook seems fine to me, I have no objections. Di (they-them) (talk) 20:04, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- As for ALT0, please see WP:DYKFICTION. Also, being multi-colored doesn't necessarily mean rainbow-colored. My suggestion is: ALT2 ... that a magical inanimate dog may have been a taxidermy dog, an automaton, or a metaphor? BorgQueen (talk) 19:50, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Got it. Di (they-them) (talk) 18:31, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, the source and the paragraph will have to be removed altogether, unless you can somehow prove the author is an expert in their field so we can make an exception, or you can find a more reliable source to support the claim. BorgQueen (talk) 18:15, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Ah, that's quite disappointing. Do you think the source and its paragraph should be removed from the article entirely, or can it be left because it's being used just to cite the author's analysis? Di (they-them) (talk) 17:47, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, but I'm afraid—I just Googled it—GRIN Verlag is a German self-publishing company. We generally do not accept self-published sources as per WP:SPS. BorgQueen (talk) 17:34, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Got it, they've now been added. Di (they-them) (talk) 17:26, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- The pages need to be specified in the article too. BorgQueen (talk) 17:10, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
- Sure, the pages that mention it being a symbol of love are pages 5 and 6, in the section Semantische Unterbrechung im Tristan-Roman. Di (they-them) (talk) 17:08, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
ALT2 AGF checks out and is short enough and interesting. I'm aware that some moan about hooks having to be a definite fact, but I don't think that really applies here given that the article subject is a legend. Let's roll.--Launchballer 20:38, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 17
Anders Årfelt
- ... that after some of Anders Årfelt's lion sculptures (example pictured) were struck during the 2017 Stockholm truck attack the city ordered new versions weighing 3 tonnes (3.3 tons)?
- Source: "Konstnären Anders Årfelts betonglejon kan ha räddat livet på människor under terrorattacken på Drottninggatan i Stockholm förra året. Nu vill Stockholms stad sätta upp fler och större lejon ... De nya lejonen väger tre ton, jämfört med de vanliga som väger 900 kilo." which Google translates as "Artist Anders Årfelt's concrete lion may have saved the lives of people during the terrorist attack on Drottninggatan in Stockholm last year. Now the city of Stockholm wants to put up more and bigger lions ... The new lions weigh three tons, compared to the usual ones that weigh 900 kilograms." from: "Nya större lejon ska göra Stockholms gator säkrare". SVT Nyheter (in Swedish). 27 February 2018. Retrieved 16 August 2024.
- ALT1: ... that a lion sculpture by Anders Årfelt became the site of tributes to victims of the 2017 Stockholm truck attack (pictured)? Source: "och nu riktas även hyllningarna mot en dold hjälte – betonglejonet ... Sedan fredagen har lejonet överrösts av massor av blommor, ljus och kärlek och vi håller med om att lejonet skulle bli ett fint minnesmärke." which Google translates as: "now the tributes are also directed at a hidden hero – the concrete lion. ... Since Friday, the lion has been drowned out by lots of flowers, candles and love and we agree that the lion would make a nice memorial." from: "Därför borde betonglejonet som räddade Stockholm bli en staty - Metro Mode". metromode.se (in Swedish). 2017-04-12. Retrieved 16 August 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Queen Anne Pool
Dumelow (talk) 08:03, 17 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Both hooks are good, but my preference is Alt1 because: (1) hook is shorter and quicker to grasp; (2) the accompanying image for that one is more colourful and eye-catching. Mr Serjeant Buzfuz (talk) 04:23, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Emotional Consequences of Broadcast Television
- ALT1: ... that Community's series finale "Emotional Consequences of Broadcast Television" ends by criticizing the show? Source: https://ew.com/article/2015/06/03/community-finale-season-6-ending/
- ALT2: ... that Community's series finale "Emotional Consequences of Broadcast Television" references St. Elsewhere? Source: https://www.slantmagazine.com/tv/the-10-best-community-episodes/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Post-tuberculosis lung disease
- Comment:
DYK pendingDone
Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 16:11, 20 August 2024 (UTC).
- The article was promoted for GA on August 18, so it's eligible. Everything is sourced, images look fine too. I prefer the first hook, the second one is also not bad, but the third one is too obscure for me.
- The hook now says
features a fourth-wall breaking monologue
, but in the article it isdelivers a fourth wall–breaking monologue
. Should it instead be "a fourth-wall-breaking monologue"? I also can't find it in the source provided, can you please point me to the right section of it? Artem.G (talk) 14:28, 22 August 2024 (UTC)- @Artem.G: Here: "And while this fake family that only existed for a meta-gag realizes their non-existence, a commercial announcer starts reading a disclaimer which is about Community the game, until it's just about Community" fourth wall and meta are pretty much interchangable. I changed the hyphen and slightly altered ALT1 to flow better. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 16:24, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- thanks! the hook is sourced, qpq done. I think that the first hook the most interesting one.
Artem.G (talk) 13:21, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- thanks! the hook is sourced, qpq done. I think that the first hook the most interesting one.
- @Artem.G: Here: "And while this fake family that only existed for a meta-gag realizes their non-existence, a commercial announcer starts reading a disclaimer which is about Community the game, until it's just about Community" fourth wall and meta are pretty much interchangable. I changed the hyphen and slightly altered ALT1 to flow better. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 16:24, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Shrine of Taharqa
- ... that the Shrine of Taharqa was built in Sudan but is now in the Ashmolean Museum?
- Source: Guner, Fisun (25 November 2011). "Art Gallery: Egyptian and Nubian Galleries, Ashmolean Museum". The Arts Desk. Retrieved 18 May 2024.
- ALT1: ... that the Shrine of Taharqa was coated in nitrocellulose? Source: Hanna, Seamus; Norman, Mark (1990). "The cleaning and removal of surface coatings from a seventh century BC sandstone shrine from Nubia". Studies in Conservation. 35 (sup1): 23–27. doi:10.1179/sic.1990.35.s1.006. ISSN 0039-3630.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Lorena Peril
©Geni (talk) 03:03, 23 August 2024 (UTC).
Hi Geni, review follows: article created 17 August and exceeds minimum length; it is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't find any issue with overly close paraphrasing in a spotcheck on some of the sources; hook facts are interesting, mentioned in the article and check out to sources cited; I probably prefer ALT1 which also avoids a potential issue about with referring to Sudan, which didn't exist at the time it was built. I saw in the source for ALT1 that it is the "only [Ancient] Egyptian building in the United Kingdom" which might make an interesting hook if it was correct? Image is freely licensed and uploaded by nominator, a QPQ has been carried out - Dumelow (talk) 13:40, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- Building is complicated. Only part of the structure made it to the UK. The inner stonework did not and while it is freestanding it would have originally been inside a larger temple. You've also got the argument that Cleopatra's Needle, London is a building. Mostly though it was an issue of not being able to find a way to phrase it that didn't run into copyright issues.©Geni (talk) 00:46, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 18
Counterintelligence Group
- ... that the Counterintelligence Group was disbanded in 1995 because the unit was successful in the "neutralization and prosecution of scalawags" in the Armed Forces of the Philippines?
