User talk:Reactorgo22/sandbox

Hi, this is Xiaoxuan (Lily) Chen and my netid is xchen56.This is my comments for the peer review: 1) Please don' t use all those extension links in your article, I believe you should either quote the things you need in the reference area, or rephrase the things you want to use. 2) The format of your citation should be APA and I can't really even find your citation area. 3) Your chemistry reactions were written not professionally, if you have used ChemDraw/ Chem doodle, please write your equations in that and then upload as a picture (reference any other official wikipage)

Hi, this is Karthik Balakrishnan and my netid is blkrshn2. Attached are my peer review comments:

First and foremost, good elaboration on your compound and brining in a wide range of uses as well as other details. it would be nice if you could have subheadings, and categorize them accordingly, so it will be visually easy for the reader to understand the information you provided. Furthermore, it would be nice if you have a citation section, and reference parts of your article to parts of the information, that way it will also be less cluttered without having to place weblinks in the middle of your article.

This article, like most from this class, reads poorly and requires major help from a professional chemist. Ask your teacher to contact the Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Chemicals. Please do not upload this article until it meets our minimal standards----Smokefoot (talk) 01:45, 19 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]