Talk:Mujhse Dosti Karoge!/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 03:30, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 03:30, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
- Improve the non-free rationale for the poster with this template.
- Other than that, the infobox looks great.
- Add a comma after Rani Mukerji and "Pooja Sahani (Mukerji)".
Plot
- "Pooja, Raj and Tina" → "Pooja, Raj, and Tina"
- "attracted Tina" → "attracted to Tina"
- "with via e-mail" → "with him via e-mail"
- Add a comma after "her name".
- "despite of being" → "despite being"
- "realises" → "realizes"
- "apologise" → "apologize"
- Plot is under 700 words, so they're no problems with WP:FILMPLOT.
Cast
- Instead of citing the same source for every character, might I suggest adding a simple "Credits adapted from Bollywood Hungama.[2]" to the top of the section?
Not done Because there are source I cited from Rediff.com and Box Office India. The actor who plays young Tina does not mentioned on Bollywood Hungama, as well as Raja Vaid. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:21, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Production
- "on 1996" → "on the 1996"
- Add a comma after "Mukerji, Roshan".
- "stars in the film, because" → "star in the film because"
- "looks was the" → "looks were the"
- The reference after "Yash Raj Films" doesn't say Aditya Chopra was a producer.
- In the second paragraph, can you explain when the actors were cast?
- No sources or links mentioned that. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:37, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
- "more ... about" → "more [...] about"
Soundtrack
- "described its soundtrack" → "described its soundtrack as"
- "mixed response" → "mixed responses"
Release
- Remove the comma after "across India".
- "total grossing" → "total gross"
- Remove the comma after "(US$4.7 million)".
- "It was opened" → "It opened"
- The last sentence should be moved to #Critical_reception, which should be retitled #Reception.
Reception
- Remove the comma after "of the leads".
- "part as a" → "part as"
References
- Try archiving all sources (either manually or with this tool).
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