Talk:Road Rash 3/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:12, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
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- Much as I love it, "fisticuffs" seems like an informal term for an encyclopedia.
- "worldwide locales" settings instead of locales.
- "need for a marketable feature" all things need to be marketable, was this more for "global" appeal?
- EA is overlinked in the infobox.
- Lead should probably mention motorcycle.
- "in third-place or" no need to hyphenate.
- "... third-place or higher among..." etc is a complicated sentence! Could you split it?
- "number of locales around" locations or settings.
- "access a bike shop" lots of "bike" in this sentence, at least ditch this one.
- "player may potentially purchase" why potentially? If they can afford it, presumably they can.
- "at a password entry screen" -> "at an entry screen"
- "Motorcycle cops" cop is a colloquial term, not encyclopedic.
- I don't think we need to link "helicopter".
- "repo man for the bike shop or a snitch" these terms could be linked though.
- "Breen serving as producer" no need for this serving.
- What's 3DO?
- What are "gameplay sprites"?
- What's Sega CD?
- complimented or complemented?
- Link Megadrive.
That's it on a quick review, so on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:20, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
- All points have been addressed. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 17:21, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
- Ok, suits me, so promoting. Good work. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:25, 3 May 2021 (UTC)