User:Mb4500/Enneagram of Personality

Areas for improvement:

Wings-- this section is limited but also research doesn't seem to support it much.

Add a section about center

maybe a levels of development (although it is said that this is mostly supported by the creators of the enneagram: Don Riso and Russ Hudson)^[1]

add a section about ways the enneagram is taken/measured (self report, interview,

Found great review article^[2] for enneagram!! posted in 2021 (PM#- 33332604)

Based on this article-- the final sentence in the "nine types" paragraph is described incorrectly. the wings have to be of the types next to the center type for example- a type 4 can have 3 or 5 wings but a type 4 can't have a 9 wing because they aren't next to each other.

This systematic review article found that the enneagram is an example of a practice used that has a gap between the science supporting it and the ability to put the theory to practice.

factor analysis suggests that there are fewer than 9 categories (especially when looking at the WEPSS--> points to more like 5 types similar to the big five)

The lead section is really great. It has a well-rounded overview of the article and lists important aspects of the topic. The History section has lots of information but doesn't really flow together. I found myself reading through it a few times to see the relation between the different paragraphs. It says the origin of the Enneagram is disputed a list would work and maybe that's what you were going for but in its current format, it is hard to tell if they should be paragraphs or bullet points. I thought the whole article was very neutral so good work!

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^ "How The System Works". The Enneagram Institute. Retrieved 2022-02-26.
^ Hook, Joshua N.; Hall, Todd W.; Davis, Don E.; Van Tongeren, Daryl R.; Conner, Mackenzie (2021-04). "The Enneagram: A systematic review of the literature and directions for future research". Journal of Clinical Psychology. 77 (4): 865–883. doi:10.1002/jclp.23097. ISSN 1097-4679. PMID 33332604. {{cite journal}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)

[1] "How The System Works". The Enneagram Institute. Retrieved 2022-02-26.

[2] Hook, Joshua N.; Hall, Todd W.; Davis, Don E.; Van Tongeren, Daryl R.; Conner, Mackenzie (2021-04). "The Enneagram: A systematic review of the literature and directions for future research". Journal of Clinical Psychology. 77 (4): 865–883. doi:10.1002/jclp.23097. ISSN 1097-4679. PMID 33332604. {{cite journal}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)

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