- ALT1: ... that the Counterintelligence Group was reactivated on January 18, 2024, due to coup rumors that were reported in 2023?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The Invincible Dragon
- Comment: There's a blurb there where there's a mention of the CIG being reestablished in 2005. However, I can only go on to say that Gen. Brawner Jr. mentioned in public that the unit will be fully reestablished on December 21, 2023. This one's widely reported in Philippine media.
Open to alternate hooks.
Ominae (talk) 12:54, 18 August 2024 (UTC).
Approved the first hook. Article length and age are good, copyvio and plagiarism free, source seems to be reliable. Hook is interesting, I personally find it interesting of the usage of "scalawags" in official communiques. QPQ done. I think orphan tags are allowed to exist for it to be presentable but it would be nice to get some links to the article if you have time, but it isn't an issue for the nom. Looks good to me :) PersusjCP (talk) 19:57, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
Ultimate X-Men (2024)
- ... that Maystorm, a character from Ultimate X-Men, was initially created as a variant cover for the X-Men comic?
- Source: Cameron Bonomolo (January 23, 2024). "Ultimate X-Men Writer Teases "Something Completely New and Different"". Comic Book.com. Retrieved April 26, 2024.
Cambalachero (talk) 13:43, 19 August 2024 (UTC).
Hi Cambalachero! Overall, I think the article is well-written. Earwig showed no copyright violations, and the article was moved to mainspace on 16 August, so it is new enough. However, I have some concerns about the plot section. Although there are no specific standard for its length and the current plot summary is sourced, I think it is a bit too lengthy, as it is longer than the lead, editorial history, and reception sections combined. Trimming it down to around 400 to 700 words would be more suitable for the article, so it does not overly focus on in-universe content. —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 13:01, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- Done, just made it significantly shorter. Articles about comics tend to be magnets for people compelled to add every detail of the plots, you get distracted for a couple of days and the plot section grows exponentially. Cambalachero (talk) 15:06, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Yea, I realise the one who expanded the plot summary section was not you. Thanks for cleaning up the article. Ready to go now! —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 12:28, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- Done, just made it significantly shorter. Articles about comics tend to be magnets for people compelled to add every detail of the plots, you get distracted for a couple of days and the plot section grows exponentially. Cambalachero (talk) 15:06, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
East Suffolk Park, Edinburgh
- ... that East Suffolk Park, Edinburgh, a former student hostel, was once an internment camp for enemy aliens?
- Source: It is the Suffolk Road Halls of Residence or to give them their proper name, the Edinburgh Hostels for Women Students. These were used as an internment camp for “enemy aliens” at the start of the war.https://threadinburgh.scot/2023/01/06/the-thread-about-the-edinburgh-hostels-for-women-students-and-their-brief-wartime-role-as-an-internment-camp-for-german-enemy-aliens/
Papamac (talk) 16:39, 22 August 2024 (UTC).
- Hi Iainmacintyre, do you know anything about the threadinburgh website? Is it a reliable source?--Llewee (talk) 17:07, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Llewee Yes, I regard it as a usually reliable source. For this article they cite contemporary accounts from two local newspapers and include an image from the National Archives. The evidence is supported by contemporary photographs. Papamac (talk) 19:40, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
New enough, long enough. Article is in a decent condition. I would suggest changing "local citizens" to " local people" as the former could indicate British citizens which presumably they weren't. The quote is interested and the reliability has been discussed. QPQ done. Llewee (talk) 22:48, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- done this myself Llewee (talk) 09:43, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
Cooper Mays
- ... that Cooper Mays played on the same offensive line that his brother Cade Mays did while both were at Tennessee?
- Source: [1]
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TarheelBornBred (talk) 16:24, 19 August 2024 (UTC).
- I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:17, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. It might be better with some modifications, such as clarifying that he's a football player, (e.g. ALT1 ... that in college, football player Cooper Mays was a member of the same offensive line as his brother?) but I think either way it should work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:19, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1 sounds fine to me, and I'm open to using it. TarheelBornBred (talk) 18:33, 22 August 2024 (UTC).
References
- ^ Hunte, Sydney (November 26, 2020). "Tennessee's Cade, Cooper Mays discuss bond as brothers, teammates on Volunteers football team". Saturday Down South. Retrieved August 19, 2024.
Umehara ga kimeta
- ... that the cries of a fighting game commentator have spawned a huge number of mash-ups?
- ALT1: ... that the fighting game commentator's cry "Umehara ga kimeta" has been described as the No. 1 play-by-play commentary in E Sports history? Source: https://gamer2.jp/post/ogawara0005/
- ALT2: ... that the fighting game commentator's cry "Umehara ga kimeta" is regarded alongside the best Olympic commentaries? Source: https://gamer2.jp/post/ogawara0005/
- Reviewed:
- Comment: I am not a native English speaker, so if there are any unnatural expressions in the text or hooks, I will appreciate it if you could improve them. this is my first recommendation to DYK, so please advise me if there are any mistakes.
狄の用務員 (talk) 08:56, 18 August 2024 (UTC).
Article is new enough and long enough. WP:EARWIG says "Violation Unlikely". QPQ is not necessary. I'm going to AGF on the Japanese sourcing. Personally, I prefer ALT2, but ALT1 is also good. Overall, seems good to go! Di (they-them) (talk) 19:14, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- Shouldn't it be "was regarded"? "is regarded" make it sound like a general consensus, when it was one writer's opinion. Even then, it appears to present the source's praise more unquestioningly than the source itself. It looks like the (only) source is being over the top intentionally. They admit their overenthusiasm and the inadequacy of the comparison when they say いやいや、流石にこの2つを並べるのは五輪側に失礼じゃあないか in the same article. Will the ALT2's wording convey the tone? --2001:240:2428:D68C:A88A:93:AE50:2C3F (talk) 00:59, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- I would propose ALT3.
- ALT3: ... that the fighting game commentator's cry "Umehara ga kimeta" was regarded alongside the best Olympic commentaries? Source: https://gamer2.jp/post/ogawara0005/
- I personally think the source is a normal article, consistent with reliable sources, of a normal tone, of a normal media outlet.狄の用務員 (talk) 13:37, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Dezső Varga
- ... that Dezső Varga was the first Szekler ice hockey player inducted into the IIHF Hall of Fame?
- Reviewed: Rex v Bourne and John Neilson
- Comment: I volunteer two QPQ credits for one nomination, to help reduce the backlog of nominations without reviews.
Flibirigit (talk) 14:53, 18 August 2024 (UTC).
The article is newly expanded, and of high quality. There are no copyvio issues in the English language. The hook is short, to the point and interesting, and is cited in a reliable source (in Hungarian, but confirmed by online translation). I don't see any need to change anything. The author has recently completed two QPQ reviews. Nice job! Chaiten1 (talk) 16:47, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 19
The Book of Virtues
- ... that The Book of Virtues spent more than 80 weeks on the New York Times Nonfiction Best Seller List?
