Talk:Fu Wuji

Fu Wuji is currently a World history good article nominee. Nominated by Kzyx (talk) at 23:22, 23 June 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer.

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• ... that Fu Wuji's Fuhou gujin zhu includes information on everything from astrological signs to the dimensions of imperial tombs?

• Reviewed:

Kzyx (talk) 21:11, 23 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Overall: The article is okay, and the hook is interesting, the source is a book source but accepted. TheNuggeteer (talk) 11:21, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Fu Wuji/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Kzyx (talk · contribs) 23:22, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Praseodymium-141 (talk · contribs) 15:32, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• There are no images - are there any available?
• The Treatise on Administrative Geography in the Book of the Later Han quotes the Dongguan Hanji as saying "in the first year of Yongxing (153), there were 3,681 xiang (鄉) and 12,443 ting (亭)". The mention of the date implies that the quotation cannot be from Fu Wuji and Huang Jing's work. Either this quotation was never part of a Treatise of Geography, or Fu Wuji's work was brought up to date from time to time. The Siku Quanshu editors, who collected fragments of the Dongguan Hanji from various sources, assigned another quotation with an even later date to the Treatise on Geography: "In the twentieth year of Jian'an (215), Hanning Commandery was reestablished." - I don't understand how this is relevant.
• There are a lot of vocabulary that are not really understandable to a casual reader: fief, terrestrial portents, tabooed.
• This article is not very long - is there any more that is known about Fu Wuji?
• Address the lead too short tag.

@Kzyx: Here are some comments to work on. ¹⁴¹Pr -_\contribs/- 07:39, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]