User:Tomslocumb1/Rhopalium/CEPayne Peer Review

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General info

Whose work are you reviewing? Tomslocumb1
Link to draft you're reviewing
User:Tomslocumb1
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Rhopalium

Evaluate the drafted changes

I would work on describing you species famiy so that the reader doesn't have to look at an image and mabey highligh a few imparticular species. Its hard to distidush the additions that you have in you sand box and the original paper. Try to make it so that that is clearer when you turn in the final grade