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The list was promoted by Scorpion0422 23:26, 28 April 2009 [1].

List of ROH World Tag Team Champions

Nominator(s): WillC

Featured list candidates/List of ROH World Tag Team Champions/archive1

I am nominating this for featured list because... same as my recent FLCs, I want to expand them to a higher class, etc. All comments will be taken care of quickly.Will C 15:06, 15 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Truco

Comments by Tru co

Geez, so many nominations from this user =P

I thought that would be a good thing. Tomato potato.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Lead

"The ROH World Tag Team Championship is a professional wrestling world tag team championship owned and copyrighted by Ring of Honor (ROH), and contested for it their tag team division." --> The ROH World Tag Team Championship is a professional wrestling world tag team championship owned and copyrighted by Ring of Honor (ROH); it is contested for in their tag team division.

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"Title changes that happen on ROH's primary television program, Ring of Honor Wrestling, air up to three to five weeks apart. " -- "happen" would be better worded as occurred

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"The inaugural champions were The Prophecy (Christopher Daniels and Donovan Morgan), whom ROH recognized to have become the champions after defeating The American Dragon and Michael Modest on September 21, 2002 at ROH's Unscripted event in the finals of a one-night tournament." -- The last name of Daniels and Morgan should only be mentioned

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"As of April 2009, The Briscoe Brothers' fourth reign and Austin Aries' and Roderick Strong's only reign are tied for most defenses, with 18; The Briscoe Brothers' second and third reign, Dan Maff's and B.J. Whitmer's first reign, The Second City Saints' (CM Punk and Colt Cabana) first reign, The Backseat Boyz (Trent Acid and Johnny Kashmere), and The American Wolves (Davey Richards and Eddie Edwards) are all tied for the least defenses, with zero." -- What reigns were the Backseat Boyz and American Wolves in? I would end the sentence instead of having the semi-colon.

Fixed. They both have only had one reign so I didn't think I needed to note it.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"The current champions are The American Wolves (Davey Richards and Eddie Edwards)." -- Last names only

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

List

The wrestler column needs to have the tag team member whose name comes first in the alpha. listed first to sort by, not in just any order.

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Why are some columns aligned in the center and others to the left?

Pre my other FLcs. Some wanted the first five centered, while the rest they didn't. Was going by other comments trying to avoid those problems in this article.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

For vacated reigns, the days held needs a dash not a "0"

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"A.J. Styles and The Amazing Red defeated Christopher Daniels and Xavier, who was filling in for Donovan Morgan." -- What do you mean filling in for Morgan?

Morgan couldn't be in the match as far as I know, so another stable mate filled in for him.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"Became the ROH World Tag Team Championship after Aries and Strong defeated Naruki Doi and Masato Yoshino in Japan on July 9, 2006." -- Incomplete sentence.

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"The championship was vacated when Maff left Ring of Honor. The company covered Maff's leaving by saying he was forced to retire as the result of an automobile accident, which never occured" -- 1)Use ROH instead of spelling it out 2)Typo on occurred

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"This episode is set to air on tape delay ~~sometime~~ in May 2009."

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

"The Kings of Wrestling's (Chris Hero and Claudio Castagnoli) fourth defense is not recognized by Ring of Honor considering it was defended at a Combat Zone Wrestling event which was not sanction by ROH." --> The Kings of Wrestling's (Chris Hero and Claudio Castagnoli) fourth defense is not recognized by ROH because it was defended at a Combat Zone Wrestling event, which was not sanction by ROH.

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"Each reign is ranked highest to lowest, reigns with the exact number mean they are tied for that certain rank" --> Each reign is ranked highest to lowest, reigns with the exact number mean they are tied for that certain rank" --the comma should be a semi-colon

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Note 5 should be in the key

Fixed.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

References

411Mania isn't generally favored on Wikipedia, what makes it reliable in this article?--Tru co 18:21, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I used the source mainly as a quote. It is a review of the event on DVD which tells the account of the title getting destroyed. Other than that small note it isn't used for anything else so I believed it would be reliable enough for the quote alone.--WillC 19:35, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Also for the qoute that Maff left the company in a small video package. I thought it would be reliable enough for those small events.--WillC 19:36, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Hmm. Although it is a review of the event, the quotes have statements that are directly from the event and not opinionated, I would instead use {{cite video}} to source these statements.--Tru co 22:46, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Well I guess a good faith source would be better than a questionable written source. Okay.--WillC 22:56, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The |people= parameter is not correct in having Ring of Honor, unless you state that its the roster, but if not, you need to remove it. In addition, is there a way you can split the second paragraph into 3 paragraphs, its really long.--Tru co 14:43, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed.--WillC 22:53, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Support -- Previous issues resolved; list now meets WP:FL?. You're improving Will :)--Tru co 01:10, 19 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 12:20, 21 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs) Really nice job; this list is in better shape than the previous ones were when they came to FLC.

- Thanks.--WillC 22:52, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
"Daniels and Morgan were eventually awarded phyical belts later in 2002. " "eventually ... later"—remove one of these redundant words.
- Fixed.--WillC 22:52, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Image caption should have a period at the end because it is a complete sentence, per WP:CAPTION.
- Fixed. I didn't think it was a complete sentence so I didn't leace a period while writing it.--WillC 22:52, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
"Used for vacated reigns in order to not count it as an official reign"-->Used for vacated reigns so as not to count it as an official reign (fix this on other lists also)
- Fixed.--WillC 22:52, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Dates should not have leading 0s per WP:MOSDATE—for example: "September 06, 2003"-->September 6, 2003 Dabomb87 (talk) 15:59, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed.--WillC 22:52, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 12:20, 21 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

~~Ring of Honor is sometimes italicized and sometimes isn't; please make it consistent.~~ Dabomb87 (talk) 15:59, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Well the ref was doing that so I just now noticed. I made it consistent with the other two refs.--WillC 22:52, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Giants2008

Comments -

"which was destroyed by The American Dragon and Michael Modest after they were defeated by The Prophecy to become the inaugural champions." They couldn't have become the inaugural champions if they lost, right? Confusing sentence that needs work.
- Fixed.--WillC 03:01, 21 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
"Daniels and Morgan were later awarded phyical belts in 2002." Move "later" to before "in", and fix the typo ("physical").
- Fixed.--WillC 03:01, 21 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
"for the first time earlier that month, where...". where→when, since month and when are both time-related.
- Fixed.--WillC 03:01, 21 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Extra dor in note 2 before B.J. Also replace the comma in note 5 with a semi-colon. Giants2008 (17-14) 02:24, 21 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed.--WillC 03:01, 21 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Support - Nice work overall. Giants2008 (17-14) 00:35, 22 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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