- Source: Teachout, Terry (1995-10-09). "The vice of a virtue -- The Moral Compass: Stories for a Life's Journey edited with commentaries by William J. Bennett". National Review. Vol. 47, no. 19. p. 60. ISSN 0028-0038. Retrieved 2024-08-20 – via ProQuest.
- ALT1: ... that 85% of The Book of Virtues is public-domain material? Source: Bates, James (1995-02-17). "Company Town: Will 'Virtues' Bring More Rewards?". Los Angeles Times. p. 4. Retrieved 2024-08-20 – via ProQuest.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Trust Issues
- Comment:
"This is as close to featured quality as I'll ever get...on my own terms."
— Yours truly, in soliloquy, 11:10 p.m., 19/8
- This season on Extreme Makeover: Wikipedia Edition: A 1993 bestselling sensation that made millions for its compiler and led to several follow-ups, including a PBS animated series--and (par for the course with such ventures) a couple of competitors. (Ignoring his personal/career controversies and the age of the tales he collected.) Despite its status, its WP article never got the attention worthy of its legacy (in the 16! years since I last chanced upon editing it), hardly moving past the few paragraphs it was allocated back then. Think of the parable of the Good Samaritan,[1] and you'll realise my role in the proceedings this month. (Can't quite recall how I suddenly reapproached it days ago, though.)
- I've heard talk that stubs are considered the ugly ducklings[1] of this project. Well, sir, I mustered up enough courage--and sacrificed enough time--to turn this specimen into a swan nineteen-fold by the time of this nomination (according to WP:Prosesize). (Cf. my efforts on Apparition (company) back during last year's Memorial season.)
- As a side note, work on this DYK candidate coincided with the U.S. political conventions.
- Even though this won't lead to a coveted Four Award, I'm in the running for the other three fragments. Could this lead to my first FA star in the next three or so months? Until then, wish me luck, and stay tuned for my next DYK nomination (before this month's over).
- With special thanks to page creator Mckaysalisbury (talk · contribs · count) (in case he's noticing this now).
Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 21:43, 20 August 2024 (UTC).
- Now that I have some spare time on my hands, a couple more ALTs:
- ALT2: ... that The Book of Virtues inspired PBS' first animated primetime series? Source: "Clean TV". Pittsburgh Post-Gazette. Associated Press. 1995-12-08. p. 2. Archived from the original on August 17, 2024. Retrieved 2024-08-27 – via ProQuest.
- ALT3: ... that The Book of Virtues topped the New York Times Nonfiction Best Seller List over Private Parts? Source: "Best Sellers: Nonfiction". The New York Times Book Review. 1994-01-16. p. 30. Retrieved 2024-08-27 – via ProQuest. / Dionne, Jr., E J (1994-01-18). "A Values Primer — Bill Bennett's Softer Side". The Washington Post. p. A.19. Retrieved 2024-08-27 – via ProQuest.
- I'll review this. Thriley (talk) 17:58, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Article has been massively expanded, well over 5x, starting on 17 August. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. QPQ is done. Hooks are interesting and sourced. I like ALT2 myself- always nice to see PBS on the front page. All ready to go. Congratulations on this expansive expansion! Thriley (talk) 17:05, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Muhammad Khaznadar
![Muhammad Khaznadar, with his father](http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/f/f0/Mustafa_Khaznadar.jpg/125px-Mustafa_Khaznadar.jpg)
- ... that Muhammad Khaznadar's museum was said to have "surpassed every other museum in the world" in Phoenician and Carthaginian antiquities?
- Source: Heinrich von Maltzan blockquote, in the final section of the article
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Overall: AGF on foreign language source. A little unclear on whether image is properly licensed. Do we know anything about date of publication? Ergo Sum 04:42, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @Ergo Sum: Regarding the image, it is used in the Moumni 2020 Brill-Muqarnas article in the bibliography. They say "Fig. 3. Anonymous, Mustafa Khaznadar and His Son Muham-mad, circa 1855. Oil on canvas, 82 × 131 cm. Tunis Institut National du Patrimoine, collection Qsar es-Saïd, inv. no. 46-07-28-83." If the unknown artist was 30 when painting it, that would mean they were born 200 years ago, and thus are statistically likely to have died more than 100 years ago. Tunisia copyright law expires after 50 years from the death of the creator if known, or 50 years from publication if anonymous. Onceinawhile (talk) 11:07, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Onceinawhile: Makes sense. I would recommend adding that information to the description of that image on the Commons, so that it can be used freely elsewhere. Ergo Sum 13:49, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, I have
Done this as suggested. Onceinawhile (talk) 17:22, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, I have
- @Onceinawhile: Makes sense. I would recommend adding that information to the description of that image on the Commons, so that it can be used freely elsewhere. Ergo Sum 13:49, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @Ergo Sum: Regarding the image, it is used in the Moumni 2020 Brill-Muqarnas article in the bibliography. They say "Fig. 3. Anonymous, Mustafa Khaznadar and His Son Muham-mad, circa 1855. Oil on canvas, 82 × 131 cm. Tunis Institut National du Patrimoine, collection Qsar es-Saïd, inv. no. 46-07-28-83." If the unknown artist was 30 when painting it, that would mean they were born 200 years ago, and thus are statistically likely to have died more than 100 years ago. Tunisia copyright law expires after 50 years from the death of the creator if known, or 50 years from publication if anonymous. Onceinawhile (talk) 11:07, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Serekunda
![Downtown Serekunda](http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/3/35/Serekunda_0001.jpg/162px-Serekunda_0001.jpg)
- ... that because the capital of the Gambia is on a small island, its population has overflowed into nearby Serekunda (pictured)?
- Source: [36] Banjul, Gambia's capital city, is positioned on St. Mary's Island at the mouth of the River Gambia and long ago reached its residential carrying capacity. Adjacent Serekunda has accommodated the overflow.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Dublin Castle scandal
- Comment: Alt hooks welcome. I may come up with a more interesting hook as I continue to expand the article.
— Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 00:40, 21 August 2024 (UTC).
- Going to review this later, the hook already looks interesting!
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
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I don't see the article as new, needs an explanation. The hook is a book source so AGF. I see multiple un-broad sentences, like about the dictator's rule, which isn't related to the city (only a tiny bit). 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
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- @TheNuggeteer: Article was 5x expanded on August 19. The mentioned events of the dictator's rule took place at specific locations in Serekunda, which I think makes them relevant. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 23:57, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- Good explanation, changing.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
00:46, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- Good explanation, changing.
I would like to reopen this nomination to add another article I have expanded. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 22:48, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Kanifing
- ... that because the capital of the Gambia is on a small island, its population has overflowed into Serekunda (pictured) in the nearby municipality of Kanifing?
- Source: Same as before
— Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 22:48, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Takara's Treasure
- ... that Takara's Treasure was created because the artist wanted to draw a story about a boy who speaks with a dialect?
- ALT1: ... that the first draft of the manga Takara's Treasure would have concluded with an open-ended or a bad ending? Source: https://www.chil-chil.net/compNewsDetail/k/801authors108/no/31236/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Love Is Embarrassing
lullabying (talk) 02:51, 20 August 2024 (UTC).
