User talk:Meganshask/sandbox

@Meganshask: - it all looks good to me, but I'm not sure I'm seeing a lot that's different from the existing Wikipedia article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:56, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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@Meganshask: - This looks good, but there are a few things that need fixing.

• You have a lot of duplicate references. Please combine duplicates as outlined here.
• You can't use a blog as a source. You used sofiebulan.wordpress.com as a source several times. There's nothing in the site to indicate that this is a reliable source - I couldn't find any evidence that the author was, say, a widely-recognized expert or anything like that. It doesn't meet Wikipedia's requirements for a reliable source. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:09, 3 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]