Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/2006 FIFA World Cup/archive3

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted 16:57, 28 June 2007.

previous FAC

This article is comprehensively written and a very good account of the 2006 FIFA World Cup. It is no longer merely a collection of match results, but covers the background of the World Cup and other facts relating to it. The prose is of an excellent standard and well cited. As the tournament has been over for nearly a year now, the overall content of the article is unlikely to change, and most edit wars regarding the content have been resolved. Hopefully you will all agree that this article has improved a lot since the last time it was nominated for FA status. - PeeJay 12:12, 25 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

• Oppose Large chunks of the article are unreferenced or under-referenced. A significant amount of copyediting is required (random example: The team's veterans of the Golden Generation (like Zinedine Zidane, Claude Makélélé and Lilian Thuram), who had came out of retirement for the World Cup, combined with the more youthful talents of Thierry Henry and Franck Ribéry, and began to find their form as they came from behind to defeat Spain 3-1, having conceded the first goal of the match in the 28th minute.). IMO there's still quite a way to go before this meets the criteria. It might be a good idea to take this to peer review before going for FA. Oldelpaso 19:00, 25 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
• Oppose. As much as I'd like to see this article at FA status, I agree with Oldelpaso. On top of that, the lead is poorly formatted (WP:LEAD) and generally the whole thing is just clunky. Needs to be fleshed out, referenced, and heavily copyedited. Suggest taking it to WP:PR as it appears this article is far from FA quality. JHMM13^(Disc) 03:43, 27 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.