Talk:Gene Cernan/GA1
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Reviewer: Llammakey (talk · contribs) 09:55, 26 May 2017 (UTC)
Comments
- Apollo 17 should be linked at first mention in lead
- In the "Early years" section, remove the definite article before USS Roanoake per WP:SHIPS
- I would add a link to US Navy in that section.
- Link aircraft carriers
- In the "Apollo program" section, would move LM link to first mention
- overlink of Purdue University and Neil Armstrong
- Moon doesn't really need to be linked, and if you wanted to do it, at first mention
- Needs a cite on the second marriage
- Would also tidy up the references section - a lot of variation in the cites' date format, and general citation format
- No DAB links, though I've got one dead link and a couple of redirects in the references - the references really need overhauling.
- As for prose - I get a copyvio warning using the tools, though that may be due to the large quote. Will need more experienced editors to help on this one Llammakey (talk) 09:55, 26 May 2017 (UTC)
- Ok, I've sought guidance and since the copyvio warning is mainly based on the quote, I'm going to give the article a pass on that. Llammakey (talk) 12:04, 27 May 2017 (UTC)
@Llammakey: Let me know if there is anything else you want me to address. Thanks! Kees08 (Talk) 22:01, 27 May 2017 (UTC)
- Nope. That's a pass. Congrats. Llammakey (talk) 00:49, 28 May 2017 (UTC)