Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Regine Velasquez on screen and stage/archive1
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 24 August 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]
Regine Velasquez on screen and stage (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Pseud 14 (talk) 01:50, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list after working on getting the singer's list of songs and awards to FL status. It has gone through a copy-edit to improve the lead. Constructive criticism, in any form and from anyone, will be appreciated.
A pre-emptive comment re sourcing – I've struggled with finding reliable sources for music videos specifically dating back in the 80s and 90s (e.g. MTV, Billboard and the likes). Unlike in the U.S., the Philippine music scene is quite devoid of music video promotion and charts. I utilized a website/artist page that compiled a screenshot of videos released, which perhaps can be an acceptable substitute. As well, I have used verified/official YouTube channels (per WP:RSPYT) for the more recent ones. I’ve sought guidance before nominating and Aza24 was kind enough to provide clarity. Happy to address your comments and thanks to all who take the time to review the list. Pseud 14 (talk) 01:50, 8 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- In the film table, "Mars Ravelo's Captain Barbell" sorts under C for Captain. If the title of the film was Mars Ravelo's Captain Barbell, it should sort under M
- Film title corrected, it was in fact released as Captain Barbell in 2003. Same correction made under music videos too.
- The notes in the stage table are not full sentences, so they shouldn't have full stops
- Removed full stops
- Same for the notes in the video albums table
- Done
- Description column in the commercials table should not be sortable
- Fixed
- Some of the refs in the commercials table have the company (eg Ariel (detergent)) as the author. These should be shown as the publisher, not the author.
- Done for the refs noted, switched from author to publisher
- That's all I got - great work overall! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:35, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for taking the time to review ChrisTheDude! I have addressed the above comments, let me know if there's anything I may have missed. Much appreciated! Pseud 14 (talk) 20:33, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:16, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for your input and support, ChrisTheDude! Pseud 14 (talk) 21:30, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Support Comments by Aoba47
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I hope my review is helpful. The lead is well-written, and my comments about that are relatively minor. My biggest concern is about the inclusion of the music videos and video albums as neither of these two items really fit this list in my opinion. I have noticed some issues with the citations, but they should be easy to correct. I will read through the list again once all my comments have been addressed. I hope you are having a great start of your week. Aoba47 (talk) 05:04, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Thank you for your patience with my review. I support this list for promotion. If possible, I would greatly appreciate any input on my current peer review on a more obscure singer. Either way, have a great rest of your week! Aoba47 (talk) 04:22, 13 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Appreciate your review and support Aoba47! Happy to look at your peer review this week. Take care Pseud 14 (talk) 15:34, 13 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments Support from HAL
Resolved comments from ~ HAL333 00:04, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply] |
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* She went on to appear in a series of supporting roles in the comedies Pik Pak Boom (1988) and Elvis and James 2 (1990)--> "She went on to appear in supporting roles in the comedies Pik Pak Boom (1988) and Elvis and James 2 (1990)"
That's all. ~ HAL333 22:29, 14 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support ~ HAL333 00:04, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks HAL333! Pseud 14 (talk) 00:09, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)
- Tables need captions- e.g. at the top of each table code put `|+ table_caption_text`. If this text would duplicate a nearby section header, you can hide it from visual browsers like |+ {{sronly|table_caption_text}}. This allows non-visual screen reader software to jump straight to a named table without having to read out all the text above it to find it. --PresN 16:43, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks PresN, I missed this one. Done per these changes. Pseud 14 (talk) 17:23, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review – Pass
Will do soon. Aza24 (talk) 06:36, 18 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Version reviewed: [2]
- Formatting
- Is "Journal Online Ph" the People's Journal? Would link if so
- Ref 9 missing link to work
- Reliability
- Considering the subject matter, fine overall. The potential issue already discussed (and explained in the nom statement)
- Verifiability
- Checked a few for statistical information—no issues
- The two issues seem far too minor to prevent a source review pass. I would still attend to them at some point though. Aza24 (talk) 06:45, 18 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you Aza24, I have addressed the two points above. Appreciate your time in doing the review. Pseud 14 (talk) 13:02, 18 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Closing; promoted. --PresN 18:25, 23 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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