Talk:Going, Going, Gone (Grey's Anatomy)/GA1
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 05:06, 30 September 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: "people" should be viewers
- "viewed by XX million viewers" sounds redundant. It was accepted in this format for Give Peace a Chance. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 00:43, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: "18–49 demographic" could that be explained for the lede. See "Nightswimming" for an example.
- I don't think that's necessary at all per the majority of episode FAs including Give Peace a Chance and Over There (Fringe). The only places I've seen this done is at X-Files' articles or Awake. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 00:43, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- Production: Add alt to the images
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 00:43, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- Production: Twitter not a good source, replace or remove the statement
- In this case it's acceptable. Shonda Rhimes explicitly saying that they did something on a certain day on her verified Twitter is totally reliable. Last time it wasn't reliable because the twitter post wasn't explicit about it. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 00:43, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- Production: "43 minutes". Well, about it actually.
- Done. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 00:43, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- Production: "Private Practice" explain what it is more
- I think a link and character name is sufficient. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 00:43, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- Reception: "people" should be viewers
- See the above. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 00:43, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- Reception: "18–49 demographic" could that be explained for reception also. See "Nightswimming" for an example.
- See the above. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 00:43, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- Reception: "killed" to "murdered"
- The character was not in risk of being murdered. Lol, TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 00:43, 2 October 2012 (UTC)