ALT0 looks interesting, and both hooks are verified from the sources. The article is eligible size-wise, with no copyvios, and the nomination is timely. Would it be a good idea to mention the artist's name in the hook though as that sounds like basic information readers would be interested in.--NØ 04:43, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- @MaranoFan: An editor suggested to me that names of people without Wikipedia articles should generally not be mentioned in DYK hooks unless absolutely necessary. lullabying (talk) 07:30, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Concurring with MaranoFan (talk · contribs) re: mention of the mangaka. Also, provided source is in Japanese; good-faith tick with help from Bing Translate. --Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 05:11, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Slgrandson: An editor suggested to me that names of people without Wikipedia articles should generally not be mentioned in DYK hooks unless absolutely necessary. lullabying (talk) 07:30, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 20
Second Adrian Hasler cabinet
- ... that Aurelia Frick was expelled from the Second Adrian Hasler cabinet in 2019, due to an embezzlement scandal?
TheBritinator (talk) 23:30, 23 August 2024 (UTC).
New enough and long enough. QPQ present. AGF on German-language sourcing. Reasonably exciting hook for the subject. Suggestions for promoter: add "of Liechtenstein" after "cabinet" in the hook to provide a geographic clue to readers. Also skeptical if "second" needs to be capitalized in running text. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:14, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
The Snow Queen (Kernaghan novel)
... that a contemporary adaptation of an 1844 fairy tale contains feminist elements and "violates gender expectations"?
- Source: feminist elements, "violates ..."
- ALT1:
... that a contemporary adaptation of Hans Christian Andersen's "The Snow Queen" contains feminist elements and "violates gender expectations"?Source: ibid. - ALT2: ... that despite its roots in a Christian fairy tale, The Snow Queen incorporates Finnish mythology and Scandinavian shamanism? Source: Interview with author
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/St Melangell's Church, Pennant Melangell
- Comment: No preference between the two hooks, so take your pick! Please let me know if you're unable to access the offline sources; I'm happy to provide copies directly to assist reviewers.
—TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 04:57, 24 August 2024 (UTC).
Approved with ALT2. New enough (submitted within 4 days of GA), more than long enough (13,120 characters). Well sourced (book, academic journal, magazines, etc.); neutral (opinions expressed attributed to sources); appears free of copyvio (Earwig says unlikely and AGF on Findon which is cited extensively and is an offline source); presentable (tidy looking GA article); and QPQ is done (back in February). Images used in the article are Wikipedia-safe (one illustration originally published in 1916; the main book cover thumbnail used in the article is "Fair Use" though slight quibble is that the "author" is not the same as "illustrator of book cover"). This leaves the hooks. ALT0 and ALT1 are rejected because "violates gender expectations" lacks contextualization within the hooks. (Feel free to rework them and propose again). ALT2 is interesting and checks out; the source attributed above, Challenging Destiny magazine edited by David M. Switzer, was a short-lived niche periodical, but its interviews are regarded as one of its strengths according to The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction; in any case within the article other sources are cited which discuss the book's incorporation of elements of the Kalevala. Cielquiparle (talk) 11:22, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the detailed review, Cielquiparle! I'm happy to attribute the quote for the other two hooks to give them more context. I'm still learning the ins and outs of DYK, so that's good to know for next time.
- ALT0a: ... that a contemporary adaptation of an 1844 fairy tale contains feminist elements and, according to one scholar, "violates gender expectations"?
- ALT1a: ... that a contemporary adaptation of Hans Christian Andersen's "The Snow Queen" contains feminist elements and, according to one scholar, "violates gender expectations"?
- Let me know what you think of these! —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 19:53, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
Approving ALT0a and ALT1a in addition to ALT2. Cielquiparle (talk) 01:18, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the detailed review, Cielquiparle! I'm happy to attribute the quote for the other two hooks to give them more context. I'm still learning the ins and outs of DYK, so that's good to know for next time.
Piano Sonata (Barber)
- ... that Samuel Barber's Piano Sonata was described by The New York Times as "the first sonata really come of age by an American composer of this period"?
- ALT1: ... that Samuel Barber's Piano Sonata was premiered by Vladimir Horowitz? Source: https://www.nytimes.com/1950/01/24/archives/horowitz-offers-barbers-sonata-his-sonata-heard.html
- ALT2: ... that Samuel Barber said he could not adequately play his own Piano Sonata? Source: Sherman, Robert; Barber, Samuel (2010) [1978]. "Samuel Barber Interviewed by Robert Sherman (1978)". Samuel Barber Remembered: A Centenary Tribute. Boydell & Brewer. ISBN 978-1-58046-350-8. JSTOR 10.7722/j.ctt7zsv91.11., "I played [the sonata] for [Horowitz] at his house and I fell on the floor at the end of the third movement—that was really just a joke, but they were a little worried about me. It was awfully hard!" and Tocco, James (1977). "Happy Birthday, Samuel Barber!". Camera Three. CBS., Barber: "My sonata? No, no, no. I can't [play it]."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Killing of Nyah Mway (pending as of 02:57, 20 August 2024 (UTC))
Zingarese talk · contribs (please mention me on reply; thanks!) 02:40, 20 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Alt2 is the best out of the three. Alt0 could be interesting, but too vague - "this period" needs clarification, might be helpful if the year that the NYT made the comment was added. Alt1 I don't find interesting at all and would not recommend. All three hooks are properly sourced.
Please ping me once the QPQ is complete so that I may approve the nomination.QPQ complete. Prefer alt3 to alt2 but both can be used.
Earwig doesn't flag any copyvio. The article is of good quality and in my opinion could pass a Good Article nomination if the nominator is interested in that. Jaguarnik (talk) 21:46, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Jaguarnik:, hello and thank you for the review. I also agree that Alt2 is probably going to be the most interesting to a broad audience. Maybe I could revise it a bit:
- ALT3: ... that Samuel Barber, himself an accomplished, conservatory-trained pianist, said he could not adequately play his own Piano Sonata? Source: Sherman, Robert; Barber, Samuel (2010) [1978]. "Samuel Barber Interviewed by Robert Sherman (1978)". Samuel Barber Remembered: A Centenary Tribute. Boydell & Brewer. ISBN 978-1-58046-350-8. JSTOR 10.7722/j.ctt7zsv91.11., "I played [the sonata] for [Horowitz] at his house and I fell on the floor at the end of the third movement—that was really just a joke, but they were a little worried about me. It was awfully hard!", Tocco, James (1977). "Happy Birthday, Samuel Barber!". Camera Three. CBS., Barber: "My sonata? No, no, no. I can't [play it]." and Heyman, Barbara B. (2001). "Barber, Samuel (Osmond)". In Stanley Sadie; John Tyrrell (eds.). The New Grove Dictionary of Music and Musicians (2nd ed.). London: Macmillan.
