User talk:Jaso2541
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Swarm 20:23, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
Motlana
Hi. I've just done some polishing to your article on Nthato Motlana. In all, it's good work. Problem, though, with your description of him as a "forerunner to the new black elite" - yes, the Guardian used the phrase "new black elite" in the article you referenced, but they didn't so much as mention Motlana's name. So I removed it. If you want to describe him as such, you'll need a better source than just "the Guardian used this phrase once".
All in all, though, you did (as I said) good work, and I look forward to reading more of your contributions. DS (talk) 14:36, 10 October 2011 (UTC)