User:K8-25/1993 Milwaukee Cryptosporidiosis outbreak/Mell4143 Peer Review
Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
General info
- Whose work are you reviewing? K8-25
- Link to draft you're reviewing: User:K8-25/1993 Milwaukee Cryptosporidiosis outbreak
Feedback (also found in draft talk page):
Hi K8-25, I reviewed your article draft for ENPH 450. It looks like you have a good start. The lead section is concise; it is a good summary, it is not too wordy or vague. The epidemiology section doesn't have any citations added, but I saw that you had them listed so you'll probably do that later. The sources were legitimate and appropriate for a Wikipedia article, so that's good. The only thing that I would probably suggest adding are statistics to the epidemiology section. For example, you mention a financial, social, and economic burden, can you quantify this? Is there data out there on the number of people who have died because of this outbreak?
Lead
Guiding questions:
- Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? yes
- Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? yes
- Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? somewhat
- Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? no
- Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? it is concise
Lead evaluation
Content
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes
- Is the content added up-to-date? yes
- Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? could include numbers to explain the outbreak
- Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? not sure. Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? not sure
Content evaluation
Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added neutral? it is neutral
- Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? no
- Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? no
- Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? no
Tone and balance evaluation
Sources and References
Guiding questions:
- Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? yes, but be sure to cite all the material added in the article
- Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yes
- Are the sources current? yes
- Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? not sure Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? not sure
- Check a few links. Do they work? yes
Sources and references evaluation
Organization
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? yes
- Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? some, but they are an easy fix
- Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes, but it will look more organized once the draft is completed.
Organization evaluation
Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media
- Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? yes
- Are images well-captioned? no, it needs a caption
- Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? I think so
- Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? yes