User:Go23bears/Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on social media/RiaVora Peer Review
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Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.
General info
- Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)
- Go23bears
- Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Go23bears/sandbox
Lead
Guiding questions
Lead evaluation
Since these are just drafts, they have not been added to the actual article and therefore not incorporated into the lead
Content
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added relevant to the topic?
- Yes, it talks about the rise of social media and other online platform usage, as well as movements that gained heightened popularity during COVID-19
- Is the content added up-to-date?
- Yes, it is relevant to this year
- Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
- There is no content that doesn't belong, but more can always be said about BLM and the increased usage of social media
- Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
- No, but it does describe BLM, which can be considered a historically marginalized population if that counts
Content evaluation
Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added neutral?
- Yes
- Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
- The article seems to be a bit biased in favor of people using social media platforms, but it is minor issue
- Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
- Same as above, a slight skew towards people using social media platforms
- Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
- No
Tone and balance evaluation
Sources and References
Guiding questions:
- Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
- Every line and paragraph is cited by information, not sure if it is all considered a secondary source of information
- Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
- Yes, and they reflect unbiased sources
- Are the sources current?
- Yes, they are all from 2020
- Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
- They do include reliable sources, there could be more from the perspective of black individuals for the BLM part, as a historically marginalized population
- Check a few links. Do they work?
- Yes
Sources and references evaluation
Organization
Guiding questions:
- Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
- In most parts, but it is missing commas in some sections that could use some.
- Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
- Other than the commas, not that I could find!
- Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
- Yes, it reflects the use of online mediums during COVID-19
Organization evaluation
For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
- Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
- There could be more sources for sections, such as BLM, but each source seems reliable
- How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
- As mentioned above, seems great but could use more black perspective
- Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
- Yes
- Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
- No, it should! Especially to help with BLM section
New Article Evaluation
Overall impressions
Guiding questions:
- Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
- Yes! Added very necessary content
- What are the strengths of the content added?
- Reliable sources, well-structured
- How can the content added be improved?
- Commas, Links to other articles, and more perspective sources