Talk:Sólheimar Ecovillage
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It is very good but i think it may need an extra section talking about the effects of the village--Max klein666 (talk) 01:24, 30 October 2009 (UTC)
(sorry for my expression's failures, i'm basic level of english ) is this article very neutral ? sources are exclusively from affilied sites, style is often advertising of this community. maybe because i don't understand ? say me, please ! for exemple, in introduction: "Sesselja was a passionate advocate for integrating children with and without disabilities, and it was here in Sólheimar where this vision was brought to life" the text in bold characters is not neutral (what a precious and pictural style!). i propose this formulation (approximately): The fondator think Sólheimar like an integrative's place for children with and without disabilities it's just an example, a better english speaker will be able to change this redundant adverts in encyclopedic article. --78.239.37.206 (talk) 23:24, 4 February 2011 (UTC)