- Let me know what you think. I would be fine with either ALT2 or ALT3; the ball is in your court! Zingarese talk · contribs (please
mention me on reply; thanks!) 15:08, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Zingarese: Personally I think alt 3 works a bit better than alt2, since it gives more context to why it's so surprising that Samuel Barber could not play his own sonata. I would remove "accomplished", not because he wasn't accomplished, but to avoid MOS:PUFFERY and because I don't think it's super necessary.Jaguarnik (talk) 20:48, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- Sounds wonderful! Promoter please just lose the “accomplished, “ from the hook. Zingarese talk · contribs (please
mention me on reply; thanks!) 17:37, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Sounds wonderful! Promoter please just lose the “accomplished, “ from the hook. Zingarese talk · contribs (please
- @Zingarese: Personally I think alt 3 works a bit better than alt2, since it gives more context to why it's so surprising that Samuel Barber could not play his own sonata. I would remove "accomplished", not because he wasn't accomplished, but to avoid MOS:PUFFERY and because I don't think it's super necessary.Jaguarnik (talk) 20:48, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Jaguarnik:, hello and thank you for the review. I also agree that Alt2 is probably going to be the most interesting to a broad audience. Maybe I could revise it a bit:
Articles created/expanded on August 21
Taste (Sabrina Carpenter song)
- ... that Sabrina Carpenter and Jenna Ortega kiss in the "Taste" music video?
- Source: Billboard
- ALT1: ... that Jenna Ortega accidentally kills someone with a chainsaw in the "Taste" music video? Source: Billboard
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Takara's Treasure
NØ 18:30, 23 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Article has no major issues and the hooks are sourced in the article text. Earwig did turn up a 35.1%, but everything that got flagged appears to be quotes or minor phrases. My only real concern is that the lack of a reception section in the article might leave a bit to be desired for some, but I'm pretty sure that's out of the scope for this, especially since the album just released. Both hooks are good, though I personally prefer ALT1. I'll leave it up to whoever puts the article in queue. Good job. λ NegativeMP1 19:31, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I have added a brief reception section for now but I imagine it will get bigger by the time the hook runs.--NØ 23:16, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 22
Blue Mountain Pottery
- ... that Blue Mountain Pottery started when a Czech worker in Ontario scraped clay off his boot and said it reminded him of clay he had used to make ceramics in Czechoslovakia?
- Source: Ned Morgan, "How Pottery Saved Blue Mountain", Mountain Life, July 7, 2014
- ALT1: ... that Blue Mountain Pottery in Canada exported 60% of its pottery, with two-thirds of the exports going to the United States and the rest to the UK and Europe? Source: "Blue Mountain Pottery", Legacy Antiques.
- ALT2: ... that Blue Mountain Pottery's wares had a distinctive drip glaze, particularly blue-green and black, so that each piece was unique? Source: Ned Morgan, "How Pottery Saved Blue Mountain", Mountain Life, July 7, 2014
- ALT3: ... that porcelain bowls, vases, and figurines made by Blue Mountain Pottery in Ontario were popular wedding presents in Canada in the 1960s and 1970s? Source: Mary Dunk, "The Blue Mountain Pottery Story", Reader's Digest.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Anders Årfelt
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Mr Serjeant Buzfuz (talk) 03:09, 29 August 2024 (UTC).
- @Mr Serjeant Buzfuz: As per a recent rule change, a QPQ should be provided at the time of the nomination, rather than up to a week afterwards. Please provide a QPQ as soon as possible, as the nomination may be closed without warning if one isn't provided. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:27, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
A QPQ was supplied within four hours of the above notice and is present. The article is a new enough expansion. The hook facts check out, with a strong preference toward ALT0 for a promoter. Beautiful pieces. No textual issues—quote is attributed, and other common phrases are banal. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:52, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- On reflection, I changed the image caption slightly, from "Small bowl" to "Oval bowl". There is nothing in the image to give a scale, so best not to comment on size. "Oval" acts as a descriptor for visually impaired readers. Mr Serjeant Buzfuz (talk) 01:06, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Statue of Dirk Nowitzki
- ... that the statue of Dirk Nowitzki originally had three basketballs?
- ALT1: ... that Dallas Mavericks owner Mark Cuban promised that the statue of Dirk Nowitzki would be "the biggest, most bad-ass statue ever"? Source: [4][5]
- ALT2: ... that although the statue of Dirk Nowitzki appears unbalanced, a physics professor said its center of mass keeps it upright? Source: [6]
- Reviewed: 0
- Comment: First time ever doing anything DYK-related, so please forgive me if I make any mistakes. Left guide (talk) 12:18, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Left guide (talk) 12:18, 25 August 2024 (UTC).
References
- ^ Rogers, Tim (January 6, 2022). "The Dirk Statue Is, Um, Not Great". D Magazine. Dallas, Texas: D Magazine Partners. Retrieved August 22, 2024.
- ^ Haney, Addie (January 6, 2022). "The rendering for the Dirk Nowitzki statue was revealed at his jersey retirement celebration, and the internet had some thoughts". WFAA. Dallas, Texas. Retrieved August 22, 2024.
- ^ "Dirk Nowitzki statue unveiled outside of American Airlines Center". KDFW. Dallas, Texas. December 25, 2022. Retrieved August 22, 2024.
- ^ Dameris, Brian (December 25, 2022). "Meet the Man Who Designed Dirk Nowitzki's Statue". D Magazine. Dallas, Texas: D Magazine Partners. Retrieved August 21, 2024.
- ^ MacMahon, Tim (December 25, 2022). "Mavericks unveil statue of franchise legend Dirk Nowitzki". ESPN. Dallas, Texas. Retrieved August 22, 2024.
- ^ Mooney, Michael (January 11, 2023). "How the Dirk statue stays upright: An Axios investigation". Axios. Dallas, Texas. Retrieved August 23, 2024.
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Overall: Article was nominated within 7 days of creation. It is over 1,500 bytes long and is well-sourced. Earwig gave an unlikely violation of 0%. Hook is interesting and well-cited. This is the nominator's first nomination, so a QPQ is not needed at this time. One minor fix I suggest before I pass this is where it discusses the criticism of the basketballs on the statue. The criticism part is cited but the Twitter part is not and I'm not sure if that's important to mention. lullabying (talk) 02:47, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Lullabying: Hello, thanks for reviewing. For some reason, citation #2 on this DYK nom page (which is #5 in the article), has gone 404 between the time I wrote the article and when you just reviewed it. But that source has in-depth analysis about various Twitter reactions critical of the three-ball design; the title even ends with
and the internet had some thoughts
. Here is an archive link. Left guide (talk) 03:20, 28 August 2024 (UTC) - I originally shrugged at it having three balls, but then actually read the article for the backstory. Explicitly mentioning that it was scrapped makes it more compelling for me, who otherwise thought it was one of many random iterations. I add a new alt for consideration:
- ALT3 ... that plans for the statue of Dirk Nowitzki to have three basketballs were scrapped?—Bagumba (talk) 03:42, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Looks good now. ALT3 is fine with me. lullabying (talk) 03:53, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Pavel Kushnir
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that Russian pianist Pavel Kushnir was arrested for anti-war videos posted in a YouTube channel withSource: [37], first paragraph: "Pianist Pavel Kushnir died on July 28 after a dry hunger strike in a pretrial detention center in the Far Eastern city of Birobidzhan. He was 39 years old. The musician was detained in late May by FSB officers - he was accused of publicly calling for terrorism because of anti-war videos that he published on his YouTube channel with five subscribers."[38] - for "the first political prisoner to die in a dry hunger strike in modern Russia", article says that the last person who died of a hunger strike was Anatoly Marchenko in USSR in 1986.onlyfive subscribers, and became the first political prisoner to die in a dry hunger strike in modern Russia?
