User:Oliviaolcott/Christine Sun Kim
advice from Tim's peer review:
- I think overall, the current version of the article has a great amount of sources. It doesn't seem to have any obvious unsourced claims.
- Your biggest job would probably be expanding the existing sections since they're pretty sparse.
- You could also look into adding a section on the public's reception to her work. There's some great lists of her exhibitions, but not much info about how it was received by people. That's something that many artists' articles have.
- There is a bit of vagueness in the section headings. Why is one section called Art and the next called Artworks? You could provide a lot of clarity by updating, combining, or distinguishing those sections in some way.
 | This is the sandbox page where you will draft your initial Wikipedia contribution.
If you're starting a new article, you can develop it here until it's ready to go live. If you're working on improvements to an existing article, copy only one section at a time of the article to this sandbox to work on, and be sure to use an edit summary linking to the article you copied from. Do not copy over the entire article. You can find additional instructions here. Remember to save your work regularly using the "Publish page" button. (It just means 'save'; it will still be in the sandbox.) You can add bold formatting to your additions to differentiate them from existing content. |