Talk:Tomorrow I Go
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 18:11, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
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Will do initial comments now, but more to come shortly. --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:11, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
- Infobox looks good, apart from the absence of a single chronology
- "is a song performed by Albanian" → "is a song by Albanian"
- Target CD to Compact disc
- "song which incorporates" → "track that incorporates"
- "in its instrumentation" → "in the instrumentation"
- "It lyrically discusses" → "Lyrically, the song discusses"
- Remove wikilink on love as it's too obvious
- "marriage also reflecting a story" → "marriage, while also reflecting the story"
- "The song represented Albania in" → ""Tomorrow I Go" represented Albania for"
- "pre-selection competition Festivali i Këngës with" → "pre-selection competition, Festivali i Këngës, with"
- "with the" → "with the song's"
- "version "Nesër shkoj"
- "the sixteenth place in a field of twenty four scoring a total of fifty three points" → "the 16th place in a field of 24, scoring a total of 35 points"
- "her Albanian-themed performance" → "her Albanian-themed performance of the song"
Done
Background and composition
- Start this section off with mentioning who wrote and composed the original song
- "In 2004, Ledina Çelo was" → "In 2004, Çelo was"
- "As part from the competition's rules" → "For complying with the competition's rules"
- "The singer took part" → "Çelo took part"
- "song "Nesër shkoj" composed by Adrian Hila and written by Pandi Laço" → "song "Nesër shkoj", composed by Hila and written by Laço"
- "Musically, the song is" → "Musically, the latter is"
- "song incorporating traditional" → "song that incorporates traditional"
- Target Albanian Instruments to Music of Albania instead
- "Lyrically, it discusses" → "Lyrically, the track discusses"
- Remove wikilink on love
- Add wikilink on wedding like in the lead
Done
Promotion and release
- Retitle to Release and promotion
- Swap the order of release info around with promotion info
- Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest to itself
- Any more info on the video?
- "on 29 April 2005 as" → "on 29 April 2005, as"
- "A standalone download was made available on" → "The song was made available for digital download on"
- 14 February 2018 through" → "14 February 2018 by" to avoid repetitive wording
- Mention the other label as well as RTSH
Done
At Eurovision
Festivali i Këngës
- Remove wikilink on Festivali i Këngës
- "to determine country's" → "to determine the country's"
- Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2005
- "It consisted of two semi-finals" → "The former consisted of two semi-finals"
- "on 16 and 17 December, and the grand final on 18 December 2004" → "on 16 and 17 December 2004, and the grand final on 18 December of that year"
- "in which, Ledina Çelo was chosen" → "which included Çelo being chosen"
- "represent the country" → "represent Albania"
Done
Kyiv
- Remove the target on 50th edition as that's already been wikilinked to
- Do the same for Eurovision Song Contest and Kyiv wikilinks
- "on 19 May and the grand final on 21 May 2005" → "on 19 May 2005 and the grand final three days later"
- "to the then-Eurovision rules" → "to the Eurovision rules at the time"
- "except the host country" → "apart from the host country"
- "Spain and the United Kingdom" → "Spain, and the United Kingdom"
- "final, although, the top ten" → "final. However, the top ten"
- "the top 10 result in the previous year" → "the top ten result of the previous year"
- "In the grand final, the country" → "In the grand final, Albania"
- "sixteenth place in a field of twenty four with 53 points" → "16th place in a field of 24, with 53 points"
- Mention the performance was of the song
- "dressed with traditional" → "dressed in traditional"
Done
Track listing
- Good
Release history
- Are you sure the CD should be included in this table since it is part of a compilation?
- Like I said, only centre the ref; take "Hear My Plea" for example
Done
References
- Make sure all are archived using the tool
- Copyvio score is very clean
- Target Mopo to Hamburger Morgenpost on ref 4, but keep the former citing as a publisher solely
- On ref 8, remove "On Amazon..." from the ref titles and change the respective publishers to Amazon.it and Amazon.es, keeping the wikilinks though
Final comments and verdict
Will get round to the other sections being reviewed soon, hence my listing of them above. --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:11, 7 May 2020 (UTC)On hold as this is quite a short article but needs a few fixes before GA status. --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:01, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: I did the changes you've requested.--Lorik17 (talk) 21:57, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass as things have been sorted; however, I have noticed during multiple reviews that you seem to not understand my comments about the references quite often. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:25, 8 May 2020 (UTC)