Artem.G (talk) 14:46, 22 August 2024 (UTC).
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- 1986 is modern though? Personally I would revise the hook (see below), as the first part is more interesting than the first person to die on a particular type of hunger strike in 35 years or so.
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- I don't think we can run "only" as it would be editorializing
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Overall: Sad story (t · c) buidhe 06:06, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Russian pianist Pavel Kushnir died on a hunger strike after his arrest for anti-war videos posted on a YouTube channel with five subscribers? (t · c) buidhe 06:06, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- Hey, thanks for the review! In 1986 it was still the USSR, and "modern" was about the Russian Federation. But yeah, an agree that it's not necessary; I think ALT1 is fine, thanks for copyediting.
with ALT1 (t · c) buidhe 02:00, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
G Affairs
- ... that Hong Kong actor Chapman To has announced that G Affairs would be his final film appearance?
- ALT1: ... that G Affairs was presented at project markets in Korea, Taiwan, and Hong Kong, but was rejected because it was deemed unmarketable in China? Source: [3]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ultimate X-Men (2024)
Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 13:56, 22 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The main hook is approved, and the check reflects this – the sources seem to indicate it may have been for political reasons (which would make the hook a bit more interesting IMO, but it's fine as is). I'd propose removing the word "the" for ALT1 before "project markets" to make it grammatically correct for ALT1 – make that change, and it's approved as well. Great work on this! Nomader (talk) 18:16, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Nomader, thanks for reviewing and providing feedback! I have removed the extra "the" in the alternate hook. I had considered mentioning the political reasons for To quitting filming in the initial draft of the article, but it seemed a bit digressive from the focus on the film's production, so I did not include it. I am open to adding it in both the article and hook if you think that would make things better. —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 12:41, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Prince of Erebor: I think that a brief mention in a sentence wouldn't be too off-topic and the context is important – but I think it could just be a brief mention instead of a full paragraph or something. That said, the current hooks are both just fine as is as well and my original approval is still good to go here. Nomader (talk) 02:57, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Then I will retain the current hook. Thanks for taking the time to review the article! —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 13:09, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Prince of Erebor: I think that a brief mention in a sentence wouldn't be too off-topic and the context is important – but I think it could just be a brief mention instead of a full paragraph or something. That said, the current hooks are both just fine as is as well and my original approval is still good to go here. Nomader (talk) 02:57, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Chambers, Isaac (14 March 2019). "Chapman To quits acting in movies". Far East Films. Retrieved 22 August 2024.
Hong Kong actor Chapman To ('Infernal Affairs', 'The Mobfathers', 'Isabella', 'Vulgaria') has announced in an interview that he will stop acting in movies. Instead, he will focus on working on his online TV channel, 'Chapman To's Late Show'... His latest movie, 'G Affairs' (pictured below), may therefore be his last film appearance.
- ^ 鍾志均 (28 March 2019). "狂嗆演員低能 杜汶澤臉書提醒18禁" (in Chinese). Liberty Times. Retrieved 21 August 2024.
日前受訪表示該片將是他最後一部電影作品,讓他也十分關注在台上映的觀眾反響
[In a recent interview, he [Chapman To] stated that this film (G Affairs) will be his last film appearance, therefore he expressed great interest in the audience's response during its release in Taiwan.] - ^ 王誦賢 (16 November 2018). "【G殺‧專訪】純港產片無人肯投資? 導演:無大陸市場搞唔到!" (in Chinese). HK01. Retrieved 20 August 2024.
當時他們到處找不同投資者,當中包括金馬創投會及富川電影節的創投會,可是通通換來一句,「套戲無可能在大陸拍到,無大陸市場」,之後李導與編劇回去改劇本,創造一個較富香港元素的故事。兩年後,當李導以為成功加入香港電影節投資會時,卻再次換來一句︰「你哋無大陸市場,搞唔到」。
[At that time, they (the filmmakers) sought various investors, including the Golden Horse Film Festival and the Bucheon International Fantastic Film Festival's project markets, but encountered repeated responses stating, "This film cannot be filmed in mainland China, it is unmarketable there." Subsequently, Lee and the writer (Kurt Chiang) returned to revise the script to create a story with more Hong Kong elements. Two years later, when Lee thought he had successfully joined the Hong Kong - Asia Film Financing Forum, he was met with the response, "You guys cannot make it into the mainland Chinese market, it won't work."]
Articles created/expanded on August 23
Margrit Waltz
... that when Margrit Waltz accepted a marriage proposal, she told her suitor that he would never be the first love in her life?
- Source: "I told him straight out that he had to understand that if I said yes, he would always be number two, as flying was my first love."
RoySmith (talk) 15:22, 23 August 2024 (UTC).
Unusual life, on fine sources, no copyvio obvious. This ref has a day of birth. I made some small changes, please check. I wonder why you don't give us readers an infobox, - I first thought Margrit Waltz was the name of the pictured airplane ;) - I am not happy with the hook, because I believe that it's only quirky if we get to know that her #1 love will always be flying, not some other man. I am also not sure if, with such an unusual record of 900 trans-Atlantic flights, we should go for some little quirkiness instead of that unusual achievement. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:34, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for the review and for finding the German-language source! I've added the date of birth and an infobox. How about:
- ALT1: ... that Margrit Waltz holds the record for the most trans-Atlantic flights?
ALT2: ... that Margrit Waltz has ferried almost 1000 planes across the Atlantic?
PS, I've stuck my original; you're right, it's a silly thing to focus on. Of the two above, I think ALT2 is the better one. RoySmith (talk) 14:14, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Thank you, I like both, and could also imagine a combination. - On the Main page right now Jerzy Artysz, and all the hook says is that he was honoured by a music university on his 70th birthday. Nothing about him as an unusual person. I don't recall any other baritone who performed so many title roles, - they usually go to the high voices. Sad. I had no time nor energy to fight it. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:42, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2a: ... that Margrit Waltz has ferried almost 1000 planes around the world?
- Gerda Arendt I just realized ALT2 is incorrect and replaced it with ALT2a. RoySmith (talk) 14:17, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- I see, but think "around the world might be misunderstood, no? Perhaps the 900 across the Atlantic are less vague, and interesting enough. At present, ALT1 is approved, I moved ALT2a below the approval, because I'm afraid not every prep builder will study the history. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:31, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2b: ... that Margrit Waltz has ferried almost 1000 planes to points on five continents?
