User:Farheem/Choose an Article

Article Selection

Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Dragon (rocket)
Article Evaluation: - Article doesn't have multiple sections; - No images; - Could use more citations
Sources
http://large.stanford.edu/courses/2012/ph240/thavapatikom2/docs/HSR_38.pdf

Life-cycle engineering
Article Evaluation: - Could use more data tables and charts to compare where in the life cycle of a product environmental impacts are most severe (see source below)\; - Could add more specific examples
Sources: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S2212827117308533

Sustainable industries
Article Evaluation: - Only talks about History and has a minimal 4 sources; - Could talk more about modern day sustainable industries (article needs to be brought up to date)
Sources: https://mitsloan.mit.edu/ideas-made-to-matter/these-3-industries-are-next-line-sustainable-innovation

Orbital spaceflight
Article Evaluation
- could have more detail on each phase of an orbit instead of general description
- examples are limited to 4
- could expand by talking about the effects on humans
Sources: https://www.dovepress.com/incidence-of-clinical-symptoms-during-long-duration-orbital-spacefligh-peer-reviewed-article-IJGM; ASTM F1166-07(2013) Standard Practice for Human Engineering Design for Marine Systems, Equipment, and Facilities1, 2; ASTM E1527-13 Standard Practice for Environmental Site Assessments: Phase I Environmental Site Assessment Process; https://www.nasa.gov/exploration/systems/sls/overview.html; https://www.nasa.gov/content/more-about-the-human-landing-system-program; https://www.space.com/suborbital-orbital-flight.html