Talk:Up All Night: The Live Tour/GA1

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:42, 20 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• One dead link
  • Fixed. Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• worked out the video production → Not very encyclopaedic
  • Better? Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• its performance of "Moments → Lacking an end quotation mark
  • Done. 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
• I'd suggest using a the certification table like on Music of the Sun or Rated R (Rihanna album) as it has symbols for which countries are based on sales or shipments.
  • I hate working with that table. Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • It's a lot simpler to use, and more informative.  — AARON • ^TALK 21:00, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• A release history table would be useful. Say UK, US, Australia, and some of Europe.
  • The first section covers that.. It was released worldwide. Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• FN2 should use cite web and not cite news, as Hearst Corporation shouldn't be in brackets.
  • Done Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Same for FN3, Viacom shouldn't be in brackets.
  • Done Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• Apply this to FN8 and FN9
  • Done Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Status

Although its a short article with only two sections of prose in the main body of text, it is well written. On hold.  — AARON • ^TALK 19:01, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing and the compliment . Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passing.  — AARON • ^TALK 21:00, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]