Talk:Tony Sage
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Copyedit needed
The article reads like a resume and needs appropriate references to be added. Hack (talk) 08:29, 23 August 2011 (UTC)
- Indeed. I've had a go at resolving some of the issues, although it's been mere copyediting as I haven't had the opportunity to look up sources other than to confirm some things aren't prominent enough to warrant coverage. Orderinchaos 00:31, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
Query on degree qualification
The article attributes Sage with a 1980 Bachelor of Business degree from Churchlands College. This official timeline shows that Churchlands was a teachers' college from 1972 to 1981. Can someone please clarify? Cheers, Bjenks (talk) 03:28, 11 October 2012 (UTC)
- "History of the School of Business Churchlands College / Western Australian College of Advanced Education" from ECU Publications shows that the Churchlands campus was offering a Bachelor of Business degree from about 1975. Presumably he was one of those students. https://ro.ecu.edu.au/ecuworks/7016/ Macktheknifeau (talk) 06:50, 13 February 2020 (UTC)
Bio Policy Issues
This article doesn't conform to WP:NPOV, especially impartial tone. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1.126.49.69 (talk) 22:47, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
- I got rid of a few lines of obvious npov, I think it's enough to take the tag off. The article really needs a cleanup/restructing. I would suggest splitting into specific paragraphs/sections regarding individual businesses he is a part of rather than just rambling run-on sentences, but that's another issue.Macktheknifeau (talk) 06:42, 13 February 2020 (UTC)