Thank you, approving all, prefer ALT2b. Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:35, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- I see, but think "around the world might be misunderstood, no? Perhaps the 900 across the Atlantic are less vague, and interesting enough. At present, ALT1 is approved, I moved ALT2a below the approval, because I'm afraid not every prep builder will study the history. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:31, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
United States Pavilion
- ... that the United States Pavilion at the 1964 New York World's Fair was once likened to an ice-cream sandwich? Source: Perry, Ellen; Burns, James T. Jr. (October 1964). "The Busy Architect's Guide to the World's Fair" (PDF). Progressive Architecture. Vol. 45, no. 10. p. 232.
- ALT1: ... that just ten years after the United States Pavilion opened, the New York Daily News said "it looks like a bomb hit" the interior? Source: Medina, David (March 17, 1974). "Spirited '76 Aim for Bicentennial at Park". New York Daily News. p. 146
- ALT2: ... that during the 1964 New York World's Fair, police officers used computers at the United States Pavilion to help arrest people? Source: Pascal, John (December 9, 1965). "NY Fair Computer 'Unfair,' to Some". The Austin Statesman. p. A16.
- ALT3: ... that in 1976, there was a proposal to preserve the United States Pavilion by adding it to a national recreation area with beaches and wetlands? Source: "Urge Feds to Expand National Park". New York Daily News. March 31, 1976. p. 554
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mannion v. Coors Brewing Co.
- Comment: I can come up with more hooks later.
Epicgenius (talk) 17:27, 23 August 2024 (UTC).
I like ALT2, but will have to AGF on it. Article looks to be in great shape; eligible, no signs of copyvio or uncited paragraphs. QPQ checks out. I think we're good to go! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 19:03, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 24
UnMetal
- ... that UnMetal is a parody of Metal Gear and Metal Gear 2: Solid Snake?
- ALT1: ... that in UnMetal, the player has to heal any enemies they shoot? Source: "... or the player being forced to use some of their limited health kits to heal enemies that they use lethal force on thanks to Fox’s insistence that he will not kill because he’s not an assassin."
- ALT2: ... that in UnMetal, the player saves their game by using a urinal? Source: "They can be difficult at first so fast save often with your portable bedpan…yes, a bedpan. Plus, you must empty it out at real save points, which are restrooms."
- ALT3: ... that the protagonist of UnMetal was originally created for a canceled game that donated money to humanitarian aid NGOs based on the player's game progress? Source: "Jesse Fox has an interesting origin story linked to a project code-named Afraid Project. It was a game in which progress made by the players would have an impact on the real world. For each successful operation performed by Jesse, there would be a donation to an NGO." This is also mentioned in the in-game digital artbook.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Zbrojovka Z 4
AdoTang (talk) 02:40, 25 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: The plot section does not have inline sourcing, but this is not required per MOS:PLOTSOURCE. ALT2 talks about using a bedpan to save and needing to empty it to save again, which is not exactly what the hook says. It may need to be reworded if it is the hook chosen, but I believe other hooks are more interesting anyway, especially ALT3. The source provided for ALT3 does not mention humanitarian aid, but this is mentioned in other sources in the article. I believe this DYK is ready to go. Muhandes (talk) 11:04, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on August 25
Senior assassin
... that to win the game senior assassin, twelfth graders are encouraged to ambush fellow participating students with water guns? (Source)
- ALT1 ... that students playing senior assassin have been held at gun point for having their water guns be mistaken for real ones? (Source)
Johnson524 21:20, 29 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: @Johnson524: Nice work on the article. I just had one question about the hooks. Epicgenius (talk) 19:28, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Epicgenius: Created an ALT1 per suggestions above, but not one about seniors paying other seniors to assassinate targets because (at least from personal experience) this is not allowed in most version of the game. Hope this meets your expectations, cheers! Johnson524 03:36, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Thanks for suggesting ALT1, and I understand your point that it's not common for seniors to pay to assassinate other seniors. Although both hooks are fine, I prefer ALT1. Epicgenius (talk) 03:38, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Manuel Osa Nsue Nsua
- ... that a banker was named the prime minister of Equatorial Guinea to succeed a government that resigned for being "ineffective"?
- Source: News Central Africa ("Equatorial Guinea’s President Teodoro Obiang Nguema Mbasogo has appointed former bank chief Manuel Osa Nsue Nsua as prime minister, following a decree issued nearly three weeks after the previous government resigned for being 'ineffective.'")
- ALT1: ... that a banker was named his country's prime minister to succeed a government that resigned for being "ineffective"? Source: same
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Alfred Sully
- Comment: Open to other ways of wording or other ALT hooks. Was hoping to get this Equatoguinean featured in some way (since not many get featured after all - this would be only the country's third-ever DYK bio!).
BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:54, 25 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: You barely made the 7-day period! The hook is a little confusing, but oh well.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
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Café Adria
- ... that the nightclub Café Adria survived a hit by a Karl-Gerät siege mortar (pictured)?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jacques Lewis
- Comment: This hook depends on the remarkable picture for its impact. If it doesn't get the picture slot then an ALT may work better. Something about the revolving dancefloor, perhaps. But I plan to add a picture of that too...
Andrew🐉(talk) 09:23, 25 August 2024 (UTC).
Hi Andrew Davidson, review follows: article created 19 August and exceeds minimum length; I am not familiar with the online sources used but look like they should be reliable (WhiteMAD looks to be a specialist architecture site and Note From Poland has an editorial board and policy); I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing from the two; a QPQ has been carried out; image is excellent, I am happy to AGF that it was published as stated on Commons in 1957 without a copyright notice which would render it PD; hook fact is interesting and stated in the article, it is covered by the MAD source but needs a citation immediately after the statement to comply with the DYK rules. I also think the clarification needed tag should be addressed before a main page appearance. Happy to review any ALT hooks you come up with, the revolving dancefloor sounds intriguing! - Dumelow (talk) 09:47, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- What do we think of the statement on the Commons image page that the photo has been attributed by the Warsaw Rising Museum to being a different building in Napoleon Square? The link on the Commons page only goes to the Polish Wikipedia article for the museum - Dumelow (talk) 12:26, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Dumelow: Which image? Can you link it and the relevant discussions? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:56, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- Jarekt loaded the image and wrote those details of its provenance. Perhaps he can tell us more.
- To avoid the issue, I've changed that image to a similar one that is not disputed. The clarification tag has also been removed.
- The revolving dancefloor can be seen 90 seconds into this evocative video. It would be good to take a section of footage and turn it into a gif which shows it revolving but that would be technically complex and might not work well on the main page.
- Andrew🐉(talk) 09:39, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Thanks, replacement image looks to be OK. I've duplicated the ref after the hook fact as required by the DYK rules - Dumelow (talk) 12:01, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
- What do we think of the statement on the Commons image page that the photo has been attributed by the Warsaw Rising Museum to being a different building in Napoleon Square? The link on the Commons page only goes to the Polish Wikipedia article for the museum - Dumelow (talk) 12:26, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Yuan Shikai coinage
- ... that the Republic of China produced coins featuring emperor Yuan Shikai (pictured) for decades after his demise?
- Source: https://www.jstor.org/stable/42667176 pp.313–314 https://www.jstor.org/stable/42666643 p. 149
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 20:24, 25 August 2024 (UTC).
