User:Rachelscarseth/Woman Hater/Wentl015 Peer Review

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General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

Rachelscarseth, Levi.roske, Kyliemackedanz

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rachelscarseth/Woman_Hater?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Woman Hater

Evaluate the drafted changes

(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think you need a lead/introduction before you start on your headings and subsections. Overall, I think this article is very well written and utilizes some great sources. I also think your use of media (photos, graph) was well done. The information in your article is presented clearly and is comprehensible. There are a couple of spelling errors ("pamphlet" in the subsection Swetnam the Woman-hater and "criticism" in the subsection Mark Twain's Letter to His Fiance) but otherwise I think you did a great job on this article!