Wikipedia:Featured article removal candidates/Simon and Garfunkel

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Simon and Garfunkel

Article is no longer a featured article

I'm an experienced editor who has just opened an account. I hope this does not affect the validity of my argument.

This might have been a good article once, but now it pales in comparison to other music articles:

  • Major
  1. it has NO notes and references WHAT-SO-EVER.
  2. the lead is choppy and does not provide enough context.
  3. the music samples are disruptive to the article (yes, you still have to consider aesthetics). I suggest moving them to the bottom of the article.
  4. no fair-use rationale of images.
  5. The entire article is choppy; there are many paragraphs with only one or two sentences (this is not enough to state and expand on a point), and the prose does not flow. If this is what Wikipedia's very best work is, then I'm extremely disappointed. Traitor 22:50, 13 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • Minor
  1. it uses unsightly conventions : #12 instead of the preferred "number twelve."