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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:43, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
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Mary Saran
... that Mary Saran emigrated as a refugee from Nazi Germany to England in 1933?
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Created by Charles01 (talk). Nominated by SSTflyer (talk) at 09:58, 9 October 2015 (UTC).
- Comment: Her life is a lot more interesting than this hook implies. Yoninah (talk) 02:34, 2 November 2015 (UTC) I agree Victuallers (talk) 18:20, 5 November 2015 (UTC)
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... that the German socialist refugee Mary Saran stayed in England where she wrote about "winning the peace" and "re-making Germany"? - (alt2)... that the German refugee Mary Saran had a marriage of convenience to help her stay in Britain?
- Length and age is fine although there maybe better hooks. Lots of refs and many in German. Its neutral. If we can find a hook then this will be ready to go Victuallers (talk) 18:20, 5 November 2015 (UTC)
ALT2 onky So see above. @Yoninah: will confirm that the hook fact is inline for the hook he likes and its sourced. Lots of German sources but I spotted no close paraphrasing on the en:sources I looked at. Victuallers (talk) 19:24, 5 November 2015 (UTC)
Thanks, @Victuallers: for the alts. ALT2 hook ref verified and cited inline. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 19:51, 5 November 2015 (UTC)