Talk:Ghost Town (Kanye West song)/GA1
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 18:16, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
Hey Kyle Peake, I'll begin my review now. It's a larger article so it might take me a little longer. LOVI33 18:17, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
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Infobox and lead
- Not sure if psychedelic should be labelled as a genre since is refers to specifically the guitar and "sounds." LOVI33 20:12, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Background and development
- First paragraph is really long, maybe split it into a few.
Done how's that look? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Composition and lyrics
- "The track includes" → ""Ghost Town" includes"
- "Guitar is included" → "A guitar is included" OR "Guitars are included"
Done for the above --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Release and recording
- [sic] → [sic] using Template:Sic
Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Critical reception
- Looks good.
Accolades
- This could maybe be a subsection under 'Critical Reception' due it still having reviewers comments
Not done since that is two paragraphs and a table, so is enough for its own section and the comments are from the lists only --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Commercial performance
- "Freeee (Ghost Town, Pt. 2" → "Freeee (Ghost Town, Pt. 2)"
Done don't know how I made that typo --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Live performances
- Looks good.
Appearances in media
- Looks good.
Sequel
- Looks good.
Credits and personnel
- Change 'Credits' subsection to 'Personnel'
Done but should I keep the credits adapted bit though? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
Charts
- Looks good.
Certifications
- Looks good.
See also
- Looks good.
Notes
- Looks good.
References
- Copyvio score looks good at 35.9%
- refs 4 and 5: MOS:CAPS issues; or is that just how PartyNextDoor is stylized?
Not done since that is how his name is stylized --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
- ref 25, target Sheffield, Rob to Rob Sheffield
Done and fixed a few more refs up too --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
External links
- Looks good.
Final comments and verdict
On hold for now. This article is extremely well written, great job! The comments above I'm sure wont take too long. It's great reviewing your articles! LOVI33 20:12, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
- LOVI33 Have responded above, thanks a lot for the comments and I hope this becomes a GA soon. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
- Great! Thats a ✓ Pass! LOVI33 12:39, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
- LOVI33 Thanks a lot! --Kyle Peake (talk) 14:48, 7 July 2020 (UTC)