Talk:Norwood Depot/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:34, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
Comments
- In the lead, "with a mini-high section for accessibility. The" overlinked.
Done
- "The Massachusetts Bay Transportation Authority (MBTA) began subsidizing" could link.
Done
- "through Norwood. Norwood Depot" repetitive, could reword perhaps?
Done
- " it is substantially" the last "it" was a car park. Perhaps "the station is substantially..."?
Done
- "Dedham).[6][1] D" ref order.
Done
- "the NY&NE petitioned" add this abbreviation in after the first use of the expanded description.
Done
- "Boston.)[14][15][1] The" ref order.
Done
- "completed.[19][3]" same.
Done
- "open.[23][3] Service" same.
Done
- "an $11 million track" inflate.
Done
That's it, on hold for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:34, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review! I've addressed all the items above. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 21:09, 22 February 2022 (UTC)