Talk:Time (K. Michelle song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 15:21, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• The song was released → replace "The song" with "It" to avoid repetition

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:04, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• produced "Time", and wrote it alongside → no comma

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:04, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Critical response to "Time" was positive; critics praised the song's lyrics and the singer's vocals, and identified it as a highlight from the album → Critical response to "Time" was positive, with reviewers praising the song's lyrics and the singer's vocals, as well as identifying "Time" as a highlight on More Issues Than Vogue

• The "with" sentence construction is actually discouraged on here (as I have found out during FACs). Aoba47 (talk) 23:04, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• produced "Time", and wrote → remove comma

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• as a promotional single from Michelle's → I would say

• I do no think that your suggestion is complete here. Aoba47 (talk) 23:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• (2016).[2][3][4] The single was available upon pre-ordering the album → (2016),[2][3][4] upon pre-ordering the record

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• through videos uploaded on her official Instagram account; in the black-and-white clips, she performs → through black-and-white videos uploaded on her official Instagram account, where she performed

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• March 7, 2016, she performed the song → say "sang the song" to avoid repetition

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• four minutes and 37-seconds → four minutes and 37 seconds

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• The instrumental also includes "soulful melodies over climactic piano keys".[8] Along with strings and a piano, the single features drums in its composition.[4] → The instrumental also includes "soulful melodies over climactic piano keys" along with strings, a piano and drums.[4][8]

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• and Ken Hamm of SoulBounce.com referenced it → and Ken Hamm of SoulBounce.com referred to it as an

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• the singer directs its message to an ex-partner and tells them that it is too → the singer adresses an ex-partner whom she tells that it is too

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• associated "Time" as part of how Michelle → associated "Time" with how Michelle

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Could find no significant mistakes here

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• The following credits were adapted from → Credits adapted from

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Flawless ;)

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 23:10, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Kimberly Pate is K. Michelle's legal name; she is listed under her full name on the song's credits → Kimberly Pate is K. Michelle's legal name, whereas she is listed on the song's credits

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:11, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• 35.9% is still acceptable!

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 23:11, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article (I can't verify the books, so I trust you with this!)

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 23:11, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Another great article.  On hold for 7 days. I'm looking forward to re-reviewing "Trainwreck"... Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:53, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• @Cartoon network freak: Thank you for the review. I believe that I have addressed everything. Aoba47 (talk) 23:11, 2 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Gladly passing this! Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:16, 3 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]