User talk:Waffles82/sandbox

Hi Lena,

Out of your three topics I think limnetic zone would be the most suitable. The others are a bit too broad.

Your draft is grammatically well-written, in a neutral tone, and all the information is relevant to the topic. I liked your use of links - they link to related and useful articles that will help the reader further understand this topic and freshwater bodies. The sources used are recent and scholarly sources. I would continue with information about what organisms live in this zone, and maybe a further description of the habitat (ex. depth of this zone). Overall, it is a good introduction paragraph. Great work! Selaginellaa (talk) 01:36, 24 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Selaginellaa: Thank you so much for your advice on what information I can add! That is very helpful. Waffles82 (talk) 01:50, 24 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]