Talk:Nagi Yanagi/GA1
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Reviewer: Zzzoom (talk · contribs) 14:41, 6 April 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It be helpful if some of the tables in Discography were sortable. Also, there are some tables with useless rows in that section.
- Not sure how to do that, maybe @AngusWOOF: can help here. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- The discography table doesn't need to be sortable but I would recommend title be listed in the first column as with Koda Kumi discography. AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 11:07, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- Not sure how to do that, maybe @AngusWOOF: can help here. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- This whole section looks like it could work as a list.
- That's how artist biographies are usually written though, right? A summary of their releases? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- I suppose so, after looking back. Zoom (talk page) 02:47, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- That's how artist biographies are usually written though, right? A summary of their releases? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- Not sure that this is a source relating to the topic.
- I've replaced it with an archive link; it seems the site got squatted since the time of publication. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- It would be helpful in the future to archive all of your references. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zzzoom (talk • contribs) 22:31, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
- Is this a requirement or just a recommendation? Just for clarification. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- Just a recommendation! My bad. Zoom (talk page) 02:47, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- Is this a requirement or just a recommendation? Just for clarification. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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- As I've mentioned to you on Discord, no free images of Yanagi are known to exist, so not much I can do on that end. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:41, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
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- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- @Narutolovehinata5:@Juhachi:Just make sure to follow through with the previously mentioned recommendations. Otherwise, good job!
- Pass/Fail: