Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Terry Waya

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The following discussion is an archived debate of the proposed deletion of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was draftify‎. I see a consensus that this could be potentially suitable for mainspace with better sourcing, but we're not there yet. And I think it's been worked on enough by other editors to void eligibility for WP:CSD#G5. Complex/Rational 23:58, 2 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Draftify There is little doubt that Waya passes WP:BIO, but I have reached the conclusion that this article is pure cruft. I have been verifying the references, and have found far too many that fail verification. This needs to be developed in Draft space and submitted for review. It requires a radical pruning of useless references, and a substantial précis, probably to a stub level. At present it is a fluff piece, serving only to promote the subject 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 22:34, 25 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  • Draftify Several sources fail verification, several lines dont seem neutral. Overall it reads as promotional and could probably use some copy editing. Questions? four OLIfanofmrtennant (she/her) 04:33, 26 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hi, I have taken out time to take out the trash that were identified. Also, I have tried to add one reference per fact as suggested by @Timtrent. I removed a couple of primary sources that are hard to verify, merged two sections into one and took out fluffy statements too. This is an effort towards its improvement as suggested. I also took your advice on doing some copy editing. We all can take a second look at the article and decide if my efforts saves it. My intention is to learn and get it right. I initially gave up it's improvement but as advised by @Timtrent, I worked on it again. Feedbacks are welcome. Thank you Peaxman (talk) 08:41, 26 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the debate. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.