Talk:Keith Hartwig/GA1
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 19:15, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:15, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
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- I copyedited the article here.
- I archived the reference links.
- The lead says
one season in the NFL
, yet it says in the infobox that he was with the Packers in 1978. Maybe clarify. he recorded no statistics
is probably not necessary. Instead, maybe say something like "he recorded no tackles on special teams and no receptions on offense".- Ref spot checks: #4, 8, 11, 14, 20, 23, 25
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007: I re-worded the lead to fix your first issue; as for the second, tackles weren't recorded in 1977, so I don't think it'd be appropriate to change to your wording as he could have gotten a tackle, it just wasn't recorded. Any suggestions? BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:06, 21 September 2023 (UTC)
- It is fine as is. Nice work, passing! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:06, 21 September 2023 (UTC)
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