Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of One Piece episodes (season 9)/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by Scorpion0422 23:36, 7 February 2009 [1].

An anime episode list. -- Goodraise (talk) 06:47, 19 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

A couple things, mostly WP:MOS-JA related:

• Kônosuke Uda → Kōnosuke Uda: circumflexes are deprecated in favor of macrons (the page linked to should be moved as well). In the same vein, Eiichirô Oda → Eiichirō Oda.
  • Links changed and move requested. -- Goodraise (talk) 00:03, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• Title emphasis and WP:MOS-JA#Titles of books, CDs, movies, etc.: BRAND NEW WORLD → "Brand New World"; the tildes in "We Are ~7 Straw Hat Pirates variant~" need to be replaced with something more appropriate (parentheses, maybe); ADVENTURE WORLD → "Adventure World".
  • Done. -- Goodraise (talk) 00:07, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "seiyūs" → "seiyū": non-naturalized Japanese words are not pluralized with "s".
  • Done. -- Goodraise (talk) 00:07, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• Rōmaji titles should be title-cased, as seen in episodes 313 on. And some fixes along with that:

• episode 302, 305: "Rucchi" → "Rutchi": っち is "tchi", see Hepburn romanization#Double consonants
• episode 303: "oozakura" → "Ōzakura"
• episode 311, 320: "zenin" → "zen'in": んい and に need to be disambiguated, WP:MOS-JA#Body text #5
• episode 319: "Jī-san" → "Jii-san": WP:MOS-JA#Body text #1, kanji/hiragana *aa/*ee/*ii are not macronned unless used with ー (e.g. らーめん rāmen)
• episode 320: "Tsuini" → "Tsui ni": don't attach particles to the preceding word
  • All done. -- Goodraise (talk) 00:17, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

—tan³ tx 22:32, 19 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved, but when I went to title case the rōmaji, I glanced over a couple spelling errors and a wording error; the episode summaries should be given a closer look. No comments on content, as I've not watched this series past the first fifty episodes. —tan³ tx 07:47, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, that's what you meant with "title-cased". Thanks for doing it. I'm reluctant to mess with the romanizations. I'd propably break more than I'd fix. -- Goodraise (talk) 08:45, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Weak support from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs) Needs a copy-edit. Depending on whether I can take care of my other real-life and wiki obligations, I may return to look at the prose again.

• "The Special Chapter contains episodes, recapping the back stories of the Straw Hat Pirates, and five omake adaptations of short comics by Oda, originally published in the One Piece Log fan magazine. "-->The Special Chapter contains episodes, which summarize the back stories of the Straw Hat Pirates, and five omake adaptations of short comics by Oda, which were originally published in the One Piece Log fan magazine.
  • Done. -- Goodraise (talk) 04:10, 24 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "over fifty-seven episodes" Numbers over nine should generally be written in numeric form (57).
  • Done. -- Goodraise (talk) 04:10, 24 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "These episodes seamlessly continue the story of season 8." "seamlessly" as opposed to what...?
  • Fixed. (Rewrote that paragraph.) -- Goodraise (talk) 05:45, 25 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "Together with the sea train conductor Kokoro"
  • Done. -- Goodraise (talk) 04:10, 24 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "They crossed the yearly occurring storm" Why are is the past tense suddenly used here?
  • Fixed. (Rewrote that paragraph.) -- Goodraise (talk) 05:45, 25 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "in order to" (multiple occurences)
  • Done. -- Goodraise (talk) 04:10, 24 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "Enies Lobby drawing near"-->As Enies Lobby draws near
  • Done. -- Goodraise (talk) 04:10, 24 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "and as his friends gaze in awe"-->While his friends gaze in awe (add a period before this phrase)
  • Done. -- Goodraise (talk) 04:10, 24 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "All goes smoothly at first, but by the time the" Who are "they"?
  • Fixed. -- Goodraise (talk) 05:51, 25 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "ten-thousand men. "-->10,000 men.
  • Done. -- Goodraise (talk) 04:10, 24 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "The Galley-La foremen and the leading members of the Franky Family arrive late at the second gate, but they are bringing with them the family's king bulls mounted on caterpillar tracks."-->The Galley-La foremen and the leading members of the Franky Family arrive late at the second gate, and have brought along with them the family's king bulls mounted on caterpillar tracks.
  • Not done. Fixed in an other way. -- Goodraise (talk) 10:41, 25 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• "With their combined forces" comma after this phrase. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:44, 23 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Done. -- Goodraise (talk) 04:10, 24 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• Striking oppose, will come back to copy-edit over the weekend. Dabomb87 (talk) 00:39, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Changed to weak support, the prose actually gets better as you move down. Dabomb87 (talk) 17:12, 3 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:44, 23 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

• The general ref is missing a publisher.
  • Fixed. -- Goodraise (talk) 04:21, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
• Refs 3 to 7 should not have the title in all caps. Make it in sentence case. Dabomb87 (talk) 03:50, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Fixed. -- Goodraise (talk) 04:21, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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