Talk:Harley J. Earl Trophy/GA1

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:39, 21 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:39, 21 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I spend some time trying to figure out if the daytona 500 winners should be merged in, since just being in the Daytona 500. After looking through examples of other notable trophies with their own articles, however, I shrugged that off, so there's no comprehension issues. Anyway, here are the issues I did find:

• Crew chief and Winston currently link to disambiguation pages. For that matter, the Winston link doesn't seem useful at all.
• "who served as the second commissioner of NASCAR, has" and has
• "a wooden trophy, approximately three feet tall," comma after trophy unneeded
• Is there a link for NASCAR's Governor's Cup?
• You could add a note about Trevor Bayne being the youngest trophy winner, though I'll leave that up to you (if you do so, finding the oldest winner for balance would be beneficial)
  • The actual contributor can do so if they would like. Since this is a option, I am not going to search for it. --Nascar1996 (talk • contribs) 03:46, 24 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    • I added both plus I took care of some other minor issues. Royalbroil 04:09, 24 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Just a few issues. I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:40, 22 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

 Working on the issues. Done --Nascar1996 (talk • contribs) 03:40, 24 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good, article passes now. Thanks for fixing that up. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:56, 24 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for abandoning this, had an extended Wikibreak and completely forgot about this one. :embarassed: Thanks! - The Bushranger _{One ping only} 23:04, 1 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]