User talk:Beachwaves/Symbiotic bacteria
Will’s Peer Review
Detailed. Organized. Excellent examples. I gotta say Sarah, if this were a featured article (yea I know they are longer but still) I would not be surprised. This article does a lot really well; I really like that you included a historical background to symbiosis. In addition, the organization between the different types of symbiosis, the detailed examples of symbiotic relationships, and even the benefits of symbiosis for humans via gut bacteria all contribute and enrich this writing. There honestly is not much of anything I would change with this article; I would see this as an example that I would strive to achieve to be honest. Maybe some of the writing throughout the article is a little less formal compared to some featured Wikipedia articles, but that is a really small suggestion that might not even be truly valid. This organization and level of detail is something I should try to emulate in the future with any scientific writings that arise! Truly awesome stuff Sarah!!