Talk:Teresa Mañé/GA1

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Reviewer: Morogris (talk · contribs) 21:21, 15 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Review

Will review shortly. Morogris (✉ • ✎) 21:21, 15 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Biography (now Early life and Career setions)

• My first comment is the title of this section should be rephrased. We know this is a biography, so we need to rename it and possibly section it. I changed the names but only as a placeholder. Please change them as you see appropriate.

• I disagree with this change to be honest. I don't think this split has helped, as it just arbitrarily cut the first paragraph into its own section and left the rest of the biography as is under "Career". If I thought the biography was long enough to warrant sectioning, I would have already done so. --Grnrchst (talk) 09:45, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• Teresa Mañé i Miravet was born in Cubelles, into a relatively well-off family, who raised her in nearby Vilanova i la Geltrú.[1] - Does this source cite the DOB? It was included in the infobox but not here, so it is technically unsourced.

• Puente Pérez 2016, p. 21 cites the date of birth as 29 November 1865. Montagut Contreras 2015 simply cites the year 1865. I can clarify this in any way you think would help. --Grnrchst (talk) 09:45, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• after meeting a number of Catalan anarchists, such as Josep Llunas i Pujals and Teresa Claramunt. - Is there a mention of when this occurred? I think it would be important to highlight when in her life she became an anarchist.

• This mostly occurred in 1888. I can clarify that, but as it was covered in between the dates of 1886 and 1889 I didn't think it was necessary. --Grnrchst (talk) 09:45, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• daily newspaper Tierra y Libertad [ca]. - An article has already been created so we can delete the foreign-language Wikipedia page linked here

• Done. --Grnrchst (talk) 09:45, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• where the Italian Gruppo Emancipazione della Donna was based - Could we add a description of what that means? An Italian what?

• Clarified with a translation of the group's name. Let me know how you think I should proceed further. --Grnrchst (talk) 09:45, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• But after a lawsuit against Joan by Arturo Soria y Mata threatened his arrest - Replace "Joan" with "Montseny" per previous uses.

• I used "Joan" as I thought "Montseny" might be ambiguous with their daughter Federica Montseny. Should I change it anyway? --Grnrchst (talk) 09:45, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• Teresa Mañé i Miravet died on 5 February 1939 in Perpinyà.[31] - We should use "Mañé" only per previous uses.

• Done. --Grnrchst (talk) 09:45, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Views

• In July 1923, Mañé published El sindicalismo y la anarquia in La Revista Blanca - I'm not fully aware, but should we add an English translation alongside the Spanish name of her paper? Something like "Unionism and anarchy" (or is it "syndicalism")?

• municipio libre - Ditto. Translation would help readers not familiar with Spanish. I was thinking we could even red link this since I'm sure it could have its own article. Spanish Wikipedia "municipio libre" redirects here

• Mañé published Hablemos de la mujer in La Revista Blanca, - Curious if we could add the translation here too

• Added explicitly tagged English language translations for all of these. --Grnrchst (talk) 09:49, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Works

• This entire section is unsourced. Please add appropriate sources after every bullet point, or maybe if there is a single source that cites all her works/translations, etc.

• Also, we need to make sure the dates are fully cited. For example, the mention that La Revista Blanca started 1898 is cited before, but not when it ended in 1906. We know she wrote a piece in 1923, but this doesn't mean the newspaper was opened again. No mention of 1936.

• The last part, in Conferences, has an external link that needs to be converted to a inline citation.

• @Morogris: This section is now fully cited. I also commented out the external link. --Grnrchst (talk) 10:21, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA assessment

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Concerns have been addressed. Article is promoted to GA status. Morogris (✉ • ✎) 15:49, 21 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]