Talk:Samuel Blais/GA1
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:34, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:34, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
- Page number for ref 6 would be great.
Done
- Frédéric Lavoie is the general manager for the Estacades, right?
Done
- Yes, clarified. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 10:10, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- "Commandeurs" or "Commanders"?
Fixed Commandeurs. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 10:10, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- "the Trois-Rivieres" Doesn't make sense to have "the" here, unless you want to change it to "the Estacades" instead.
Done
- "5'9" {{convert}}
- His draft overall number should also be mentioned in the prose.
Done
- Be consistent with using "Blues's" or "Blues'".
Done
- "lost six games" Lost in six games.
Done
- "the teams Offensive" Missing apostrophe.
Done
- Craig Berube should be linked for context.
Done
- "He recorded his first career professional goal in his AHL debut" The reference says he only recorded two shots on goal in that game.
Done
- Ref 31 has an agency (AP).
Done
- "reasigned"
Done
- Lead can be expanded with his AHL career.
Done
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:17, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Nova Crystallis, I hope I have made the appropriate changes. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 10:10, 25 May 2020 (UTC)