User contributions for 204.65.34.238

26 August 2013

• 19:3719:37, 26 August 2013 diff hist +996‎ Talk:Deepwater Horizon oil spill ‎ →‎RESTORE Act needs to be reflected here: new section
• 18:1118:11, 26 August 2013 diff hist 0‎ Gilgamesh ‎ made King List capitalized as it is a proper noun, ( a specific document) , to match its wiki page.
• 18:0618:06, 26 August 2013 diff hist +772‎ Talk:When God Writes Your Love Story ‎ →‎Lacking context
• 18:0118:01, 26 August 2013 diff hist +572‎ Talk:When God Writes Your Love Story ‎ →‎21 and 16?

21 August 2013

• 20:0820:08, 21 August 2013 diff hist +1,615‎ Talk:Chelsea Manning ‎ →‎Overuse of Nicks source: new section

12 August 2013

• 19:3619:36, 12 August 2013 diff hist +5‎ Elapidae ‎ →‎Venom: grammar correction.
• 14:2714:27, 12 August 2013 diff hist +871‎ Talk:Mayflower ‎ →‎Scope creep in article?: new section

9 August 2013

• 20:0220:02, 9 August 2013 diff hist −631‎ House of Tudor ‎ →‎Mary I: A troubled queen's reign: Removed unsourced and unencyclopedic content regarding Phillip and Mary...reads as tabloid, not as encyclopedic content. Please rewrite or bring to Talk if reverted.

25 July 2013

• 16:3716:37, 25 July 2013 diff hist +358‎ Talk:Prince George of Wales ‎ →‎Record
• 16:3516:35, 25 July 2013 diff hist +542‎ Talk:Prince George of Wales ‎ →‎Style before naming
• 16:3116:31, 25 July 2013 diff hist +369‎ Talk:Prince George of Wales ‎ →‎Biography record
• 16:2516:25, 25 July 2013 diff hist +455‎ Talk:Rosalind Franklin ‎ →‎Franklin Sexism

24 July 2013

• 14:0414:04, 24 July 2013 diff hist −453‎ Everett Ruess ‎ Unsourced material; non-notable. Looks like someone put a reference to their school thesis here. not encyclopedic. Tag: Visual edit

18 July 2013

• 15:0215:02, 18 July 2013 diff hist +907‎ Talk:Glee (TV series) ‎ →‎Holy Lede, Batman: new section
• 14:3114:31, 18 July 2013 diff hist +7‎ Edict of Expulsion ‎ Chf Tag: Visual edit

11 July 2013

• 13:0413:04, 11 July 2013 diff hist +28‎ 2013 Bodh Gaya bombings ‎ →‎Attack warnings

1 July 2013

• 13:0913:09, 1 July 2013 diff hist +1‎ Talk:Same-sex marriage in the United States ‎ →‎"Bans"
• 13:0913:09, 1 July 2013 diff hist +988‎ Talk:Same-sex marriage in the United States ‎ →‎"Bans"

28 June 2013

• 21:3221:32, 28 June 2013 diff hist +586‎ Talk:United States v. Windsor ‎ →‎undue weight of dissents

27 June 2013

• 18:4818:48, 27 June 2013 diff hist +1,433‎ Wikipedia:In the news/Candidates ‎ →‎SCOTUS Decision on Defense of Marriage Act
• 18:3718:37, 27 June 2013 diff hist +568‎ Talk:Defense of Marriage Act ‎ →‎DOMA DECLARED UNCONSTITUTIONAL BY SCOTUS JUNE 26, 2013

