Talk:Legacy Parkway/GA1
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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 00:00, 31 December 2013 (UTC)
I will review this article now. TCN7JM 00:00, 31 December 2013 (UTC)
- I don't think the second sentence of the route description is technically a run-on, but it's still too long, and should be split.
- Shouldn't SR-67 be abbreviated in the lead instead of first abbreviating SR-68 in the route description?
- I know this problem is caused by the inflation templates, but is there any possible way to put the cites in numeric order in the last paragraph of the history section?
Other than that everything seems fine. I will put this on hold. TCN7JM 00:16, 31 December 2013 (UTC)
- Fixed all of the above items. --AdmrBoltz 00:21, 31 December 2013 (UTC)
- Alrighty. I'll go ahead and pass the article. Nice work. TCN7JM 00:24, 31 December 2013 (UTC)