Talk:Heike Friedrich (wheelchair basketball)/GA1
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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 23:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)
Let me return you a favor by reviewing your article. Thanks for all the copy edit. This may take some days.TheQ Editor (Talk) 23:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)
Lead
- Needs to include about how Friedrich became disabled.
- Needs to include her place of birth.
- It was also runner-up - it?
Infobox
- wikilink Holger Glinicki
- Perhaps update all her medals from the Achievements section in the "Medal Record" section. (It looks like she won more than two medals)
Biography
- Might want to divide it into sections.
- Needs to include something about her coach.
- wikilink "Silver Laurel Leaf"
- by a point should be by one point
Achievements
- Wikilink the events if possible.
Awards
- Wikilink if possible.
Images
- Explain in more detail about the infobox image.
- Make the infobox image smaller maybe. (Although not necessary.) It's just taking away some space.
Other
- ref 5 is a dead link.
- You may want to look at some reviews for ref 8. The info should be okay but there may be possible malware. [1]
That's basically all what I can find. TheQ Editor (Talk) 00:22, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
- Nice, I've helped you specified the image caption, now it's a GA.