Talk:Matt Striker/GA1
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Reviewer: –– Jezhotwells (talk) 00:30, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
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I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.
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- Archived version used. WWE updated their website, and it seems the page was removed in the process. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 19:05, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
Checking against GA criteria
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
Teaching career: much of the information about his teaching career is repeated in the following section, Early career (2000–2005)- Removed most of it. I've left some in, in a shortened form, so it's easier to see how the two careers correspond and interlink. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 19:05, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
- Now we have While working full-time as a teacher in 2004, he continued to wrestle during his vacation time and weekends, and using sick days, and on December 16, 2004, Striker began a tour of Japan with Pro Wrestling Zero1, and was later invited back for an extended tour in early 2005. which is a sentence combining two different subjects. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 02:40, 6 June 2010 (UTC)
- Separated into 2 sentences. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 01:42, 7 June 2010 (UTC)
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'After 12 episodes, Striker announced an end to the segment citing time issues in regards to his duties as an announcer. Could this be reworked for clarity and grammar?- Reworded. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 19:05, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
Ref #52 is deadThis has been replaced with an archived version but the statement The segment ended after 12 episodes, with Striker citing a lack of time due to his new commentary position. does not appear to be supported here. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 02:40, 6 June 2010 (UTC)- I've removed the sentence. I can't find anything to support it on the 'net at this moment in time. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 01:42, 7 June 2010 (UTC)
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- Personal life: Is there no information available about place of birth, college, relationships, children, etc?
- I've haven't been able to find any. He rarely does interviews, and if he does they tend to be very kayfabe and WWE-orientated. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 19:05, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
- Hmmmm, that is a pity. But I guess if there is nothing available, we will have to leave that. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 02:40, 6 June 2010 (UTC)
- I've haven't been able to find any. He rarely does interviews, and if he does they tend to be very kayfabe and WWE-orientated. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 19:05, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
- Personal life: Is there no information available about place of birth, college, relationships, children, etc?
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Just a few issues as noted above. On hold for seven days.
- Comments above. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 02:40, 6 June 2010 (UTC)
- Responded. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 01:42, 7 June 2010 (UTC)
- Just a few issues as noted above. On hold for seven days.
- Pass/Fail:
Since Jez hasn't edited in a while, I'll read this over tonight, and if I find no further issues I'll pass it. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:46, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
- I see no further issues, so I'm passing the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 23:07, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
- I'd almost forgotten about this. Thanks so much for stepping in to finish the review Wizardman. Much appreciated. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 00:16, 22 June 2010 (UTC)