Talk:Hannah Dodd

Hannah Dodd has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: September 4, 2015. (Reviewed version).

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A fact from Hannah Dodd appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 30 August 2012 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows: Did you know... that Grade 1b 2012 Australian Paralympic equestrian Hannah Dodd is missing four of her vertebrae? A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2012/August. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Hannah Dodd.

A better explanation than "No need to remove the nobots template while Wikipedia remains censored" is needed, for the use of {{Nobots}} on this article.

Furthermore, it seems from edits summaries that the tag was added in response to the addition of a {{Deadlink}} template, although that was added by a human, not a bot.

Accordingly, I have removed the 'Nobots' template. Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 09:07, 22 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The Bot was stopped after a long and inconclusive RfC. If I see any sign of bot activity it goes back on every article. Hawkeye7 (talk) 11:55, 22 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Which bot? The template I removed blocked all bots. And - as I noted - the template to which you apparently objected was added by a human. Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 15:05, 22 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hannah Dodd/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 08:17, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

• Not sure the nickname of the Australian national wheelchair basketball team is needed in the lead.

  Y} removed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• The lead is a little brief, you should expand it to cover each of the sections.

  Expanded. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• "She has sacral agenesis and spina bifida with upper limb dystonia,[2][3][4][5][6] " are five references really needed here?

  Y Reduced to one. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• "who ride horses" is this important? Do they do it for a job?

  YDeleted the last clause. It was only to note that horse riding runs in the family. Many people don't ride horses much these days. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• "caliper" is a dab link.

  Y corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• "As of 2012" it's now late 2015, is she still doing those things?

  Y Yes, she is. I'll update the article when something changes. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• "Because of her disability, " which particular part?

  Y Not sure. Deleted that phrase. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• Her date of birth is incorrect.

  N No, it's right. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  Not according to this. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:55, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  That's a typo. It is 27 April. Hawkeye7 (talk) 11:12, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  And this? How do you know which one is correct? The Rambling Man (talk) 11:30, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  I asked her of course. (Can you read her Facebook page?) Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:58, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  Well since two RS say otherwise, I think you need a note to explain that they are in error. And no, I can't read her Facebook page. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:13, 4 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  Added a note explaining that the APC page contains a typo. I'll ask the APC to fix the page. Hannah had John Vandenberg correct the date when we spoke with her on 20 July last year. Hawkeye7 (talk) 07:40, 4 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  I don't doubt you're right, but since we have conflicting RSs and since I noticed it, we need to address it, so thanks for doing that. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:57, 4 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• [2][4][6] again and again, is there any need for three references for each sentence?

   Done Trimmed them back. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• "She was able to ride on her own, before she learned to walk, by the time she was two years old." reorder.

  Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• Second para of the Equestrian section is very clunky with lots of very short sentences, it makes for uncomfortable reading.

  Y Yeah. Gone over it again to smooth things out a bit more. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• "After London," meh, would prefer to see "After the London Olympics" or similar.

  Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• " U25" spell it out.

  Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• "In 2015, her classification was dropped to a 2.0." unreferenced.

  Y Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• This seems to have more information that could be included (e.g. competing in England in 2006).

  Y Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• Shouldn't "Hills Shire Times" etc be in italics?

  Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• Be consistent with reference author names, either "first last" or "last, first" but not a mixture.

  Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• Why Wanganuichronicle.co.nz when Wanganui Chronicle seems to be consistent?

  Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

• Daily Telegraph needs a location as there are different publications around the world with the same title.

  Y Really? I didn't think it was that good. Disambiguated. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

A few issues so I'll put it on hold. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your review. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:51, 3 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

All good now, so I've passed it. Nice work. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:59, 4 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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