User talk:Taylor.claytonn/sandbox

Nice organization of your sandbox. A lot of good ideas that just need to be elaborated. Make sure to keep track of what sources relate to what information. Don't forget to put the intext citations when you are done. You could also reference the tide pod challenge along with the cinnamon challenge but you would probably have to find another source. Since you are doing youtube's effects specifically avoid the Donald Trump Twitter thing unless it really ties in well

Peer Review Pt. 2 The first review covered most of it, but good amount of credible sources. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bretthoffman25 (talk • contribs) 14:32, 15 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Taylor, The information you provide is good and your sources are excellent. It looks almost ready to upload. Before you do, check for concise language and absence of mechanical errors. You've cited each piece of information appropriately. The challenge may be to find the appropriate place on the WP page to add each item.JAirhart 14:06, 29 March 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Airhartcomp (talk • contribs)