Talk:Make You Dance/GA1

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Reviewer: Ashleyyoursmile (talk · contribs) 05:44, 15 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! This has been there at the GAN page for quite some time now. I shall review it soon. --Ashleyyoursmile! 05:44, 15 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Cover art needs an alt text
• It was written by Trainor, → The song was written by Trainor,
• Anthony Rossomando and Grace Barker, and produced by Asa Welch → Anthony Rossomando and Grace Barker, while production was handled by Asa Welch
• The track was released → It was released
• Target "lead single" to itself
• from the album's deluxe version and fourth overall → from the album's deluxe version and fourth overall through Epic Records
• Any reason why the sentence on "lyrics" and "composition" is a separate paragraph?
• and encouraging the listeners to dance → and encourages the listeners to dance

• knew Wells "was the one". → knew Wells "was the one."
• You mentioned that the song is the "lead single" from the "deluxe version" in the introduction, but here you just mentioned that it appeared on the album, with no specific mention of it being the lead single? Could you clarify?
• "trapped in [her] brain and [her] thoughts". → "trapped in [her] brain and [her] thoughts."
• "I dropped this shit to make you, make you, dance". → "I dropped this shit to make you, make you, dance."
• I've been drowning in my head". → I've been drowning in my head."
• "a feel-good, quarantine banger of the highest caliber". → "a feel-good, quarantine banger of the highest caliber."

• "all in all, it's another top-shelf bop from an album brimming with dance-pop delights". → "all in all, it's another top-shelf bop from an album brimming with dance-pop delights."
• the world continues to spin ever more out of control". → the world continues to spin ever more out of control."

• I would suggest mentioning that the music video was uploaded to Trainor's YouTube channel.
• "cute" and "supremely confident". → "cute" and "supremely confident."
• finds our heroine twirling in front of a disco ball". → finds our heroine twirling in front of a disco ball."

• I would suggest changing "Digital download" to "Digital download / streaming"

• I would suggest changing the title to "Credits and personnel"
• Any specific reason why just "producer" has been targeted and not others?

• Looks great

• Copyvio score good at 18.7%.
• Ref.s 4, 8, 9, 10, 14, 15, 16 haven't been archived, but that's no way "indispensable"

• Great

• The article is definitely in good shape and well-written. After the comments are addressed, I will be happy to pass the article. --Ashleyyoursmile! 06:44, 15 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Ashleyyoursmile, thank you so much for the review! I've gone ahead and addressed everything. Sorry about Idolator though, the Wayback machine is excluding them for some reason.--NØ 07:27, 15 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• MaranoFan, no issues, I have archived the Idolator ones with archive.today. Everything looks good here. I am passing this. --Ashleyyoursmile! 10:45, 15 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]