User talk:Dmartinez489/Child sacrifice
When I started to read the article it clearly described why child sacrifice was going on and also mentioned what parts of the world this was happening. It mentioned a lot about some of these cultures participating in. What was helpful to know is some of these cultures were doing it either for their gods or loyalty for their village. Everything is laid out right and it leads to the point of the article.
Firstly do you think the article does well giving information in some parts? Do you also think that maybe some of that information could need a little bit of more details or change anything?
Second, I think you should focus more on Africa, it does have somewhat information but I think it should have a lot more like the Columbian cultures.
Third, focus on history, there's so much history about these sacrifices that should be known.
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