- I will do a full review shortly. Yue🌙 20:44, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: References were spot-checked for verification; no issues arose. I would suggest changing "emperor" to "president" though, because Yuan Shikai's tenure as the first president of the Republic is more notable than his brief stint as a pretender to the throne, hence his common description by historians and in his article as the "first Chinese president". Yue🌙 04:32, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
- I was initially going to put President, but I think the fact that a republic continued to put someone who declared himself emperor on their coinage is funny and interesting to me. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:12, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Anti-antisemitism in Germany
- ... that although the vast majority of violence against Jews in Germany is committed by ethnic Germans, accusations of antisemitism focus on minorities? Source: "usually, with around 95% of them [antisemitic physical attacks] committed by right- wing (leaning) white German individuals"[39]; "public accusations of antisemitism are increasingly directed at two groups: (1) designated Others (Muslims and other racialized minorities who seldom engage in anti-Jewish hate crimes) and (2) public intellectuals who are for the most part white ethnic Germans (including Jews and Christians) who demonstrate solidarity with these minorities" [40]
- ALT1: ... that one researcher found that nearly a third of the people cancelled over antisemitism allegations in Germany have been Jews? Source: In addition to the source cited in the article, it can be verified here: "According to the researcher Emily Dische-Becker, almost a third of those cancelled in Germany for their supposed antisemitism have been Jews."
- ALT2: ... that Eyal Weizman said that descendants of Nazi perpetrators "who murdered our families ... now dare to tell us that we are antisemitic"? Source: numerous
- ALT3: ... that Hannah Arendt and Albert Einstein might have been banned from speaking in German public institutions because of antisemitism rules? Source: https://jewishcurrents.org/the-strange-logic-of-germanys-antisemitism-bureaucrats
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mehmet Şerif Fırat
(t · c) buidhe 05:05, 25 August 2024 (UTC).
All hooks look very good to me and the article itself is high quality. It meets the size requirements without any copyright violations. The nomination is timely. The hooks appear in the cited sources; I do not have familiarity with them to be able to comment on reliability but I trust the nominator to know their stuff about this subject matter. G2G--NØ 11:13, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Political text messaging
- ... that Americans received nearly 15 billion political text messages in the 2022 election cycle?
- Reviewed:
Bluethricecreamman (talk) 21:26, 25 August 2024 (UTC).
QPQ is not necessary. Page is long enough and new enough. WP:EARWIG says violation unlikely. Hook is interesting, reliably sourced, and timely. Overall, I think this is good to go! Di (they-them) (talk) 01:09, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks! Bluethricecreamman (talk)
Palace Theater Light
- ... that the Palace Theater Light bulb has been running since 1908?
―Panamitsu (talk) 06:20, 25 August 2024 (UTC).
- Taking this — MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 00:20, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewing... will post my comments this afternoon! — MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 01:44, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: I am okay with sourcing as spot checks passed. However, I think you should actually link all the newspaper articles where possible so that any reviewing admin can also verify the sources. — MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 01:44, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Panamitsu: I need you to please fix source 4, cited several times. Atlas Obscura articles are user-generated and user-editable with minimal oversight, and the site's terms of use includes disclaimers about user submissions. Many of the "places" articles cite Wikipedia as a source of their information or otherwise lack clear or reliable sourcing. Per WP:GUNREL: These articles should generally not be referenced on Wikipedia. I personally would have no issue with you using this source once or twice for something uncontroversial, however unfortunately for an article to appear on the Main Page, I don't think this source is gonna cut it. I can seek a second opinion if you want, but I would hate to approve it only for an admin to step in and decline to post...— MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 02:37, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- @MaxnaCarta: Thanks for telling me this, I hadn't seen this website before. I've removed it now. Luckily the other sources were already used for the same information so I didn't have to make many changes, except for removing a name and a year. ―Panamitsu (talk) 02:54, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Panamitsu: all good, thanks for actioning so fast. I will review the rest of the sources and come back to you. I dont anticipate any issues. Looks okay from here. Cheers — MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 02:57, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
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Afonso Henriques Theatre
- ... that the Afonso Henriques Theatre, in Guimarães, Portugal, regularly performed shows and plays to aid the construction of the nearby Santos Passos Church?
- Source: [1]
- Reviewed:
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Overall: Draft published the day of nomination, length is good, material is neutral, the hook is interesting, and no QPQ is required 🙂 For the citing of the hook and some of the citing of the article, I have to AGF because I cannot read Portuguese, but the article does not appear to read in a plagiarized manner. Before passing this DYK, there's just a few places in the article which need a citation which I've marked with a 'citation needed' tag, but otherwise, the page looks really good and was an interesting read. Cheers! Johnson524 21:07, 29 August 2024 (UTC) Johnson524 21:07, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ "Efeméride de 22-04-1863 · Arquivo da Sociedade Martins Sarmento" [Event of 22-04-1863 - Martins Sarmento Society Archive]. csarmento.uminho.pt (in Portuguese). Guimarães: Efeméride Vimaranense. 22 April 1863. Archived from the original on 26 March 2024. Retrieved 26 March 2024.
KUVI-DT
- ... that country music singer Buck Owens bought a bankrupt TV station in California from his sister? Source: https://newspaperarchive.com/other-articles-clipping-aug-30-1990-4413100/ + https://newspaperarchive.com/other-articles-clipping-nov-13-1990-4413105/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Abortion in Benin
- Comment: Another new market to DYK!
Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:06, 27 August 2024 (UTC).
- Dibsing review but I gotta come back for it. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 08:59, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Article newly promoted to GA. Length is well over the minimum. Sourcing is reliable and consistent through the article. No concerns about CV, POV, or other policy issues. Hook is interesting - how often does a country singer buy a TV station? Reference checks out. QPQ complete. Ready to roll. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 11:13, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Dorothy Stanley
- ... that Dorothy Stanley supervised the Indian village attraction at a canceled theme park by the founder of Taco Bell? Source: Ref 3: "She ... supervised ... the Indian Village at the West Side and Cherry Valley Railroad theme park in Tuolumne." + Bell's full vision for the Westside & Cherry Valley Railway theme park never came to be.
- ALT1: ... that Dorothy Stanley was once said to be one of the last speakers of the Miwok languages? Source: Ref 3: "Mrs. Stanley, whose family belonged to the hereditary leadership of the Northern Sierra MeWuk, was one of the last speakers of the MeWuk language."
- ALT2: ... that Dorothy Stanley dedicated the first United States Bicentennial plaque in her native Tuolumne County, California? Source: The first Tuoloumne County historical marker for the 1976 bicentennial has been dedicated ... Dorothy Stanley ... unveil[s a plaque on a rock shaped like an Idian [sic] Arrowhead.]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Burnt toast theory
ミラP@Miraclepine 17:57, 28 August 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: New enough, long enough, sourced and neutral, with earwig detecting no violations. Assuming good faith on paywalled sources. QPQ has been completed and everything seems to check out! Great job on this article for this outstanding individual! Ornithoptera (talk) 06:29, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
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