Talk:Janet McCloud
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Wiki Education assignment: HIST 121 - U.S. History since 1877
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 February 2024 and 10 May 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Weyesandromeda, Stolp.micah (article contribs). Peer reviewers: KristynStahlcker, Vicaccinoprime.
— Assignment last updated by Public-historian-90 (talk) 13:37, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
Fishing Rights Activism, Sapa Dawn Center, Yet-Si-Blue
Fishing Rights Activism: I reworked the paragraphs here to be more cohesive and have a better flow. I also edited a few grammatical mistakes and removed quotes that did not have a source or better the information of the article.
Sapa Dawn Center: I reworked the paragraphs to be more cohesive and to flow better. I also edited grammatical errors. I added some background to what the Wounded Knee Occupation was and how it connected to the Sapa Dawn Center.
Yet-Si-Blue: I reworked the paragraphs here to be more cohesive and have a better flow. I also edit grammatical errors. I added in some background information on Native American naming traditions to better explain the significance of her name. Weyesandromeda (talk) 15:24, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Introduction, Ancestry and Early Life, Resurrecting Native American Spirituality, Death
Introduction: Changed the wording to better introduce the article and improve the flow.
Ancestry and Early Life: Re-worded a few sentence for a better flow. Moved certain sentences around within the section for a more cohesive section as a whole. A few grammatical error were also fixed.
Resurrecting Native American Spirituality: In this section I re-worded, fixed some grammar errors, and condensed the first paragraph too have the section flow better. The second paragraph I added to give more context about her involvement with the women’s rights movement and social justice issues.
Death: In this section I changed some of the language in order for it to sound like the rest of the article. Grammatical errors were also fixed in this section. Stolp.micah (talk) 15:39, 29 April 2024 (UTC)