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Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Hashidayama (May 12)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Hashidayama (May 13)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Kinugasa Castle (May 20)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Hashidayama (July 28)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Hashidayama has been accepted
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Utopes (talk / cont) 13:57, 14 August 2024 (UTC)AfC notification: Draft:Battle of Kinugasa Castle has a new comment
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- Thank you so much for your help! I'll begin fixing it later once i have time. Thanks again! BeamLSB (talk) 15:31, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Kinugasa Castle (August 14)
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- (Copied from draft): Actually, I'd wager the "89-year-old Miura Yoshiaki" aspect is fixed; I just combined the important bits from each sentence, which saves some space on the page. Still unsure what to do with the chronology and organization. only the names relevant to the overarching context of the battle should be included; it is confusing to namedrop individuals who don't appear anywhere else in the text, especially without a source / wikilink / existing article to refer to. Utopes (talk / cont) 22:42, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for editing a few of the problems in the article, i feel like for now i dont have really much to change or add now that you've edited the biggest issues. I see the problem with Azuma Kagami being a source i used for most of this, but thats because theres only 2 (as far as i know) primary sources about this battle and one (Heike Monogatari) barely touches upon it. I did add some secondary sources to the sources section but they also mostly use the Azuma Kagami as reference. It's really difficult to find sources about this war as a whole especially these smaller battles (much less in English, thats why all my sources except the Heike Monogatari are in Japanese). BeamLSB (talk) 09:50, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
- Can't thank you enough for all the edits you made on the page, the page looks way better and more readable now, maybe i'll resubmit it later. BeamLSB (talk) 13:52, 16 August 2024 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Kinugasa Castle has been accepted
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Utopes (talk / cont) 16:32, 17 August 2024 (UTC)- Thanks for reviewing this page too! I will soon begin on other Genpei War battles that arent in engwiki yet now that im done with Hashidayama and Kinugasa. BeamLSB (talk) 19:50, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Ichihara has been accepted
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Utopes (talk / cont) 22:57, 23 August 2024 (UTC)