Talk:Sweet Love (Chris Brown song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 22:47, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
General
Info box
- No issues.
Lead
- You say "Sweet Love" quite a lot. Change some of them to "It" or the "The song".
Done
- "Musically, "Sweet Love" is a slow jam R&B ballad that displays elements of electronic music. Lyrically, it revolves around Brown asking his lover to get naked so they can have sexual intercourse." → "Sweet Love" is a slow jam R&B ballad which incorporates elements of electronic music. The lyrics of the song revolve around Brown asking his lover to take off her clothes so that they can have sex.
Done
- "In the US," → In the United States,
Done
- Write "chart" after Hot 100.
Done
- → was co-directed
Done
- "It features scenes of Brown and his love interest making love," → It displays intimate scenes of Brown and his lover partaking in sexual activity,
Done
- "The video garnered positive reception from critics for its sexual theme." → Critics were complimentary of the video's sexual themes and presentation.
Done
Background and release
- No issues.
Composition and lyrics
- → "Sweet Love" is a slow jam R&B ballad that displays elements of electronic music; it lasts for a duration of three minutes and 19 seconds long. (You will have adjust footnotes accordingly.
Done
- "so they can make sweet love." → Is this your own words?
Fixed
Critical reception
- No issues.
Music video
- You don't need three subsections, you don't need subsections are all really. The paragraphs aren't long enough for it.
Done
- → was co-directed
Done
Track listing
- No issues.
Credits and personnel
- No issues.
Chart performance
- No issues.
Release history
- No issues.
References
- No issues.
Summary
On hold for 7 days. Aaron • You Da One 17:15, 6 August 2012 (UTC)
- Passing :) Aaron • You Da One 23:04, 7 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks! Oz talk 23:18, 7 August 2012 (UTC)