User:ScottyPometta/Accepting the non-binary gender/FranklinLu Peer Review
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Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
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Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
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General info
- Whose work are you reviewing?
ScottyPometta
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ScottyPometta/Accepting_the_non-binary_gender?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- Accepting the non-binary gender
Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Scott, this my peer review of your draft!
Content
Since your draft has no content at the moment, I'll be writing suggestions about what to add to it so that you can hopefully improve the quality of the actual article.
- Add the context for the article
- Why is it so important to have an article that talks about accepting the non-binary gender?
- What is happening in places around the world that makes accepting the non-binary gender urgent?
- Statistics of how non-binary people are being/feeling treated
- You could probably create an entire section detailing how different countries treat non-binary gendered people
- What falls under the umbrella of the term non-binary gender?
- How can individuals begin accepting the non-binary gender?
- How can institutions and the government begin pushing for the acceptance of non-binary genders?
- What does the general population think about this topic?
- What are their attitudes towards this? Love it? Hate it? Indifferent?
- Is there something in common between the people who love it/hate it/are indifferent?
- Religious beliefs, political affiliations, nationality
- What are common misconceptions or stereotypes about non-binary genders that you can clarify/reject?
- Maybe you can talk about the portrayal of non-binary genders in pop culture and media (and how they might be portrayed negatively, more importantly)
- How does that affect attitudes?
- Find studies regarding non-binary people that can support the article
I look forward to your article!