13 June 2013

• 22:4322:43, 13 June 2013 diff hist −676‎ Boy Scouts of America ‎ Removed claim in membership controversises re" Southern Baptists..not supported by referenced article, and specifically incorrect per reputable sources PLEASE SEE TALK PAGE FOR DISCUSSION. This will need further editing when consensus reached. Thanks!
• 22:3822:38, 13 June 2013 diff hist +2,257‎ Talk:Boy Scouts of America ‎ →‎Questionable claim in controversies section: new section
• 21:2421:24, 13 June 2013 diff hist +371‎ Talk:Association for Molecular Pathology v. Myriad Genetics, Inc. ‎ →‎is becomes was: new section
• 21:1821:18, 13 June 2013 diff hist +1‎ Association for Molecular Pathology v. Myriad Genetics, Inc. ‎ since we now have a decision, I have changed "is a case" to "was a case". This seems to be standard practice (e.g.. Kelo V. City of New London).~~~~

12 June 2013

• 19:1819:18, 12 June 2013 diff hist +14‎ PRISM ‎ added "whistleblower" to Edward Snowden to match other whistleblower description in lede, and reference.
• 13:3413:34, 12 June 2013 diff hist +390‎ Talk:Edward Snowden ‎ →‎Not a "whistleblower"

10 June 2013

• 22:4322:43, 10 June 2013 diff hist −250‎ Classified information in the United States ‎ →‎Claims of U.S. government misuse of the classification system: removed uncited reference to conspiracy theory that has had citation on for several months.
• 22:1422:14, 10 June 2013 diff hist +310‎ Talk:PRISM ‎ →‎No back doors
• 21:4121:41, 10 June 2013 diff hist +25‎ Talk:Edward Snowden ‎ →‎Not a "whistleblower"
• 21:4021:40, 10 June 2013 diff hist +806‎ Talk:Edward Snowden ‎ →‎Not a "whistleblower"
• 21:3621:36, 10 June 2013 diff hist +395‎ Talk:Edward Snowden ‎ →‎Reaction section is almost all negative
• 13:4413:44, 10 June 2013 diff hist +701‎ Talk:La Ciudad Blanca ‎ →‎Edit Wars
• 13:3213:32, 10 June 2013 diff hist +755‎ Talk:La Ciudad Blanca ‎ →‎Terminology
• 13:0713:07, 10 June 2013 diff hist +1,357‎ Talk:Archicebus ‎ →‎Primary vs. secondary sources

3 June 2013

• 15:1115:11, 3 June 2013 diff hist +285‎ Talk:Chemtrail conspiracy theory ‎ →‎Uniquely American?
• 15:0915:09, 3 June 2013 diff hist +570‎ Talk:Chemtrail conspiracy theory ‎ →‎What about this?
• 14:3214:32, 3 June 2013 diff hist +36‎ Crystal skull ‎ →‎Speculations on smaller skulls: changed subheading title to reflect actual content. No discussion of small skulls exists in text.
• 14:2714:27, 3 June 2013 diff hist −283‎ Crystal skull ‎ →‎Crystal skull collections: removed unicted material. Citation needed tag has been in place since 2009.

29 May 2013

• 22:1822:18, 29 May 2013 diff hist +1,019‎ Talk:Watercolor painting ‎ →‎Large portions of text need citations: new section

23 May 2013

• 20:2220:22, 23 May 2013 diff hist +299‎ Talk:Murder of Lee Rigby ‎ →‎Dual wolf?

22 July 2010

• 20:4920:49, 22 July 2010 diff hist −2‎ First Crusade ‎ →‎Council of Clermont: edited first tow sentences for flow. The first sentence was redundant given the section preceding it, so I incorporated it into the second; better as clause than standalone.
• 20:2720:27, 22 July 2010 diff hist +1,598‎ Talk:Rochester, New York ‎ →‎Decline of Downtown?: new section
• 20:0120:01, 22 July 2010 diff hist +782‎ Talk:Rochester, New York ‎ →‎Companies
• 19:5619:56, 22 July 2010 diff hist +1,019‎ Talk:Rochester, New York ‎ →‎city vs. conurbation
• 19:4719:47, 22 July 2010 diff hist +61‎ Rochester, New York ‎ →‎Browncroft: additional information added about browncroft neighborhood. (notable parks)