User:Kmani111/New York-style pizza/CaitlinSchmill Peer Review
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Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
General info
- Whose work are you reviewing?
Kmani111
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- Creating User:Kmani111/New York-style pizza/CaitlinSchmill Peer Review - Wikipedia
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- New York-style pizza - Wikipedia
Evaluate the drafted changes
There is no information within the sandbox, so I will be peer reviewing the article itself.
Lead
Guiding questions:
- Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
- The Lead is currently up to date.
- Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
- yes, the lead does include an introductory sentence that is concise with the article's topic
- Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
- Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
- No, it includes all pertinent information.
- Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
- Concise
Content
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added relevant to the topic?
- All content is relevant to the topic
- Is the content added up to date?
- All content is up to date
- Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
- No, everything is exactly how ot should be
- Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
- No, it does not
Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added neutral?
- All content is neutral
- Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
- No information in the article is biased
- Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
- No there are not
- Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
- No, it is clearly all about New York style pizza. 
Sources and References
Guiding questions:
- Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
- all sources are reliable
- Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
- Yes
- Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
- Yes
- Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
- yes
- Check a few links. Do they work?\
- Yes, they work
Organization
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
- All content is clear and concise and easy to read.
- Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
- No spelling errors that I noticed
- Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
- Yes, all sections are broken down and reflect the major points of the topic
Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media
- Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
- Yes, there are plenty of images
- Are images well-captioned?
- Yes, each picture is captioned
- Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
- Yes
- Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
- Yes
Overall impressions
Guiding questions:
- Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
- Yes the article is complete
- What are the strengths of the content added?
- The history and the many images displaying New York style Pizza
- How can the content added be improved?
- I feel like the article is perfect in depicted the New York Style Pizza